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Just another Nigerian encouraging a fellow country man ..Don't stop your work is great [img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp]
pretty good novel ............I love it .................If you are READING THIS go and finish the novel trust me you will not get dissapointed ................................................................................................................................... MESSAGE TO THE CREATER ----- very little to no information about the world is written !! work needed on this .......... ....... i have been watching this since day 1 so I can tell you as a loyal reader that you need to make the character a bit more attached to the reader *heart to heart* also if possible you can also develop more on supporting characters and their emotional attachment !! trust me it helps alottt .. also *system* is given much less importance you need to make it vast and add alot of skills (active and passive)...... make these all work and this novel's popularity will increase tremendously as it is already a pretty good novel................................................................... even if you don't I will still watch this till the end ......... best wishes and regards from my behalf :)
So far it’s a pretty fun read, I like how the author has taken his time to really flesh out the mc and his family. Usually novels don’t pay as much attention to that so it was nice to see. There are quite a few spelling errors, also the mc is incredibly stupid. I don’t understand how he is a lot more immature than the 6 year olds around him, he’s meant to be 30. Even if his soul has acclimatised to his new age he has his memories, he should have a bit more emotional intelligence.
the story is good, but at the pace, the story will take a real life football season to finish an in-story season.
MC never acts his age, he talks like a wee despite apparently being sold into slavery his previous life at a young age. when released did he go on to live a normal life? he talks like a typical 16 yr old week though. either way no one treats him like he is 5-6 as well which is just as weird.
it's really, really, really, really slow. like it been a year still story started and Mc is still the same age
Great story, but I will still recommend The Greatest Of All Time: Tales Of The Floater by Krystal George
l don't know how many years it will take but l will wait for the story to arrive when he is 17 years old or 18 years old or when he debut his career professionally. after that l will binge read all that
The story is very good, probably the best there is on the subject of football, although there is a novel that is very good, but that is not the theme, the real problem of this story, or what for me is a problem, is which develops very, very slowly, if in each game there are 3 or 4 episodes, we will never be able to see him play on a professional team, for the rest, it is very good.
I just read first few chapters and dropped it cause it was too slow paced.
The grammar is trash for a contracted novel and the dialogue is completely idiotic. The mc is in the body of a 5 year old but everyone treat him like a teenager. The worse is how his adopted mother start training him even thought mc is a malnourished 5 year old, she don't even try to leave him in the hospital to check his healt, with this you can see how much thought the author really put in the novel. Another completely thing is how every 6 year old is playing better than adults, author clearly don't made his research before this, you should know that at this age kid are developing their coordination and muscle so for the to do what is described is ridiculuos. The fic have a great premise but the execution is trash on all levels
Неизвестный африканский нигер футболист. Гавно это. хахахахахаххахахахахахахахахахаххахахахаххаххахахахаххахахахахахахахахаха хахахахахаххахахахахахахахахахаххахахахаххаххахахахаххахахахахахахахахаха
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Love the story so far, interesting main character I'm laughing half time reading it. And l also like how it balanced between his life and football.
Love this book! Few spelling errors here and there, but nothing that makes you lose train of thought. This author really doesn’t like the idea of timeskips though.
The story is well written and humorous as well, especially how it is not just centered around football or training.Love the family and friends interactions. Looking forward to more chapters.
I like the story unti now(chapter 30) the character development and background building is good and im excited for what in store for the rest except chapter 21/22/23 I do think they were necessary in anyway so I skipped them other than that the mc really frustrates me with how his inner dialogue and behavior is nothing like a five year old should be I mean I get it that he is the reincarnation of a 30 year old guy but at the beginning the author said the system synchronized His old soul with the younger one and that should have made him more like a five year old but I don’t see that happening (ok sometimes he is but almost all the time he seems like way older to me) and thats really triggering im not dropping the novel or anything i just wanted to rant about that otherwise its a good read keep it up author 👌🏽😗
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i didn't read this yet but i wanted to know if it is a normal football world or there are some kind of superhuman abilities plz tell me
Everything is good and all. But the MC is too arrogant and mentally unstable at times. The author tried too hard to make him interesting but instead made him mental. And dude he is a 30 y/old in the inside so be should be calm and mature enough but heck no he behaves like a 3 year old. He has too much overconfidence .
really nice novel cant wait for more , keep up author we need more chapter xD
I was like ooo football then I started reading and it turned to ah well if isn't Soccer.
