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The story is okay, grammar makes it hard to read Updates are pretty much nonexistence Stories all over the place too many crossovers in this 1 ff Characters are nothing like how they are in shows, its an ff what would you expect World background is bad added to many crossovers and that's only on chapter 1
well.... I have nothing to complain about, just to give the author some support -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
It could be better, but it's not bad ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
So far the story is ok ................................................................................................................................
you said "I have to make sure the plot doesn't kill me, I'm sorry Stefan, but I'm going to have to steal your girl and I'm going to make Bennett witch my ally" then said "brides Finn x Jenna x Sage" so is Elena or Caroline (Stefan girls) gonna be in harem i hope so
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The story is okay, grammar makes it hard to read Updates are pretty much nonexistence Stories all over the place too many crossovers in this 1 ff Characters are nothing like how they are in shows, its an ff what would you expect World background is bad added to many crossovers and that's only on chapter 1
well.... I have nothing to complain about, just to give the author some support -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
It could be better, but it's not bad ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
So far the story is ok ................................................................................................................................
you said "I have to make sure the plot doesn't kill me, I'm sorry Stefan, but I'm going to have to steal your girl and I'm going to make Bennett witch my ally" then said "brides Finn x Jenna x Sage" so is Elena or Caroline (Stefan girls) gonna be in harem i hope so
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