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No please stop already two of the most brain dead characters ever made, combined into one body. Please give hope that you will combine the iq of both character’s and write something that surpasses both original works
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters Good novel but stupid author
The quality is decent, but the story development, characters, and world background rapidly declines. Characters lose intelligence to force plot and that goes for all characters, including Ainz. The Story development is never tactical nor brilliant, but just moves for the sake of moving. Gets repetitive, Characters aren’t constant, and Plot repeats or brings something completely out of nowhere. 70~ Chapters are Okay, rest becomes trash.
So this is a great story and I quite enjoyed it, however I must ask if it's been dropped? There hasn't been an update in 7 months, so yeah.
The story is good if you are into ntr I think the story have very good thing in it but it disgusting for me as lover to dxd reading how the story kiling characteristic of many characters I can take that but making my boy issei getting netorared by ainz brother that was crossing the line If you want to do it first make the issei a scummy piece of sh*ty kill him and save the harem but what you did is mix dxd -overlord in the worst form i ever see you give the one nightmare there Don't take wrong Making a romantic relationship from the start is not a problem P.s:ainz is no idiot
There are no undead in their world. Ains is too weak. Ains is too dumb. Where are all his powers? Where is his mana? They changed the character a lot.
5/5 fulfills plenty of sasuga ainz sama moments but also takes a very cool direction with everything, plus the spice is nice and just right. only negative is when you run out of chapters lol. but righteous and thanks for keeping up
I’m not going to lie, I feel really let down I was told this was a really good “misunderstanding/comedy type fanfic” but it’s really just idiotic inner monologues and conspiracy theories, Put together to make it seem as a misunderstanding. Honestly got old pretty fast, yes some parts were ”funny” but that’s it. Literally, I don’t know if it’s just me but I was expecting emenice in shadows/ original overlord type “misunderstanding”. So to have it turn into this is for lack of better word,disappointing.
This review is simply to get this fan fiction eligible for the rankings, if you liked this fan fiction and it hasn't been fully reviewed, then please follow my example. It's a 'banger'.
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Ugh I was hoping for a proper overlord fanfic and instead I literally just got a slightly watered down version of Issei.....................
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood 0go Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Gooooooooooood overlord fantasy goooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooood oooooooooooood goooooooooooooooood
Leia, vc não se arrependerá, é bom pra porra, o harém é tipo o universo, nunca para de expandir, se o ainz fosse realmente teletransportado pra DXD eu não duvido nada q poderia ser realmente assim, muito bem escrito, história muito boa, eu poderia ler do começo ao fim sem ficar entediado o único problema real é q o pessoal de nazarick demora muito pra se reencontrar com o ainz ( não se encontrão pelo menos até o 120 ) mas pelo menos parece q logo eles vão se encontrar ( leia pelo fanfiction.net ( ou algo assim ) o update nesse app é bem ruim e acho q faltam alguns capítulos )
Did you know that momonga has the most mana and mana regeneration in the game? It was so high that it surpassed the limit tube in the yggdrasil. You made him look very weak, too much, both skill and item use. less than half the strength of the anime The scale of the anime has never been taken seriously.You must read some of his novels. You look down on him too much. I understand you want the difference. But writing like this isn't fun.
i consider myself a great fan of dxd fics and have read many of them, and by far this is the best one in writing and suspense. now to be absolutely fair this novel is just gore(horror)-P.orn- sasuga ainz sama moments; i applaud the author creativity for how it all made sense yet i do have to critisize how automated and just puppet like is ainz. he is just there for the author to play around with the idea. ainz even by the author words is someone who gets prepared for enemies yet for some reasons he doesn't ask at all about the neighboring factions members power level, he talks a lot about experimentation and acknowledges that the spell affects are different yet doesn't seek any way to test them. everyone is just blind in this fic, and don't suspect a single thing which is just down right stupid, whos only use is either lemons or comic relief. all in all its a good fic of a sadistic author who pretty much handicapped ainz power and brain so he can pull the sasuga ainz sama every single chapter
This is a top insult to the great ainz ooal gown. Why did he become so weak and fearful?.......,.....................,....,...,..............
Tiết lộ Spoiler
If only this piece of garbage grew some at least peanut size brain with minimum of 2 braincells then this should have been different. Utterly disappointing.