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I love this story. but I have a request. Do you think its possible to unlock the chapters which are in Web novel. You could just post 10 or 20 more chapter on patreon and unlock all chapter on web novel
Found another sport/Football novel again, great. Read a chapter or two but I'm not really a fan of 1st person narrative so skipping this. Anyway great novel and good luck
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I'm not good at making reviews but let me tell you this it is definitely good however it is a bit slow paced and it can be annoying with so little chapter but the moment it has 100+ chapters it will be hella good the detail is deluxe and at the moment mc is a bit arrogant but i hope with more chapters he will slowly become more humble and nice outside the field but still a beast on the field good luck author good luck and you're doing a great job at making this story
honestly it's a good book ,but it seems to be focusing more on everything other than football itself ,which isn't a bad thing but just isn't my cup of tea keep up the good work👍🏽
this is the first time I read sport novel and I didn't expect it, it was so good, hope author upload 7 chapters a week, except that everything is good
Great book with a lot of potential. Please read the first volume before making conclusions as that helps build the overall plot. After that the football part starts and it started as you expected the mc is playing pro football for the first time and he makes mistake learns and keeps getting better I hope the author keeps writing the Novel since I already had a football novel ghost on me which didn't fit well. Great work
This is good. I hope you will not drop it unless you have valid reasons. We'll keep coming back every time you post, so don't worry about not having devoted readers.
Just another Nigerian encouraging a fellow country man ..Don't stop your work is great [img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp]
pretty good novel ............I love it .................If you are READING THIS go and finish the novel trust me you will not get dissapointed ................................................................................................................................... MESSAGE TO THE CREATER ----- very little to no information about the world is written !! work needed on this .......... ....... i have been watching this since day 1 so I can tell you as a loyal reader that you need to make the character a bit more attached to the reader *heart to heart* also if possible you can also develop more on supporting characters and their emotional attachment !! trust me it helps alottt .. also *system* is given much less importance you need to make it vast and add alot of skills (active and passive)...... make these all work and this novel's popularity will increase tremendously as it is already a pretty good novel................................................................... even if you don't I will still watch this till the end ......... best wishes and regards from my behalf :)
So far it’s a pretty fun read, I like how the author has taken his time to really flesh out the mc and his family. Usually novels don’t pay as much attention to that so it was nice to see. There are quite a few spelling errors, also the mc is incredibly stupid. I don’t understand how he is a lot more immature than the 6 year olds around him, he’s meant to be 30. Even if his soul has acclimatised to his new age he has his memories, he should have a bit more emotional intelligence.
the story is good, but at the pace, the story will take a real life football season to finish an in-story season.
MC never acts his age, he talks like a wee despite apparently being sold into slavery his previous life at a young age. when released did he go on to live a normal life? he talks like a typical 16 yr old week though. either way no one treats him like he is 5-6 as well which is just as weird.
it's really, really, really, really slow. like it been a year still story started and Mc is still the same age
Great story, but I will still recommend The Greatest Of All Time: Tales Of The Floater by Krystal George
l don't know how many years it will take but l will wait for the story to arrive when he is 17 years old or 18 years old or when he debut his career professionally. after that l will binge read all that
The story is very good, probably the best there is on the subject of football, although there is a novel that is very good, but that is not the theme, the real problem of this story, or what for me is a problem, is which develops very, very slowly, if in each game there are 3 or 4 episodes, we will never be able to see him play on a professional team, for the rest, it is very good.
