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Si harem tiene un heiter yo no soy, si harem tiene un dios yo soy el, etc. Si harem tiene un heiter yo no soy, si harem tiene un dios yo soy el, etc. Si harem tiene un heiter yo no soy, si harem tiene un dios yo soy el, etc. Si harem tiene un heiter yo no soy, si harem tiene un dios yo soy el, etc. Si harem tiene un heiter yo no soy, si harem tiene un dios yo soy el, etc.
Los primeros capitulos son un poco lentos y pesados, ya que son de los cambios que hace a YGGDRASIL, pero despues mejora, ya que el autor quiere no solo hacer el POV del MC sino tambien del resto de personaje que participa en ella. El MC puede parecer OP desde el principio, pero no se trata solo del MCU sino de una combinacion con varios universos de los comics tambien.
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I don't know if it gets better after chapter 12, but I didn't like it, there's a lot of information................................... ......................
The grammar and spelling is like reading word salad, save yourself some time if you do decide to read this, read chapter 1-7 then skip to chapter 12, all 5 of those chapters are infodumps, and badly written ones at that, I can only hope the Author gets an editor to make sense of this as I do believe there is a good story behind the mess.
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
Ini cerita yang menarik dan saya suka alur ceritanya.. Apalagi jika MC menjadi villain yang tidak naif dan sangat over power seperti itu... Saya suka pokoknya.. Lanjutkan author.. Saya dukung karya anda
Amezing such a great novrl well made very detaild i am very good reader i read very hard its such a goods novel i an in nlove of this novel 🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌
finally an overlord fanfic with lemons now it's time to add this to my collection also adding marvel as well is an interesting choice also xpxpxpxpxpxpxpxp
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Los rellenos no son necesarios. La gramática necesita ayuda masiva. El ritmo de la historia necesita ayuda. La historia en sí necesita ayuda. Las escenas +18 necesitan ayuda El autor necesita ayuda. El Mc necesita ayuda.
Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Plot is straight forward, but the writing quality if hands down horrendous. I've read up till chap 25 and I can't keep on reading anymore as the grammar is non-existent, and the "my dears" in every sentence the MC says that it becomes sickening. In addition to this, the plot does not really have much going on for it. It is a good idea - overlord x marvel, but they guy is literally moving on from A - B with nothing really going on. It's just a OP dude who is getting a Harem. Although I said all this, don't let it stop you from reading this FF, that is if u can handle the grammatical errors.
Must Read !! This Story Has A Good Plot + A Good Character Development 👏 And Great Fan Services Too Hats off to The AUTHOR !! GREAT WORK 🙂👍🎉
The concept is good, but the grammar almost kill my one and only brain cell. This whole novel is a total grammar mess. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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The story has good concept and I find if pretty interesting, but I've dropped it because of the writing quality. The writing quality is a true Trash.
Muito bom espero o próximo capítulo continua essa obra maravilhoso a historia ta incrivel 👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Dunno. I liked the first chapter. The following 12 were a huge mess though. I also feel like the average 7th grader could use better English (im not from an English speaking country). Overall i think this is only a good read for: - someone realy realy realy desperate for Overlord content - someone who's English is absolutly terroble to the point that it doesn't bother him much and is willing to deal with 12 Chapters of 2 parapgraph new character introductions and similar info dumb
Muito bom historia muito bem feita e explicativa espero o próximo capítulo continua essa obra maravilhosa parabéns 👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
It has really good plot and characters. The only that ruins is the grammar, otherwise it's a good story. also try using grammarly for writing.
The fillers are not needed. The grammar needs massive help. The pace of the story needs help. The story itself needs help. The +18 scenes needs help The author needs help. The Mc needs help.
Haces un buen trabajo por ahora, aunque el relleno era aparte, después todo bien, sigue así.😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
so much info dump and useless word , .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
first 11 chapters are all filler 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️
If Harem has a million Haters, I am one of them . If Harem has ten Haters, I am one of them. If Harem have only one Hater, then that Hater is me. If Harem has no Haters, that means that I am no longer alive. If the entire world accepts Harems, I am against the world. Till my Last Breath, I'll hate Harems
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the writing is really messy and english is also really bad but not unreadable... Its very vauge and I feel like I am reading a summary instead of a story... But the Author manage to keep me intrested and also make me give him five....Everything it lacked made up for its intresting characters and scenarios.... Good luck and I hope you find yourself an Editor so this can get 100 times better... Love the book please don't drop...
