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hold up tho cordelia as the first female minister of magic would be so good!! i would just love the whole ordeal and the idea of her just being this feminist icon is so amazing! we love a strong female lead!
ahhhhsflglsl;sjowddfhjiokjnsmdv what's tom gonna do now that they'll be sharing dorms for a year?!?! i feel like he'll definitely exploit this to try and make lia fall for him
love how realistically you portray him but also why tom gotta be so heartless 😭 that ending tho 👀 what does he have planned for the new year?
i love how all of us just collectively went wild the second we realised that there could possibly be theo and lia as a side love angle. honestly, we really said:
that does it. we need a theo triangle! maybe even just for a bit but we need it! it would add such spice, such drama, such amazing plot points!
i love her relationship with dumbledore tho like how he treats her like his own child and takes care of her and is there for her, you know? it's he is her real father instead of Arcturus
omg love the new installment! the way lia talks to nix is so relatable lol i do that all the time with my pets, it just helps to think out loud
omggg i love where you're going with this! mad respect for the way you're writing this story! like it has action and drama and romance and is just so amazing!!
ayy tom has some competition! i love how you kickstarted this with such a bang! can't wait to read more of what you have planned for this series!
literally cannot wait to read more of this fic! it's so well written and honestly just my fav book on here because of your writing quality and plot points
dark paradise was honestly such a killer fanfic and i'm glad to know that you're continuing to write it! I think you've started off this book in a great way and honestly love how you've introduced new plot points and aspects to their story! can't wait to read more! 💓
theo and lia?? yes please! i think having a love triangle would be so spicy! and knowing you, you would make things so much fun!! and plus theo is such a sweetheart who wouldn't want him!
literally in love with the way you started this book! i was sad when dark paradise ended so now I'm so happy that it's back and you're doing a sequel! can't wait!!
yay! i loved dark paradise so much and can't wait to see what you have planned next! so glad you're continuing their story as there is so much more to know
i have always loved dark paradise and thought it was a masterpiece, now that the sequel is out i can't wait to see what you have planned next and what will happen with tomelia!
Dark Paradise was honestly the BEST Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read on here and now that Light Purgatory is out I'm expecting great things from our author!
haven't reviewed this in a while so here i am! i love how the story is going so far and the more recent chapters are just amazing! i think the way you're writing this story is so realistic and i love how cordelia isn't just some spineless mc but an amazing strong force to be reckoned with
hold up tho cordelia as the first female minister of magic would be so good!! i would just love the whole ordeal and the idea of her just being this feminist icon is so amazing! we love a strong female lead!
ahhhhsflglsl;sjowddfhjiokjnsmdv what's tom gonna do now that they'll be sharing dorms for a year?!?! i feel like he'll definitely exploit this to try and make lia fall for him
love how realistically you portray him but also why tom gotta be so heartless 😭 that ending tho 👀 what does he have planned for the new year?
i love how all of us just collectively went wild the second we realised that there could possibly be theo and lia as a side love angle. honestly, we really said:
that does it. we need a theo triangle! maybe even just for a bit but we need it! it would add such spice, such drama, such amazing plot points!
i love her relationship with dumbledore tho like how he treats her like his own child and takes care of her and is there for her, you know? it's he is her real father instead of Arcturus
omg love the new installment! the way lia talks to nix is so relatable lol i do that all the time with my pets, it just helps to think out loud
omggg i love where you're going with this! mad respect for the way you're writing this story! like it has action and drama and romance and is just so amazing!!
ayy tom has some competition! i love how you kickstarted this with such a bang! can't wait to read more of what you have planned for this series!
literally cannot wait to read more of this fic! it's so well written and honestly just my fav book on here because of your writing quality and plot points
dark paradise was honestly such a killer fanfic and i'm glad to know that you're continuing to write it! I think you've started off this book in a great way and honestly love how you've introduced new plot points and aspects to their story! can't wait to read more! 💓
theo and lia?? yes please! i think having a love triangle would be so spicy! and knowing you, you would make things so much fun!! and plus theo is such a sweetheart who wouldn't want him!
literally in love with the way you started this book! i was sad when dark paradise ended so now I'm so happy that it's back and you're doing a sequel! can't wait!!
yay! i loved dark paradise so much and can't wait to see what you have planned next! so glad you're continuing their story as there is so much more to know
i have always loved dark paradise and thought it was a masterpiece, now that the sequel is out i can't wait to see what you have planned next and what will happen with tomelia!
Dark Paradise was honestly the BEST Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read on here and now that Light Purgatory is out I'm expecting great things from our author!
haven't reviewed this in a while so here i am! i love how the story is going so far and the more recent chapters are just amazing! i think the way you're writing this story is so realistic and i love how cordelia isn't just some spineless mc but an amazing strong force to be reckoned with