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too much forced plot, eg. he defeated kingpin who had help from hydra, hand and Skrull but he did not kill him even knowing how vile Fisk is. and he is continuously fighting where he can kill and finish it all together.
All in all it's a solid and pretty fast story so far, the Quality is ok and the world is pretty known so there shouldn't be that much of a problem to understand what's happening. A few things that aren't really that good are the forced plot and character interaction, maybe it's because of the fast pace but there is little time for development . The over focus on the Mutants and the overall XMen story is a bit hard for me because I'm not that big of a fan and would have been more happy with the Avengers and spiderman plot as a focus.
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One Of The Best Marvel Fan fiction Ever, It Is So Well Written, Although There Are Some Plot Holes But Overall Story Is Great. Thank You So Much For This Fan fiction!!!! 🥰😘😁
Good story tho the plot is slightly forced. I know this isn't your book but can u continue the book or try to end it?[img=update]
It's a great Marvel fanfiction!! I really love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. Although the few first chapter is short, but the few last is quite long.. I also like that this story include all of marvel story, (avenger, x-men, fantastic four, guardian of galaxy, etc).. It even have multiverse journey and another timeline/future story.. I don't mind an op MC, plus Alex not strong from start, but he need many serum(enchantment), and he also have many companion who will fight with him (he's not the only one fighting and become stronger).. I like that he even create a mutant nation and be a great leader (although he get help from his companion to rule).. I also like that MC/Alex doesn't afraid to change the story (he change many thing in this story).. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great work author and translator sama 😁👍😍😍😍
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I've never read any of the marvel comics before, but just from the movies I've watch, i can still follow along pretty easily. love that the author has pictures of just about every single character in the comments where they're first mentioned!
O mundo praticamente é estagnado ha não ser quando ocorre eventos baseado nos filmes pela linha do tempo ele foca nas lutas em cada arco o legal é que ele pelo menos cria familia , o mais estranho é que é r-15
To the AUTHOR, Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE, But in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White. As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex. Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it step by step Thanks- Reader!
I don't mind about fast paced story but the story lacks of emotions and make the story feels a bit mundane. The most annoying things for me is about instead of narrating the story, the writer keep switching pov. The pov from the 'name enemy' is very unnecessary to me. The idea for the story is nice, just need to improve a lot about the writing
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30 chapters in and there is pretty much no story yet. Character hasnt been developed at all. Just randomly steals corporation research materials to give himself spidermans strength and senses with none of physical changes. First person he meets he immediately tells them all his powers and how he uses them. Tried to get into this but there is nothing here.
good story..... nothing bad to say.... gotta really appreciate the update speed and stability.... can't complain when you get to read something new so often
super short, rushed plot, author is after more chp instead of content. writing is ok. but plot itself is trash. u can try if you have not read many novels in this genre or some good books like, hyperspace transmigration, otherwise this book will just eat your brain cells
I haven't read the fanfiction yet but with the mc being the wielder of imagine breaker the mc should not have any lucky encounters and if anything could go wrong it with because the mc has no luck. imagine breakers ability is to cancel out anything supernatural natural even including luck and maybe plot amor, also the mc wont be able to use magic . so the mc should be the unluckiest person in the whole fanfic. P.S also you cant get rid of imagine breaker it picks it wielder and sticks to then even if you cut off their arm it grows back.
if you are a marvel fan who loves ff's then this is a must read for you. The mc has a good character, a family man of i must say. Even though this is a harem fic it is very well organised. In many harem ff' you forget if the particular girl was in the harem or not, but that is not the case here. personally i enjoyed reading this.
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Well worth a read its not talking but if you just want to be entertained for a bit it will do...............................................................................................
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I get that the author is just translating the book but I'm grateful as it's a great story. .
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I just want the chapters to be complie because the chapters are too short but overall this is a pretty good read if you can complie the similar chapter then it would be even better.
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Wow this is a hard read please fix the grammar. This has a lot of good things going on but the English needs to be fixed! Wow this is a hard read please fix the grammar. This has a lot of good things going on but the English needs to be fixed!
not much to comment here, overall it's good. just probably need some work on the pacing of the story. some arrangements to the events would be great, don't focus on battle
too much forced plot, eg. he defeated kingpin who had help from hydra, hand and Skrull but he did not kill him even knowing how vile Fisk is. and he is continuously fighting where he can kill and finish it all together.
