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The most 1 thing that catches the eye is like some kind of strong entity took pity on our Mac , why would it ? There are people much worse! 2 what was strongly pushed away so that this entity could not make a normal system ? 1 system with different talents ? why 10 systems? nonsense is shorter !
Novel is ok and the system could have been interesting but instead the novel just comes out as bland and not very interesting
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The overall ook neads more development in terms of plot but other wize pretty food.
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Its a nice read and I was enjoying it up until chapter 218. Idk if it's because of the way it was translated but it just doesn't make any sense grammatical or story wise. Will still wait until it's edited tho
I have not read the novel yet but there are 2 strong points that attracted me to it.
I really wanted to like this novel, it's well written (mechanically) but lacks depth even though it takes the story super slow, I mean chapter 20 and it's the 2nd day. Regardless of the slow pace we've learned practically nothing about the world he's in. I've already forgotten half the characters names and descriptions because they're constanly dumped on the reader. Overall, it's just boring with nothing notable happening in the first 20 chapters, in addition to extra forgettable characters.
Will read tq..... Will read tq..... Will read tq..... Will read tq.....Will read tq.....Will read tq.....Will read tq.....Will read tq.....Will read tq.....Will read tq.....Will read tq.....Will read tq.....Will read tq.....
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
It is a good novel, just not my taste. The concept is good that there are multiple systems, but just the presence of annoying girls and the way MC treats them frustrates me
Clones... hmmm that's risky . .............,.................. I hope I won't regret it ,...,......................... I hope it's not what I think it is
is there any lemon scenes in this web novel?.... btw keep up the good work author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So far good ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,..,,...............'....'.'.'.'..' lop.'.'.'..'.''.'.ll..............................'.'.'.'.......
hmm good just for the system please have a display of his status. All Ntr lovers must die
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Grammar is good..... I am going to add in library. I will pick up when there is more chapter...................................................
I hope this story is continued, I have enjoyed it immensely!! It started off very uniquely but has rolled into a very good story!! The characters are very entertaining and believable considering it is a novel set in a magic/fantasy setting.
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The most 1 thing that catches the eye is like some kind of strong entity took pity on our Mac , why would it ? There are people much worse! 2 what was strongly pushed away so that this entity could not make a normal system ? 1 system with different talents ? why 10 systems? nonsense is shorter !
Novel is ok and the system could have been interesting but instead the novel just comes out as bland and not very interesting
Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next Next
The overall ook neads more development in terms of plot but other wize pretty food.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Its a nice read and I was enjoying it up until chapter 218. Idk if it's because of the way it was translated but it just doesn't make any sense grammatical or story wise. Will still wait until it's edited tho
I have not read the novel yet but there are 2 strong points that attracted me to it.
I really wanted to like this novel, it's well written (mechanically) but lacks depth even though it takes the story super slow, I mean chapter 20 and it's the 2nd day. Regardless of the slow pace we've learned practically nothing about the world he's in. I've already forgotten half the characters names and descriptions because they're constanly dumped on the reader. Overall, it's just boring with nothing notable happening in the first 20 chapters, in addition to extra forgettable characters.
Will read tq..... Will read tq..... Will read tq..... Will read tq.....Will read tq.....Will read tq.....Will read tq.....Will read tq.....Will read tq.....Will read tq.....Will read tq.....Will read tq.....Will read tq.....
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
It is a good novel, just not my taste. The concept is good that there are multiple systems, but just the presence of annoying girls and the way MC treats them frustrates me
Clones... hmmm that's risky . .............,.................. I hope I won't regret it ,...,......................... I hope it's not what I think it is
is there any lemon scenes in this web novel?.... btw keep up the good work author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So far good ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,..,,...............'....'.'.'.'..' lop.'.'.'..'.''.'.ll..............................'.'.'.'.......
hmm good just for the system please have a display of his status. All Ntr lovers must die
Tiết lộ Spoiler keep updating Author...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Tiết lộ Spoiler i'll be back.......[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Grammar is good..... I am going to add in library. I will pick up when there is more chapter...................................................
I hope this story is continued, I have enjoyed it immensely!! It started off very uniquely but has rolled into a very good story!! The characters are very entertaining and believable considering it is a novel set in a magic/fantasy setting.