The author sometimes makes stuff up like ainz having a mana potion when it doesn't really exist in yggradrasil, ainz having find himself low on mana which is not really possible with how this ainz only cast like 3-7th tier spell 1-10th tier spell a supertier spell, if you don't know ainz has like gazillion of mana(exceeding limit, sarcasm) a elder lich being able to use 10th tier spell like gate like i said there's no mp potion so the mana consumption of the spell is lowered to a certain degree so exhausting mana reserve by only using a create greater item and a super tier spell shouldn't really put much of a dent in his reserves, and if you are gling to say "he use teleport and other spells too" like did you watch his fight with shalltear? he use a bunch of buff, traps, a supertier spell and teleport and he. even use TGOALID, and he still has quite alot of mana, yes I know ainz will lose to any confrontation with the maous if he did not prepared properly, and the plot is all over the place (kinda) yes a overlord fanfic would have misunderstanding even the original has a lot of misunderstanding but this is just a lot, I feel like the autor has a plan for the story so he keep putting a lot of idea on he will do like the king in yellow and all that but he can't really focus with a lot of segss here and there hays.
Tiết lộ Spoiler
does the mc get his identity reveled.( ignore this }uhiushcikdbcdsb chwevdecvbwekfgbcgebdcbhcbxkjbcx cnx nx jbbcsabcushvcss vbnmlkjhygfdx mjhgfxvbnmkjhygfx m,k
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Excelente novela, realmente me ha costado mucho encontrar una novela de Overlord que capture la escencia de la original como está lo hace. Espero que la continúes por mucho tiempo más pues es de las pocas que sigo constantemente, buen trabajo :)
Reading this I became more interested in the chapter names than the story itself, I don't think anyone can disagree on that.................
That warning though... If you are a Hardcore Christian you shouldn't read a DxD fanfiction anyways, since spoiler... God is dead
Esta historia esta en otro sitio, pero aun así debo decir que es un trabajo increíble, ojala saquen una historia como esta nuevamente [img=recommend][img=recommend]
this was a really funny story shame its abandoned or at least hasnt been updated in a long time shame by the time nazarick shows up the story ends there.
No please stop already two of the most brain dead characters ever made, combined into one body. Please give hope that you will combine the iq of both character’s and write something that surpasses both original works
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters Good novel but stupid author
The quality is decent, but the story development, characters, and world background rapidly declines. Characters lose intelligence to force plot and that goes for all characters, including Ainz. The Story development is never tactical nor brilliant, but just moves for the sake of moving. Gets repetitive, Characters aren’t constant, and Plot repeats or brings something completely out of nowhere. 70~ Chapters are Okay, rest becomes trash.
So this is a great story and I quite enjoyed it, however I must ask if it's been dropped? There hasn't been an update in 7 months, so yeah.
The story is good if you are into ntr I think the story have very good thing in it but it disgusting for me as lover to dxd reading how the story kiling characteristic of many characters I can take that but making my boy issei getting netorared by ainz brother that was crossing the line If you want to do it first make the issei a scummy piece of sh*ty kill him and save the harem but what you did is mix dxd -overlord in the worst form i ever see you give the one nightmare there Don't take wrong Making a romantic relationship from the start is not a problem P.s:ainz is no idiot
There are no undead in their world. Ains is too weak. Ains is too dumb. Where are all his powers? Where is his mana? They changed the character a lot.
5/5 fulfills plenty of sasuga ainz sama moments but also takes a very cool direction with everything, plus the spice is nice and just right. only negative is when you run out of chapters lol. but righteous and thanks for keeping up
I’m not going to lie, I feel really let down I was told this was a really good “misunderstanding/comedy type fanfic” but it’s really just idiotic inner monologues and conspiracy theories, Put together to make it seem as a misunderstanding. Honestly got old pretty fast, yes some parts were ”funny” but that’s it. Literally, I don’t know if it’s just me but I was expecting emenice in shadows/ original overlord type “misunderstanding”. So to have it turn into this is for lack of better word,disappointing.
This review is simply to get this fan fiction eligible for the rankings, if you liked this fan fiction and it hasn't been fully reviewed, then please follow my example. It's a 'banger'.
Trash -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Ugh I was hoping for a proper overlord fanfic and instead I literally just got a slightly watered down version of Issei.....................
