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The story and way the author writes the mc is spectacular. I've noticed throughout some arcs that readers start to criticise him about them being boring. But they're wrong! You can clearly see the importance of each one as the Mc clearly has character development and see how he changes the way he deals with different scenarios. Give the novel a chance and I think you will enjoy it
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highly recommended this is one of a kind fanfic where you really appreciate the efforts he put in his work if I recall any marvel or DC fanfic or multiverse fanfiction this one is in the top list but there is just one problem and the reader who is seeing this comment don't drop from what i am saying give it a try the thing i don't get is that the author stretches the story top much and iIdont know when Mc will end up in the finale as he will go many world right now and there is marvel to end might be like mutant arc to be completed , Thanos arc , multiversal of marvel arc , Ragnarok arc, black winter arc bro EVAN I think we will die from desperation 😂😂😂
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This fanfic is clear proof that even good creations can be ruined over time. There was a time when I eagerly awaited a new chapter every two weeks. It used to be one of the best, and in the Marvel segment, it was the absolute best. But for some reason, I don't know why, you have completely disfigured the fanfic beyond recognition. Uncontrolled harems, a shift in focus to some schizophrenic nonsense, and despite the fact that chapters are now released more frequently, the fanfic has devolved into typical porn with some background events. It feels like the author has changed, or they simply realized that they can make way more money off simps and coomers than with quality writing. If this used to be a solid 5+ out of 5, now it's just an unreadable parody that barely deserves a 2, only because of its past achievements.
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Love it, absolutely love it! Just one thing i love kaina, that’s it😭😭🥹 And u know, just read it! . . . . . . . . . .love u too author!
I love this fanfic, it's really hard to find good Marvel fanfic to read. I just wish it wouldn't stop in the middle of the story and update faster. Here's five stars for you
It's been a while since I've read something worth reading and this fanfic is a rare gold. Looking forward to read more when it has more chapters.
i like everything about this fanfic the main character his powers his personality the marvel plot(i don't know how to call it) the length of the chapters, besides the female characters, like all of them and i mean all of them are like bitches in heat, and i can't take it anymore so I'm dropping it at ch57. But that said I'd recommend to read it everyone has different tastes and although up to where I've read there is no harem(which i like that there is not) i can't read something where 68%, 70% of the characters are bitches in heat. bye
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I love the MC's way of doing things, the development of the story is very detailed, everything is represented but the protagonists' remarks are too long
only on the chapter after mha, but honestly, this is one of the few fanfic that I truly believe is peak most fanfic have the mc have no character development and if so is so little it doesn't matter but this fic did character development so much better then other fics so thank you for the opportunity to read this masterpiece
Came here after the marvel rivals release to get some good marvel content since the mcu has been... meh. didn't expect to get a peak tier novel though. It took a week to catch up to the latest release (ch 97) and I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. Thank you author, for putting in all the effort and love you have for this story <3
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Dude, if you want to read a DOCTORAL THESIS in every chapter, then you're in the right place because holy shit, my book is fucking huge, every chapter the author slammed his finger on the keyboard without any mercy with his keyboard, RIP EVERY CHAPTER and without mercy and with his readers with this abysmal text that's so long. PS - THE STORY ITSELF, THE CHARACTER BUILDING AND THE WHOLE THING IS A RATING OF 10 STARS OUT OF 5 STARS. PS - AUTHOR, IN THE NEXT NOVELS, HAVE MORE MERCY ON YOUR READERS, WE JUST WANT TO SPEND TIME, NOT A WHOLE LIFE, READING EACH CHAPTER, OK?
Brasileiro aqui mandou muito bem gostei muito lança mais ai pra nois espero que você não se importe com as criticas do outro pois estou fascinado na história 😆😆😀😀😲
An excellent wish fulfillment story. The writing is good, managing to convey well enough the correct feelings for the situations, the gacha system is cool and gives good things (no exaggeration) to the MC, and the MC is one of the few protagonists of this type of story who is really smart without becoming a psychopath Edgy or Chinese protagonist, he is a good Guy in general. I confess that I was a little wary about the boku no hero arc or him getting powers from there, but it was a good, short arc, yielded a romantic development and also a cool character for the MC.
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very good story like it a lot what i would like is some more powerful summons or assimilation instead of doing superman you could do a viltrumite and you do choose characters like Daniel park from lookism as well as grid from overgeared as well as obtaining the nano machine from the novel nano machine. Just so ides for potential future chapters.
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bro I think you should see redakai cartoon there something you can get for gacha
I really love this story and its world-building the only problem I have with it is the bipolar MC. he constantly switches from be and angsty edge lord where only he can handle problems and it up to him to make the big decisions, to someone with an actual personality and is likable, makes jokes and want to spend time with his love ones, then he goes back to being the loner edge lord.
This is the best book I've ever read in my life. And I also have a very specific question as a fan of MLP, I wonder if Hector gets any alicorns in gacha, he will assimilate right? And will he get a cutie mark? What will it look like?
now i remember why i dropped this.The insufferable angsty nonsensical monologues with references to comics and the cartoonish sense of justice, morality, meaning, value that is constantly brought up with a serious tone as if they are profoundly mysterious truths.....
The only grip I have is that the grammar is immersion breaking. Also the random Portuguese(or is it spanish?) here and there is confusing. Perhaps, putting the story in a Grammar Checker will fix all those problems.
It was a really good story until the power hungry immoral psychopath arc started. Also some very backwards values are espoused by the author through the character that are kind of abhorrent.