All in all it's a solid and pretty fast story so far, the Quality is ok and the world is pretty known so there shouldn't be that much of a problem to understand what's happening. A few things that aren't really that good are the forced plot and character interaction, maybe it's because of the fast pace but there is little time for development . The over focus on the Mutants and the overall XMen story is a bit hard for me because I'm not that big of a fan and would have been more happy with the Avengers and spiderman plot as a focus.
Tiết lộ Spoiler One Of The Best Marvel Fan fiction Ever, It Is So Well Written, Although There Are Some Plot Holes But Overall Story Is Great. Thank You So Much For This Fan fiction!!!! 🥰😘😁
Good story tho the plot is slightly forced. I know this isn't your book but can u continue the book or try to end it?[img=update]
It's a great Marvel fanfiction!! I really love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and great english/translation.. Although the few first chapter is short, but the few last is quite long.. I also like that this story include all of marvel story, (avenger, x-men, fantastic four, guardian of galaxy, etc).. It even have multiverse journey and another timeline/future story.. I don't mind an op MC, plus Alex not strong from start, but he need many serum(enchantment), and he also have many companion who will fight with him (he's not the only one fighting and become stronger).. I like that he even create a mutant nation and be a great leader (although he get help from his companion to rule).. I also like that MC/Alex doesn't afraid to change the story (he change many thing in this story).. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great work author and translator sama 😁👍😍😍😍
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I've never read any of the marvel comics before, but just from the movies I've watch, i can still follow along pretty easily. love that the author has pictures of just about every single character in the comments where they're first mentioned!
O mundo praticamente é estagnado ha não ser quando ocorre eventos baseado nos filmes pela linha do tempo ele foca nas lutas em cada arco o legal é que ele pelo menos cria familia , o mais estranho é que é r-15
To the AUTHOR, Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE, But in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White. As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex. Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it step by step Thanks- Reader!
I don't mind about fast paced story but the story lacks of emotions and make the story feels a bit mundane. The most annoying things for me is about instead of narrating the story, the writer keep switching pov. The pov from the 'name enemy' is very unnecessary to me. The idea for the story is nice, just need to improve a lot about the writing
Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Had a great time reading it.
30 chapters in and there is pretty much no story yet. Character hasnt been developed at all. Just randomly steals corporation research materials to give himself spidermans strength and senses with none of physical changes. First person he meets he immediately tells them all his powers and how he uses them. Tried to get into this but there is nothing here.
good story..... nothing bad to say.... gotta really appreciate the update speed and stability.... can't complain when you get to read something new so often
super short, rushed plot, author is after more chp instead of content. writing is ok. but plot itself is trash. u can try if you have not read many novels in this genre or some good books like, hyperspace transmigration, otherwise this book will just eat your brain cells
I haven't read the fanfiction yet but with the mc being the wielder of imagine breaker the mc should not have any lucky encounters and if anything could go wrong it with because the mc has no luck. imagine breakers ability is to cancel out anything supernatural natural even including luck and maybe plot amor, also the mc wont be able to use magic . so the mc should be the unluckiest person in the whole fanfic. P.S also you cant get rid of imagine breaker it picks it wielder and sticks to then even if you cut off their arm it grows back.
if you are a marvel fan who loves ff's then this is a must read for you. The mc has a good character, a family man of i must say. Even though this is a harem fic it is very well organised. In many harem ff' you forget if the particular girl was in the harem or not, but that is not the case here. personally i enjoyed reading this.
well, not bad................................................................................................................................................
Well worth a read its not talking but if you just want to be entertained for a bit it will do...............................................................................................
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I get that the author is just translating the book but I'm grateful as it's a great story. .
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I just want the chapters to be complie because the chapters are too short but overall this is a pretty good read if you can complie the similar chapter then it would be even better.
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Wow this is a hard read please fix the grammar. This has a lot of good things going on but the English needs to be fixed! Wow this is a hard read please fix the grammar. This has a lot of good things going on but the English needs to be fixed!
not much to comment here, overall it's good. just probably need some work on the pacing of the story. some arrangements to the events would be great, don't focus on battle