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IT is what one would expect from an Author who writes a SYSTEM story. Very over the top and cringe dual spirits and everyone is just gushing over the MC. Boring story.
I am not gonna lie. I read until chapter 40 so I think I can give some good review. Firstly, this is a MTL "kind of corrected" to be more readable. It is good for me, maybe because English ins not my 1st language. I repeat, the edit is really good, really better than the bloody eye maker of MTL. The MC is an reincarnated old pervert. Yeah, he is that. So, pay attention if you don't like that. He is a pervert that looks for beauties while cultivating to the top. This is a Chinese Novel so expect some cliches. Finally, this is, for the moment, a easy paced novel. So no drama, just chilling in Soul Land world. That was I was looking so I am good with it. 👍👍👍
Worth your time to read!! Amazing concept with a system that doesn’t control his life. The chracter of MC is well made with smarts, some scheming, and much more. Romance and harem, but not a pokemon catch them all type of harem. The grammar is also good and can tell it isn’t some MTL translation and flows smoothly. Overall, excited to see where the author takes this story and ecited to see more updates!
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This is an amazing fanfic. It has great Grammer for a translation, and I'm normally very picky with the Grammer. I hope that the translator and the original author continue with the ebook.
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I love it, thanks man for properly translating this novel for us. I have once read the first 10 chapters on Mtl and I outright quit afterward because it was impossible to read. Nevertheless, it has a unique Idea behind it. Not unique as....nobody has ever done this before, but it's still highly enjoyable if you like this kind of Op-Mc. Also, while I can still see some minor Grammar errors....but, who cares...for real. Also, I am not a native speaker either. Anyway, thanks for doing this, it's highly appreciated.
This is a drill. What else can I say other than it being than it gooooood. 555555555 544444445 543333345 543222345 543212345 543222345 543333345 544444445 555tt55555
hello everyone if you like Chat Group fanfiction then go read douluo with multiverse Villain ChatGroup
Like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like like...... And please update
IT is what one would expect from an Author who writes a SYSTEM story. Very over the top and cringe dual spirits and everyone is just gushing over the MC. Boring story.
I am not gonna lie. I read until chapter 40 so I think I can give some good review. Firstly, this is a MTL "kind of corrected" to be more readable. It is good for me, maybe because English ins not my 1st language. I repeat, the edit is really good, really better than the bloody eye maker of MTL. The MC is an reincarnated old pervert. Yeah, he is that. So, pay attention if you don't like that. He is a pervert that looks for beauties while cultivating to the top. This is a Chinese Novel so expect some cliches. Finally, this is, for the moment, a easy paced novel. So no drama, just chilling in Soul Land world. That was I was looking so I am good with it. 👍👍👍
Worth your time to read!! Amazing concept with a system that doesn’t control his life. The chracter of MC is well made with smarts, some scheming, and much more. Romance and harem, but not a pokemon catch them all type of harem. The grammar is also good and can tell it isn’t some MTL translation and flows smoothly. Overall, excited to see where the author takes this story and ecited to see more updates!
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This is an amazing fanfic. It has great Grammer for a translation, and I'm normally very picky with the Grammer. I hope that the translator and the original author continue with the ebook.
pretty good .......,..................................................,...............................,......................................................
I love it, thanks man for properly translating this novel for us. I have once read the first 10 chapters on Mtl and I outright quit afterward because it was impossible to read. Nevertheless, it has a unique Idea behind it. Not unique as....nobody has ever done this before, but it's still highly enjoyable if you like this kind of Op-Mc. Also, while I can still see some minor Grammar errors....but, who cares...for real. Also, I am not a native speaker either. Anyway, thanks for doing this, it's highly appreciated.
This is a drill. What else can I say other than it being than it gooooood. 555555555 544444445 543333345 543222345 543212345 543222345 543333345 544444445 555tt55555
hello everyone if you like Chat Group fanfiction then go read douluo with multiverse Villain ChatGroup