The story and way the author writes the mc is spectacular. I've noticed throughout some arcs that readers start to criticise him about them being boring. But they're wrong! You can clearly see the importance of each one as the Mc clearly has character development and see how he changes the way he deals with different scenarios. Give the novel a chance and I think you will enjoy it
best original story on the site period [img=update][img=update][img=update]
highly recommended this is one of a kind fanfic where you really appreciate the efforts he put in his work if I recall any marvel or DC fanfic or multiverse fanfiction this one is in the top list but there is just one problem and the reader who is seeing this comment don't drop from what i am saying give it a try the thing i don't get is that the author stretches the story top much and iIdont know when Mc will end up in the finale as he will go many world right now and there is marvel to end might be like mutant arc to be completed , Thanos arc , multiversal of marvel arc , Ragnarok arc, black winter arc bro EVAN I think we will die from desperation 😂😂😂
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This fanfic is clear proof that even good creations can be ruined over time. There was a time when I eagerly awaited a new chapter every two weeks. It used to be one of the best, and in the Marvel segment, it was the absolute best. But for some reason, I don't know why, you have completely disfigured the fanfic beyond recognition. Uncontrolled harems, a shift in focus to some schizophrenic nonsense, and despite the fact that chapters are now released more frequently, the fanfic has devolved into typical porn with some background events. It feels like the author has changed, or they simply realized that they can make way more money off simps and coomers than with quality writing. If this used to be a solid 5+ out of 5, now it's just an unreadable parody that barely deserves a 2, only because of its past achievements.
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Love it, absolutely love it! Just one thing i love kaina, that’s it😭😭🥹 And u know, just read it! . . . . . . . . . .love u too author!
I love this fanfic, it's really hard to find good Marvel fanfic to read. I just wish it wouldn't stop in the middle of the story and update faster. Here's five stars for you
It's been a while since I've read something worth reading and this fanfic is a rare gold. Looking forward to read more when it has more chapters.
i like everything about this fanfic the main character his powers his personality the marvel plot(i don't know how to call it) the length of the chapters, besides the female characters, like all of them and i mean all of them are like bitches in heat, and i can't take it anymore so I'm dropping it at ch57. But that said I'd recommend to read it everyone has different tastes and although up to where I've read there is no harem(which i like that there is not) i can't read something where 68%, 70% of the characters are bitches in heat. bye
Perfeito ................................................................................................................................................................................................
I love the MC's way of doing things, the development of the story is very detailed, everything is represented but the protagonists' remarks are too long
only on the chapter after mha, but honestly, this is one of the few fanfic that I truly believe is peak most fanfic have the mc have no character development and if so is so little it doesn't matter but this fic did character development so much better then other fics so thank you for the opportunity to read this masterpiece
Came here after the marvel rivals release to get some good marvel content since the mcu has been... meh. didn't expect to get a peak tier novel though. It took a week to catch up to the latest release (ch 97) and I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. Thank you author, for putting in all the effort and love you have for this story <3
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Dude, if you want to read a DOCTORAL THESIS in every chapter, then you're in the right place because holy shit, my book is fucking huge, every chapter the author slammed his finger on the keyboard without any mercy with his keyboard, RIP EVERY CHAPTER and without mercy and with his readers with this abysmal text that's so long. PS - THE STORY ITSELF, THE CHARACTER BUILDING AND THE WHOLE THING IS A RATING OF 10 STARS OUT OF 5 STARS. PS - AUTHOR, IN THE NEXT NOVELS, HAVE MORE MERCY ON YOUR READERS, WE JUST WANT TO SPEND TIME, NOT A WHOLE LIFE, READING EACH CHAPTER, OK?
Brasileiro aqui mandou muito bem gostei muito lança mais ai pra nois espero que você não se importe com as criticas do outro pois estou fascinado na história 😆😆😀😀😲
An excellent wish fulfillment story. The writing is good, managing to convey well enough the correct feelings for the situations, the gacha system is cool and gives good things (no exaggeration) to the MC, and the MC is one of the few protagonists of this type of story who is really smart without becoming a psychopath Edgy or Chinese protagonist, he is a good Guy in general. I confess that I was a little wary about the boku no hero arc or him getting powers from there, but it was a good, short arc, yielded a romantic development and also a cool character for the MC.
Tiết lộ Spoiler very good story like it a lot what i would like is some more powerful summons or assimilation instead of doing superman you could do a viltrumite and you do choose characters like Daniel park from lookism as well as grid from overgeared as well as obtaining the nano machine from the novel nano machine. Just so ides for potential future chapters.
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bro I think you should see redakai cartoon there something you can get for gacha
I really love this story and its world-building the only problem I have with it is the bipolar MC. he constantly switches from be and angsty edge lord where only he can handle problems and it up to him to make the big decisions, to someone with an actual personality and is likable, makes jokes and want to spend time with his love ones, then he goes back to being the loner edge lord.
This is the best book I've ever read in my life. And I also have a very specific question as a fan of MLP, I wonder if Hector gets any alicorns in gacha, he will assimilate right? And will he get a cutie mark? What will it look like?
now i remember why i dropped this.The insufferable angsty nonsensical monologues with references to comics and the cartoonish sense of justice, morality, meaning, value that is constantly brought up with a serious tone as if they are profoundly mysterious truths.....
The only grip I have is that the grammar is immersion breaking. Also the random Portuguese(or is it spanish?) here and there is confusing. Perhaps, putting the story in a Grammar Checker will fix all those problems.
It was a really good story until the power hungry immoral psychopath arc started. Also some very backwards values are espoused by the author through the character that are kind of abhorrent.