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Viết đánh giáStay away, its grammer , story building and character progression are one of the worse ones in novels I have read so far Honestly reading this only helped me realize what actual gems of a novel I have been blessed with. ( Perverts World, fullfilling my Lust full fantasies, Debauchery Village Head)
For the readers this is a wish fullment novel you're trying to look for a book with plot this isn't for you. As a wish fullment it is very good in my opinion. For the author besides the updates time I say hold back a little on irrelevant details like the 6 chp about Cook good writing but not relevant. I'm looking forward to everything are MC is doing the plot is doing good. I have a few options but that not advice. Keep doing what your doing and best of luck 👍
Why don't I put five stars?He deserves more than five stars because he is like the stars that twinkle in the moonlight
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me gusto el libro la verdad lo único malí es q están bloqueado y no deja leer el libro por completo pero esta excelente 👌
One of my favorite novels however I immediately dropped it on Chapter 60 because the author for some reason thought is was going to be a good idea to use wordplay about a potential heroine losing her virginity to her butler which was just her putting him into a coffin but the fact the that author put that disgusting wordplay means he could put more and clearly likes it it’s like soft cu*king it’s like imagining the Mc being cu*ked just weird unfunny and unnecessary
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Like everything about the story but everything I don’t like is that are you not putting things in schedule in the right way so you’re gonna update it soon again it’s been like two weeks almost
I really like this book because it combines a lot of the elements correctly. It is a great way to kill time and turn off your brain. The main appeal is how unique the system is and how the main character isn't clinically dumb like in other novels. You can tell the author really tries their best to fill most of the plot holes normal books would have. Keep up the good work!
okay, let's start with the obvious, the start is rough, but I will always talk about the positive points since talking about negative is hard for me, so everyone who has questions, make them here and I will answer it. the story has really deep development and makes use of the entire system, the author doesn't forget the powers and privileges the protagonist or enemies receive, everything is a fair game(if you don't count the protagonist system), the way the villain and protagonist roles work are really good and specially the newly system that adds female and male leads that work in an entirely different way that surprisingly doesn't make the story bad but instead complements the way it works. the system is suspicious but if I am being truthful he wouldn't survive more than a month without it since the world is pretty ruthless with the protagonists and would die easily. Another part of the system of power is that ranks between powers actually means something, other novels make the system between f-sss rank but they become entirely useless since a b-rank power is better than sss-rank fire, but here those ranks actually mean something, ss-rank fire power that our protagonist has is superior to a s-rank time power since it can burn their time entirely, the ranks means something and it's so good, SSS(this one is rather special, the owner of it can make everything they believe wholeheartedly will happen, if they believe wholeheartedly that someone is a woman they will become a woman) rank powers for now reach to reality bending, SS rank(fire) powers burn dimensions, time and space, S(time) rank powers can make specific places stop for some time or period. the other reviews that say about the protagonist being beta or bowing down need to see that the world works differently, the system between women and men will be shown in the later chapters as of why they are dominant. he will completely dominate and make them his woman, and he will yes develop as a villain instead of trying to be the good guy in the story, I really recommend reading it without fear. the ntr people complained that the 60th chapters are fake too, it's a bait the author made, the whole talk is about making the guy enter in a coffin and seeing if they fit or not, read the entire chapter. for context: the woman is a necromancy lover and makes everyone that works with her or that she likes become undead that she controls and make them have their own coffin to show her love.
Tiết lộ Spoilerthat's all I can give, the story is average but it's moving too fast, too many characters are being introduced in a short time, like I'm at chapter 60 and 24h haven't passed yet in the story world, I ignored it and moved on because the characters were well written until that "Violet" personally was introduced, I don't understand why she was needed, after that the story just went downhill with Alia's change and Rita's appearance and his ex fiance too, ALL OF THIS in just 24 hours??? come bro, you realy don't care about our IQ and just expect us to accept everything.
World Background is nice Character design is good Story development - is really nice. I liked the way author portrays characters and the way they interact with each other. It does not feel like they are just add-ons to the story (something like talking like a predetermined program) I also like the comedic relief from time to time, and the lemons are just a bonus. What i dont like seeing is halfway through the chapter, somewhere between 88+ the grammar became clunky and gibberish. I couldn't understand the meaning of what they are saying even with my brain auto-translating. It kills my mood as well as my reason to read the remaining chapters, I hope the author re-edit the chapters where there are so many wrong grammars.
Should add all of the female relatives of the main character like the mother and the aunts to the harem. And the main character should only have daughters in the future and they should all be added to the harem.
the novel is good but with the MC who depends mainly on women to protect himself and does nothing to become stronger for almost the entire novel it becomes boring with so many chapters and is still an F rank.
