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a story that has a lot of POTENTIAL so kindly continue the story and practice your writing so that the story won't be. .. boring. 🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟
great..........................................................................................................................................................................................
The writing is fine, the short chapters, the boring introduction with the talk with the god, just give him the system and that's it, a world full of Ocs (that a large number of readers who care nothing about their reactions because there is a finished novel of that ) it would be better to change a world like World of warcraft or others and you will not have the efforts to detail its appearance, history and personality
Pretty shameless I know. Honestly, I'm giving this 5 stars, but I don't think it is 5 stars since I'm not that good of a writer, I will try improving as the story goes.
Is this drop? And I haven't read it yet, so let's read a little .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
a story that has a lot of POTENTIAL so kindly continue the story and practice your writing so that the story won't be. .. boring. 🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟
great..........................................................................................................................................................................................
The writing is fine, the short chapters, the boring introduction with the talk with the god, just give him the system and that's it, a world full of Ocs (that a large number of readers who care nothing about their reactions because there is a finished novel of that ) it would be better to change a world like World of warcraft or others and you will not have the efforts to detail its appearance, history and personality
Pretty shameless I know. Honestly, I'm giving this 5 stars, but I don't think it is 5 stars since I'm not that good of a writer, I will try improving as the story goes.
Is this drop? And I haven't read it yet, so let's read a little .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................