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ok let's get this straight at first I was hype but then I read the story all that hype came crashing down I've read 12 chaps but from what I can see it's not what author said mans was RUTHLESS and now he gives af about a sickly sister I don't understand you said he always thinks rationally so if he used his brain he would know that he gets nothing from saving that child I understand you want character development but you should have never gave him Avis emotion thats a turn off for me
ok let's get this straight at first I was hype but then I read the story all that hype came crashing down I've read 12 chaps but from what I can see it's not what author said mans was RUTHLESS and now he gives af about a sickly sister I don't understand you said he always thinks rationally so if he used his brain he would know that he gets nothing from saving that child I understand you want character development but you should have never gave him Avis emotion thats a turn off for me