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Viết đánh giáAbsolute MASTERPIECE!! Shame there are no more updates. A masterclass story! Please bring new chapters, not something the world should miss out on!
yo, author. please update this fanfic and the spider-man fanfic. come on. what the hell dude. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
Just started this and am already at chapter 100. The concept sucked me in right away. The author does a great job building characters, referencing canon material, keeping a steady pace, and even battle choreography is well done. All in all a great job so far. Keep it up!
Extremely pathetic MC, with an horrible scale of power. Everything about him is special, he has the best masters, and yet he lost against an npc girl (the same girl lost months ago to the MC best friend, another npc). Also the pacing is horrible.
A good amount of attention to detail in the story, and the universe that the story is in, and entertaining for a read. In the high points of the story, I indeed enjoyed reading it. Although this story does also have its downsides. And I started to enjoy it less as I read on. The romance doesn't really feel earned and feels like it just kinda happens. When the story splits off to talk about the side characters, it is sometimes rather uninteresting. And the MC's plans always work out, he's never had any real setbacks this entire time. Things just always work out for him even after 130 chapters in. Which doesn't really make sense with how intelligent Sidious is. Only after SEVERAL massive setbacks to his plans does Sidious finally think: "Hmm, I'm being targeted!"
Best star wars story here. ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................
As a fellow Author of Star Wars fanfictions, I can understand the plights of particularly nasty readers. While I've only read a few chapters, I can say with certainty that it's a decent story. However, you've made one critical mistake, ArifuretaForever. You've made a fanfiction in the Skywalker Era! The two fanfictions of Star Wars I've written are nowhere close to the Skywalker Saga/Era. The reason is that it's a hot garbage convoluted mess. The only person I've seen do a reincarnation fanfic successfully of this Era is A New Player In The Force, Created by USSExplorer. While my rating may be a little low for this story, it's only because it seems rushed. And a misconception about writing in the Star Wars Universe is making leaps in time and power with your main character. Character power improvement is important, but the journey to that power is where the story lies. What I've seen so far in the beginning is very lack luster in what I'd call progressive story telling. The beginning of any story is its foundation. After all, Star Wars has always been and will always be. A story told a long time ago in a galaxy far, far away. Take your time with it. If you can apply that realization to your Star Wars fanfiction, you'll find everything you're missing.
This is a perfect novel about star wars, love every chapter because it's well written, has a good pace and frequent chapters. I ask everyone who stumbles here to give it a try, you will not regret it
Unification high gun Gordon give high inch indigo Irish Igor idk HD had it kid off nd of it I’d of if if it he hurt I’d he had if is if off of ID of ok on IV in in in un in un yb tv text run tho think this bug
to much of the same trops as A New Player In The Force By: USSExplorer many idea or situations are the same
It’s good so far the story is pretty intresting and realistic. Van is kinda op but well see if it chances. What i’m intrested in is sidius and the clone wars and how far from the story it is gonna chance
Tiết lộ SpoilerI really enjoyed reading this to the point where I stayed up to 3:00 am when I knew I needed to get up at 5 for work.
Absolute MASTERPIECE!! Shame there are no more updates. A masterclass story! Please bring new chapters, not something the world should miss out on!
yo, author. please update this fanfic and the spider-man fanfic. come on. what the hell dude. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
Just started this and am already at chapter 100. The concept sucked me in right away. The author does a great job building characters, referencing canon material, keeping a steady pace, and even battle choreography is well done. All in all a great job so far. Keep it up!
Extremely pathetic MC, with an horrible scale of power. Everything about him is special, he has the best masters, and yet he lost against an npc girl (the same girl lost months ago to the MC best friend, another npc). Also the pacing is horrible.
A good amount of attention to detail in the story, and the universe that the story is in, and entertaining for a read. In the high points of the story, I indeed enjoyed reading it. Although this story does also have its downsides. And I started to enjoy it less as I read on. The romance doesn't really feel earned and feels like it just kinda happens. When the story splits off to talk about the side characters, it is sometimes rather uninteresting. And the MC's plans always work out, he's never had any real setbacks this entire time. Things just always work out for him even after 130 chapters in. Which doesn't really make sense with how intelligent Sidious is. Only after SEVERAL massive setbacks to his plans does Sidious finally think: "Hmm, I'm being targeted!"
Best star wars story here. ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................
As a fellow Author of Star Wars fanfictions, I can understand the plights of particularly nasty readers. While I've only read a few chapters, I can say with certainty that it's a decent story. However, you've made one critical mistake, ArifuretaForever. You've made a fanfiction in the Skywalker Era! The two fanfictions of Star Wars I've written are nowhere close to the Skywalker Saga/Era. The reason is that it's a hot garbage convoluted mess. The only person I've seen do a reincarnation fanfic successfully of this Era is A New Player In The Force, Created by USSExplorer. While my rating may be a little low for this story, it's only because it seems rushed. And a misconception about writing in the Star Wars Universe is making leaps in time and power with your main character. Character power improvement is important, but the journey to that power is where the story lies. What I've seen so far in the beginning is very lack luster in what I'd call progressive story telling. The beginning of any story is its foundation. After all, Star Wars has always been and will always be. A story told a long time ago in a galaxy far, far away. Take your time with it. If you can apply that realization to your Star Wars fanfiction, you'll find everything you're missing.
This is a perfect novel about star wars, love every chapter because it's well written, has a good pace and frequent chapters. I ask everyone who stumbles here to give it a try, you will not regret it
Unification high gun Gordon give high inch indigo Irish Igor idk HD had it kid off nd of it I’d of if if it he hurt I’d he had if is if off of ID of ok on IV in in in un in un yb tv text run tho think this bug
to much of the same trops as A New Player In The Force By: USSExplorer many idea or situations are the same
It’s good so far the story is pretty intresting and realistic. Van is kinda op but well see if it chances. What i’m intrested in is sidius and the clone wars and how far from the story it is gonna chance
Tiết lộ SpoilerI really enjoyed reading this to the point where I stayed up to 3:00 am when I knew I needed to get up at 5 for work.
I wish this would get picked back up! so much more story to unfold.