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Oh hello! I'm just a guy who is bored. I basically created this fanfic on the spot without any future plot, so sorry if I upload very late. Peace😁
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Hey Bro! Honestly, I hope you can provide consistent updates! I know this novel is wishfulfillment, but I love this novel! You know, I just found a few novels with Utaha as the first heroine, and there's even Twin 5 from the go-toubun. And, a suggestion, add enemies that at least give the MC a little trouble. If you want to go on hiatus, better give some note!
Es muy bien fanfic para ser una agrupación de varios animas está bien por lo menos es mejor que muchos otros que han intentado lo mismo y como se ve trata las relaciones poco a poco para hacer más entretenida la historia es cierto que la parte de integrar los poderes no se siente demasiado bien pero es pasable y es bueno que no hallas hecho que el sistema pareciera una típica máquina con emociones descontroladas que para eso estan los personajes de la serie
Mc is very OP but Mc is beta , pathetic and cuckold man. The main problem is the main character, their decisions are stupid and the sentences they say are embarrassing. So if you want to read about a pathetic and at the same time omnipotent protagonist; read the history.
I expected this story to be bad but I didn't know that it would be this bad. The story was all over the place, it's just a story where the Author slaps in a new arc of anime characters and hope they work out with the flow.
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A wish fulfillment story that could be much better if there was some semblance of order to the plot, instead of surprising you with an unexpected direction, the plot disappears and then 500 years have passed (just exaggerating) and a new story line begins, I tried to follow the story, but I give up, characters aren't properly introduced, storylines aren't properly introduced or separated and the supernatural elements are completely random.
Author has no idea of what timing in a story is, at the end of one chapter we see the mc and his girlfriend preparing for a date and the next there is a wuxia type young master threatening the girls family so that he can have her. Mc Is cringe, arrogant and ungrateful. other than that the only complaints i have is with the low quality grammar and unstable update stability
it was good Until Fooking Creature named lin yuan come up so yeah trashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrash trashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrash
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An interesting job, even if the girl is too accessible at the very beginning, but it's not for me to judge. This story is quite interesting, I will be happy to wait for the continuation, as well as the author with inspiration for you!
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good story, very similar to akikan's novel, i like harem so i like this. Grammar could improve tho, definitely quite a few mistakes, but it's not SO bad to the point you don't know what the sentence is saying
It's good enough, to pass time. But if you're looking for a plot, then this is not for you. It's just a mix of cliche of different fanfics in webnovel, nothing more.
this is like wsih fulfillment the plot is force pretty sure he is going to collect girls like pokemons and also the relationship is super fast i mean real fast
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Great story and has a lot of potential. Pls continue updating and i hope mc can become a pro in basketball and trash all the miracles cause it’s cool😎 Keep up the good work!
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I love it feels like it has a nice blend with characters and the world has pretty nice pacing just hope it doesnt flop its updating and story telling
Oh hello! I'm just a guy who is bored. I basically created this fanfic on the spot without any future plot, so sorry if I upload very late. Peace😁
Thanks broo💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅💅👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻🗿🗿🗿🗿😏🗿😏😏😏😏🐸🐸🐸🐸🐸😎😎😎😎😎😎👆👆👆👆👆😅😅😅😅👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙆🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🗿🗿🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Hey Bro! Honestly, I hope you can provide consistent updates! I know this novel is wishfulfillment, but I love this novel! You know, I just found a few novels with Utaha as the first heroine, and there's even Twin 5 from the go-toubun. And, a suggestion, add enemies that at least give the MC a little trouble. If you want to go on hiatus, better give some note!
Es muy bien fanfic para ser una agrupación de varios animas está bien por lo menos es mejor que muchos otros que han intentado lo mismo y como se ve trata las relaciones poco a poco para hacer más entretenida la historia es cierto que la parte de integrar los poderes no se siente demasiado bien pero es pasable y es bueno que no hallas hecho que el sistema pareciera una típica máquina con emociones descontroladas que para eso estan los personajes de la serie
Mc is very OP but Mc is beta , pathetic and cuckold man. The main problem is the main character, their decisions are stupid and the sentences they say are embarrassing. So if you want to read about a pathetic and at the same time omnipotent protagonist; read the history.
I expected this story to be bad but I didn't know that it would be this bad. The story was all over the place, it's just a story where the Author slaps in a new arc of anime characters and hope they work out with the flow.
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Muy buena la historia sigues así me encanta 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
A wish fulfillment story that could be much better if there was some semblance of order to the plot, instead of surprising you with an unexpected direction, the plot disappears and then 500 years have passed (just exaggerating) and a new story line begins, I tried to follow the story, but I give up, characters aren't properly introduced, storylines aren't properly introduced or separated and the supernatural elements are completely random.
Author has no idea of what timing in a story is, at the end of one chapter we see the mc and his girlfriend preparing for a date and the next there is a wuxia type young master threatening the girls family so that he can have her. Mc Is cringe, arrogant and ungrateful. other than that the only complaints i have is with the low quality grammar and unstable update stability
it was good Until Fooking Creature named lin yuan come up so yeah trashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrash trashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrashtrash
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An interesting job, even if the girl is too accessible at the very beginning, but it's not for me to judge. This story is quite interesting, I will be happy to wait for the continuation, as well as the author with inspiration for you!
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
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good story, very similar to akikan's novel, i like harem so i like this. Grammar could improve tho, definitely quite a few mistakes, but it's not SO bad to the point you don't know what the sentence is saying
It's good enough, to pass time. But if you're looking for a plot, then this is not for you. It's just a mix of cliche of different fanfics in webnovel, nothing more.
this is like wsih fulfillment the plot is force pretty sure he is going to collect girls like pokemons and also the relationship is super fast i mean real fast
I'm lovin 'it..♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😇😇😇🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍..........................
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Great story and has a lot of potential. Pls continue updating and i hope mc can become a pro in basketball and trash all the miracles cause it’s cool😎 Keep up the good work!
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I love it feels like it has a nice blend with characters and the world has pretty nice pacing just hope it doesnt flop its updating and story telling