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Grammar has flaws and the author should use grammarly or an editor, however the story itself makes up for it so I suppose it's an alright read.
it feels like the novel is being held back greatly by the horrible grammar and I mean greatly. the conversations are so out of touch it makes my head hurt and you don't even know the difference between what they're thinking or saying, its all just mixed up in there
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Hello GreedFox-sama here.. Although some people might think of my novel as an outlet for a stupid developer who is annoyed with a group of thieves, who arbitrarily made the Unlimited Money feature on their website. But, I will update 2 chapters every day as long as my readers provide some kind of encouragement through coll or gif power stones and other things.
Grammar has flaws and the author should use grammarly or an editor, however the story itself makes up for it so I suppose it's an alright read.