Si harem tiene un heiter yo no soy, si harem tiene un dios yo soy el, etc. Si harem tiene un heiter yo no soy, si harem tiene un dios yo soy el, etc. Si harem tiene un heiter yo no soy, si harem tiene un dios yo soy el, etc. Si harem tiene un heiter yo no soy, si harem tiene un dios yo soy el, etc. Si harem tiene un heiter yo no soy, si harem tiene un dios yo soy el, etc.
Los primeros capitulos son un poco lentos y pesados, ya que son de los cambios que hace a YGGDRASIL, pero despues mejora, ya que el autor quiere no solo hacer el POV del MC sino tambien del resto de personaje que participa en ella. El MC puede parecer OP desde el principio, pero no se trata solo del MCU sino de una combinacion con varios universos de los comics tambien.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Good!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I don't know if it gets better after chapter 12, but I didn't like it, there's a lot of information................................... ......................
The grammar and spelling is like reading word salad, save yourself some time if you do decide to read this, read chapter 1-7 then skip to chapter 12, all 5 of those chapters are infodumps, and badly written ones at that, I can only hope the Author gets an editor to make sense of this as I do believe there is a good story behind the mess.
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
Ini cerita yang menarik dan saya suka alur ceritanya.. Apalagi jika MC menjadi villain yang tidak naif dan sangat over power seperti itu... Saya suka pokoknya.. Lanjutkan author.. Saya dukung karya anda
Amezing such a great novrl well made very detaild i am very good reader i read very hard its such a goods novel i an in nlove of this novel 🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌
finally an overlord fanfic with lemons now it's time to add this to my collection also adding marvel as well is an interesting choice also xpxpxpxpxpxpxpxp
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Los rellenos no son necesarios. La gramática necesita ayuda masiva. El ritmo de la historia necesita ayuda. La historia en sí necesita ayuda. Las escenas +18 necesitan ayuda El autor necesita ayuda. El Mc necesita ayuda.
Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Five star for Harem ! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Plot is straight forward, but the writing quality if hands down horrendous. I've read up till chap 25 and I can't keep on reading anymore as the grammar is non-existent, and the "my dears" in every sentence the MC says that it becomes sickening. In addition to this, the plot does not really have much going on for it. It is a good idea - overlord x marvel, but they guy is literally moving on from A - B with nothing really going on. It's just a OP dude who is getting a Harem. Although I said all this, don't let it stop you from reading this FF, that is if u can handle the grammatical errors.
Must Read !! This Story Has A Good Plot + A Good Character Development 👏 And Great Fan Services Too Hats off to The AUTHOR !! GREAT WORK 🙂👍🎉
The concept is good, but the grammar almost kill my one and only brain cell. This whole novel is a total grammar mess. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
. .. . .. . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
The story has good concept and I find if pretty interesting, but I've dropped it because of the writing quality. The writing quality is a true Trash.
Muito bom espero o próximo capítulo continua essa obra maravilhoso a historia ta incrivel 👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Dunno. I liked the first chapter. The following 12 were a huge mess though. I also feel like the average 7th grader could use better English (im not from an English speaking country). Overall i think this is only a good read for: - someone realy realy realy desperate for Overlord content - someone who's English is absolutly terroble to the point that it doesn't bother him much and is willing to deal with 12 Chapters of 2 parapgraph new character introductions and similar info dumb
Muito bom historia muito bem feita e explicativa espero o próximo capítulo continua essa obra maravilhosa parabéns 👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
It has really good plot and characters. The only that ruins is the grammar, otherwise it's a good story. also try using grammarly for writing.
The fillers are not needed. The grammar needs massive help. The pace of the story needs help. The story itself needs help. The +18 scenes needs help The author needs help. The Mc needs help.
Haces un buen trabajo por ahora, aunque el relleno era aparte, después todo bien, sigue así.😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
so much info dump and useless word , .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
first 11 chapters are all filler 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️🤦🏼♂️
If Harem has a million Haters, I am one of them . If Harem has ten Haters, I am one of them. If Harem have only one Hater, then that Hater is me. If Harem has no Haters, that means that I am no longer alive. If the entire world accepts Harems, I am against the world. Till my Last Breath, I'll hate Harems
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the writing is really messy and english is also really bad but not unreadable... Its very vauge and I feel like I am reading a summary instead of a story... But the Author manage to keep me intrested and also make me give him five....Everything it lacked made up for its intresting characters and scenarios.... Good luck and I hope you find yourself an Editor so this can get 100 times better... Love the book please don't drop...