I just read first few chapters and dropped it cause it was too slow paced.
The grammar is trash for a contracted novel and the dialogue is completely idiotic. The mc is in the body of a 5 year old but everyone treat him like a teenager. The worse is how his adopted mother start training him even thought mc is a malnourished 5 year old, she don't even try to leave him in the hospital to check his healt, with this you can see how much thought the author really put in the novel. Another completely thing is how every 6 year old is playing better than adults, author clearly don't made his research before this, you should know that at this age kid are developing their coordination and muscle so for the to do what is described is ridiculuos. The fic have a great premise but the execution is trash on all levels
Неизвестный африканский нигер футболист. Гавно это. хахахахахаххахахахахахахахахахаххахахахаххаххахахахаххахахахахахахахахаха хахахахахаххахахахахахахахахахаххахахахаххаххахахахаххахахахахахахахахаха
Tiết lộ Spoiler Love the story so far, interesting main character I'm laughing half time reading it. And l also like how it balanced between his life and football.
Love this book! Few spelling errors here and there, but nothing that makes you lose train of thought. This author really doesn’t like the idea of timeskips though.
The story is well written and humorous as well, especially how it is not just centered around football or training.Love the family and friends interactions. Looking forward to more chapters.
I like the story unti now(chapter 30) the character development and background building is good and im excited for what in store for the rest except chapter 21/22/23 I do think they were necessary in anyway so I skipped them other than that the mc really frustrates me with how his inner dialogue and behavior is nothing like a five year old should be I mean I get it that he is the reincarnation of a 30 year old guy but at the beginning the author said the system synchronized His old soul with the younger one and that should have made him more like a five year old but I don’t see that happening (ok sometimes he is but almost all the time he seems like way older to me) and thats really triggering im not dropping the novel or anything i just wanted to rant about that otherwise its a good read keep it up author 👌🏽😗
Tiết lộ Spoiler i didn't read this yet but i wanted to know if it is a normal football world or there are some kind of superhuman abilities plz tell me
Everything is good and all. But the MC is too arrogant and mentally unstable at times. The author tried too hard to make him interesting but instead made him mental. And dude he is a 30 y/old in the inside so be should be calm and mature enough but heck no he behaves like a 3 year old. He has too much overconfidence .
really nice novel cant wait for more , keep up author we need more chapter xD
I was like ooo football then I started reading and it turned to ah well if isn't Soccer.
Tiết lộ Spoiler I love this story. but I have a request. Do you think its possible to unlock the chapters which are in Web novel. You could just post 10 or 20 more chapter on patreon and unlock all chapter on web novel
Found another sport/Football novel again, great. Read a chapter or two but I'm not really a fan of 1st person narrative so skipping this. Anyway great novel and good luck
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I'm not good at making reviews but let me tell you this it is definitely good however it is a bit slow paced and it can be annoying with so little chapter but the moment it has 100+ chapters it will be hella good the detail is deluxe and at the moment mc is a bit arrogant but i hope with more chapters he will slowly become more humble and nice outside the field but still a beast on the field good luck author good luck and you're doing a great job at making this story
honestly it's a good book ,but it seems to be focusing more on everything other than football itself ,which isn't a bad thing but just isn't my cup of tea keep up the good work👍🏽
this is the first time I read sport novel and I didn't expect it, it was so good, hope author upload 7 chapters a week, except that everything is good
Great book with a lot of potential. Please read the first volume before making conclusions as that helps build the overall plot. After that the football part starts and it started as you expected the mc is playing pro football for the first time and he makes mistake learns and keeps getting better I hope the author keeps writing the Novel since I already had a football novel ghost on me which didn't fit well. Great work
This is good. I hope you will not drop it unless you have valid reasons. We'll keep coming back every time you post, so don't worry about not having devoted readers.