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood 0go Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Gooooooooooood overlord fantasy goooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooood oooooooooooood goooooooooooooooood
Leia, vc não se arrependerá, é bom pra porra, o harém é tipo o universo, nunca para de expandir, se o ainz fosse realmente teletransportado pra DXD eu não duvido nada q poderia ser realmente assim, muito bem escrito, história muito boa, eu poderia ler do começo ao fim sem ficar entediado o único problema real é q o pessoal de nazarick demora muito pra se reencontrar com o ainz ( não se encontrão pelo menos até o 120 ) mas pelo menos parece q logo eles vão se encontrar ( leia pelo fanfiction.net ( ou algo assim ) o update nesse app é bem ruim e acho q faltam alguns capítulos )
Did you know that momonga has the most mana and mana regeneration in the game? It was so high that it surpassed the limit tube in the yggdrasil. You made him look very weak, too much, both skill and item use. less than half the strength of the anime The scale of the anime has never been taken seriously.You must read some of his novels. You look down on him too much. I understand you want the difference. But writing like this isn't fun.
i consider myself a great fan of dxd fics and have read many of them, and by far this is the best one in writing and suspense. now to be absolutely fair this novel is just gore(horror)-P.orn- sasuga ainz sama moments; i applaud the author creativity for how it all made sense yet i do have to critisize how automated and just puppet like is ainz. he is just there for the author to play around with the idea. ainz even by the author words is someone who gets prepared for enemies yet for some reasons he doesn't ask at all about the neighboring factions members power level, he talks a lot about experimentation and acknowledges that the spell affects are different yet doesn't seek any way to test them. everyone is just blind in this fic, and don't suspect a single thing which is just down right stupid, whos only use is either lemons or comic relief. all in all its a good fic of a sadistic author who pretty much handicapped ainz power and brain so he can pull the sasuga ainz sama every single chapter
This is a top insult to the great ainz ooal gown. Why did he become so weak and fearful?.......,.....................,....,...,..............
Tiết lộ Spoiler If only this piece of garbage grew some at least peanut size brain with minimum of 2 braincells then this should have been different. Utterly disappointing.
The author sometimes makes stuff up like ainz having a mana potion when it doesn't really exist in yggradrasil, ainz having find himself low on mana which is not really possible with how this ainz only cast like 3-7th tier spell 1-10th tier spell a supertier spell, if you don't know ainz has like gazillion of mana(exceeding limit, sarcasm) a elder lich being able to use 10th tier spell like gate like i said there's no mp potion so the mana consumption of the spell is lowered to a certain degree so exhausting mana reserve by only using a create greater item and a super tier spell shouldn't really put much of a dent in his reserves, and if you are gling to say "he use teleport and other spells too" like did you watch his fight with shalltear? he use a bunch of buff, traps, a supertier spell and teleport and he. even use TGOALID, and he still has quite alot of mana, yes I know ainz will lose to any confrontation with the maous if he did not prepared properly, and the plot is all over the place (kinda) yes a overlord fanfic would have misunderstanding even the original has a lot of misunderstanding but this is just a lot, I feel like the autor has a plan for the story so he keep putting a lot of idea on he will do like the king in yellow and all that but he can't really focus with a lot of segss here and there hays.
Tiết lộ Spoiler does the mc get his identity reveled.( ignore this }uhiushcikdbcdsb chwevdecvbwekfgbcgebdcbhcbxkjbcx cnx nx jbbcsabcushvcss vbnmlkjhygfdx mjhgfxvbnmkjhygfx m,k
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Excelente novela, realmente me ha costado mucho encontrar una novela de Overlord que capture la escencia de la original como está lo hace. Espero que la continúes por mucho tiempo más pues es de las pocas que sigo constantemente, buen trabajo :)
Reading this I became more interested in the chapter names than the story itself, I don't think anyone can disagree on that.................
That warning though... If you are a Hardcore Christian you shouldn't read a DxD fanfiction anyways, since spoiler... God is dead
Esta historia esta en otro sitio, pero aun así debo decir que es un trabajo increíble, ojala saquen una historia como esta nuevamente [img=recommend][img=recommend]
this was a really funny story shame its abandoned or at least hasnt been updated in a long time shame by the time nazarick shows up the story ends there.