The Demonic Sect In Marvel

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ErickHenrique_BR

the only bad thing about this novel is the update speed

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No_Name_No_Life

The topic seems good but i would beter if you dont make harem bc theres like 1000 harem novel and i have seen enough to tired to see more,............

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BAD_MAN

Your idea of this story is actaully good I hope felicia is the main girl. If she's not prepare the crusade!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Woshi

Not a whole fan of systems especially when a cultivation sect background is already established, being a sect leader should be enough. Honestly a lazy way of quantifying power levels. Grammar is alright. It's readable but there are a few areas where it uses the wrong tenses. A tip for writers who don't have english as their primary language (this is also helpful for primary english writers) Read your work out loud and ask yourself if it sounds right and if you don't know refer to other stories with decent grammar. Overall not for me.

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Lol_2050

I have mixed feelings about this. It’s basically a typical wuxia edgelord mc in a ( for now ) relatively normal marvel world. And although that creates some funny interactions and is generally nice to read, if his mindset doesn’t change it would get boring. For example, he tells Felicia ( the first love interest ) to never trust anybody, never show your true feelings and emotions to someone, etc. and if he continues to act like that it wouldn’t be that much different from your typical wunxia edgelord story. Basicly, really good read for now, huge potential but could go down the train

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TheTrickster12

my only problem with the story currently is the "Harem" part of it. an interesting premise but getting slammed and rammed by the harem aspect.

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Ashwatthama

novel is good but I am dropping it because I don't want to read harem. but it was good enough for me to read it till now. so it has potential. don't drop it and best of luck 🙂 👍

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RandomReader12

I haven't read the novel yet, but the idea of a demonic cult in Marvel is actually very intriguing; I can already envision some epic moments if the novel isn't dropped, and I really hope it isn't dropped because this concept is a first.

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Tupan

This story has a new and intriguing idea, at least for me. I enjoy mcs that don’t have a problem with killing and i like the cultivating system in the marvel world. Can’t wait for more. I just wish you would update more regularly🤘

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Thaft

Great idea for a story, Author! Starting tomorrow, I'll be putting my soul stone here, hoping that this novel doesn't drop and if it goes on hiatus, there will be advance notice. Thank you!

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ANANTA

To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Assassin Suit with best material, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader.

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0Gilgamesh0

Muy buena historia pero lo malo es que no actualizado.....................................................,...........,.....................

love the evil mc and the way he disregards innocent lives, hope he does help in the new york war tho. The stability of updates is the only thing, not 5-stars since there's been no update in 8 days. Does anyone know some fanfics like this where mc uses murim/immortal cultivation in any universe?

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Anonymouse111

The story seems good, but please if your going to make a harem at least make them useful and not just from emotional and stimulational relief like most harem novels are. Have them do some of the protagonist’s bidding.

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VonBritannia

bro the premise and story is good. but the issue is the main characters personality. dudes legit a edge lord chinese protaganist who are legit the worst type of protaganists. like come on, unless your some depressed person who doesnt even know what gender he is the average person does not like this type of mc. its weird how marvel or dc fanfics the mc is always either a edgelord or mega simp. like i feel like the authors for these fics dont really have good social standing as this is not how normal people act in either extreme.

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Argent_ASNC

expected more...................................................................................................................................

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Daoist553730

Отличный фанфик. Все очень нравиться. Автору спасибо и удачи. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Yuri_is_Ntr

It's great and I like it. Even though it's have cultivation - which I hate with passion. But it's have something more that most cultivation stories lacked - fun. And that's most important. P. S. The only nitpick that I have. Mc character could really turn in unexpected direction ,when beautiful girls concerned. I do enjoy harems, so I wouldn't complain much. But still, it's could be quite forced when author have a need.

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Daoist553730

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Zero_Hadidi

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