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Tiết lộ Spoilersir please continue that mahabharatha novel we love it too much. and we will support you in your journey in this novelso please🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞
Stay away, its grammer , story building and character progression are one of the worse ones in novels I have read so far Honestly reading this only helped me realize what actual gems of a novel I have been blessed with. ( Perverts World, fullfilling my Lust full fantasies, Debauchery Village Head)
For the readers this is a wish fullment novel you're trying to look for a book with plot this isn't for you. As a wish fullment it is very good in my opinion. For the author besides the updates time I say hold back a little on irrelevant details like the 6 chp about Cook good writing but not relevant. I'm looking forward to everything are MC is doing the plot is doing good. I have a few options but that not advice. Keep doing what your doing and best of luck 👍
Why don't I put five stars?He deserves more than five stars because he is like the stars that twinkle in the moonlight
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me gusto el libro la verdad lo único malí es q están bloqueado y no deja leer el libro por completo pero esta excelente 👌
One of my favorite novels however I immediately dropped it on Chapter 60 because the author for some reason thought is was going to be a good idea to use wordplay about a potential heroine losing her virginity to her butler which was just her putting him into a coffin but the fact the that author put that disgusting wordplay means he could put more and clearly likes it it’s like soft cu*king it’s like imagining the Mc being cu*ked just weird unfunny and unnecessary
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Like everything about the story but everything I don’t like is that are you not putting things in schedule in the right way so you’re gonna update it soon again it’s been like two weeks almost
I really like this book because it combines a lot of the elements correctly. It is a great way to kill time and turn off your brain. The main appeal is how unique the system is and how the main character isn't clinically dumb like in other novels. You can tell the author really tries their best to fill most of the plot holes normal books would have. Keep up the good work!
okay, let's start with the obvious, the start is rough, but I will always talk about the positive points since talking about negative is hard for me, so everyone who has questions, make them here and I will answer it. the story has really deep development and makes use of the entire system, the author doesn't forget the powers and privileges the protagonist or enemies receive, everything is a fair game(if you don't count the protagonist system), the way the villain and protagonist roles work are really good and specially the newly system that adds female and male leads that work in an entirely different way that surprisingly doesn't make the story bad but instead complements the way it works. the system is suspicious but if I am being truthful he wouldn't survive more than a month without it since the world is pretty ruthless with the protagonists and would die easily. Another part of the system of power is that ranks between powers actually means something, other novels make the system between f-sss rank but they become entirely useless since a b-rank power is better than sss-rank fire, but here those ranks actually mean something, ss-rank fire power that our protagonist has is superior to a s-rank time power since it can burn their time entirely, the ranks means something and it's so good, SSS(this one is rather special, the owner of it can make everything they believe wholeheartedly will happen, if they believe wholeheartedly that someone is a woman they will become a woman) rank powers for now reach to reality bending, SS rank(fire) powers burn dimensions, time and space, S(time) rank powers can make specific places stop for some time or period. the other reviews that say about the protagonist being beta or bowing down need to see that the world works differently, the system between women and men will be shown in the later chapters as of why they are dominant. he will completely dominate and make them his woman, and he will yes develop as a villain instead of trying to be the good guy in the story, I really recommend reading it without fear. the ntr people complained that the 60th chapters are fake too, it's a bait the author made, the whole talk is about making the guy enter in a coffin and seeing if they fit or not, read the entire chapter. for context: the woman is a necromancy lover and makes everyone that works with her or that she likes become undead that she controls and make them have their own coffin to show her love.
Tiết lộ Spoilerthat's all I can give, the story is average but it's moving too fast, too many characters are being introduced in a short time, like I'm at chapter 60 and 24h haven't passed yet in the story world, I ignored it and moved on because the characters were well written until that "Violet" personally was introduced, I don't understand why she was needed, after that the story just went downhill with Alia's change and Rita's appearance and his ex fiance too, ALL OF THIS in just 24 hours??? come bro, you realy don't care about our IQ and just expect us to accept everything.
World Background is nice Character design is good Story development - is really nice. I liked the way author portrays characters and the way they interact with each other. It does not feel like they are just add-ons to the story (something like talking like a predetermined program) I also like the comedic relief from time to time, and the lemons are just a bonus. What i dont like seeing is halfway through the chapter, somewhere between 88+ the grammar became clunky and gibberish. I couldn't understand the meaning of what they are saying even with my brain auto-translating. It kills my mood as well as my reason to read the remaining chapters, I hope the author re-edit the chapters where there are so many wrong grammars.
Should add all of the female relatives of the main character like the mother and the aunts to the harem. And the main character should only have daughters in the future and they should all be added to the harem.
the novel is good but with the MC who depends mainly on women to protect himself and does nothing to become stronger for almost the entire novel it becomes boring with so many chapters and is still an F rank.
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sir please continue that mahabharatha novel we love it too much. and we will support you in your journey in this novelso please🤞🤞🤞🤞🤞