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The story is good but my only problem is the author not Uppercasing and not using commas like for example, he wrote manhattan new york instead of Manhattan, New York, and not putting commas in some sentences that needed it. That's the only problem I found, if the author fix this problems many people will read this ff.
Is your p@treon correct?Cant find you. its a good fanfic; story line is good. just some grammar stuff and some timeline stuff that didnt make sense
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It's a quite interesting fanfiction!!! I like it!!! 👍👍😍😍😍 I like MC/Sullivan character (how he's an easygoing, clueless about love, a bit lazy, an otaku, etc).. I also like how he has a high luckiness (it's a great factor in every activity XD ).. But he's too op from the start, but it's ok.. I still love Sol.. 😍😍 Sorry if my grammar is bad.. English is not my language 🤭🤭 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san 😁😁👍👍👍
Muito bom. Gostei mais dessa Hermione. XP XPXP XP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXP
Overall this story is good but it's a bit confusing for readers where the background of the world is very mixed where it's a mix between Marvel Comics and Marvel Mutant Universe.
This FF is a masterpiece...is beautiful and entertaining !I Love it!...so pleeeease release some more chapters?!?! or tell us where we can read it
I like fan-fics, but they get ruined when bring the Harry Potter world into a multiversal setting, since the power level of the Harry Potter world is so low.
interesting concept. but update wise. I think the story should be improved more.....................................*just filling the required minimum word count, lol*
Greatly appreciate this story, tou deserve this stars EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP
Es muy buena historia pero con sinceridad no me agrada la personalidad del protagonista se siente tan estúpida que me irrita hahahaha, ese sería mi único problema con la historia en si ya que la misma está bastante interesante.
Not that bad, but certainly not that good either. The mc is a joke and a lazy way for the author to justify him doing what he does. He has rich and powerful adoptive grandparents so the mc can do anything, go anywhere and buy anything he want (his grandparents bought him an internet café and a supermarket)....
ya I just read the world's and as soon as I saw kimetsu no yaiba it got added to my library............ .
I liked everything about this story and I have read other similar ones but for me this is the best keep it up the fanfic is incredible and I want to continue reading more
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is he Lucifer Morningstar or his son ? anyway this is great i love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
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this story is really well made and i love the concept so far keep up the good work and I hope to see more of your content .
1)Качество письма - 5. 2)Обновление стабильности - 5. 3)Развитие сюжета - 3. 4)Дизайн персонажа - 4 5)фон мира - 4. 6)Общая оценка - 4. 1) Quality of writing - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3. 4) Character design - 4 5) background of the world - 4. 6) Overall rating - 4.
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I will give myself five star because why not! and to whom give me low star with unreasonable I will deleted all of it but i will shamelessly keep five and four star for myself hehe
The story is good but my only problem is the author not Uppercasing and not using commas like for example, he wrote manhattan new york instead of Manhattan, New York, and not putting commas in some sentences that needed it. That's the only problem I found, if the author fix this problems many people will read this ff.
Is your p@treon correct?Cant find you. its a good fanfic; story line is good. just some grammar stuff and some timeline stuff that didnt make sense
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It's a quite interesting fanfiction!!! I like it!!! 👍👍😍😍😍 I like MC/Sullivan character (how he's an easygoing, clueless about love, a bit lazy, an otaku, etc).. I also like how he has a high luckiness (it's a great factor in every activity XD ).. But he's too op from the start, but it's ok.. I still love Sol.. 😍😍 Sorry if my grammar is bad.. English is not my language 🤭🤭 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san 😁😁👍👍👍
Muito bom. Gostei mais dessa Hermione. XP XPXP XP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXPXP XPXP
Overall this story is good but it's a bit confusing for readers where the background of the world is very mixed where it's a mix between Marvel Comics and Marvel Mutant Universe.
This FF is a masterpiece...is beautiful and entertaining !I Love it!...so pleeeease release some more chapters?!?! or tell us where we can read it
I like fan-fics, but they get ruined when bring the Harry Potter world into a multiversal setting, since the power level of the Harry Potter world is so low.
interesting concept. but update wise. I think the story should be improved more.....................................*just filling the required minimum word count, lol*
Greatly appreciate this story, tou deserve this stars EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP
Es muy buena historia pero con sinceridad no me agrada la personalidad del protagonista se siente tan estúpida que me irrita hahahaha, ese sería mi único problema con la historia en si ya que la misma está bastante interesante.
Not that bad, but certainly not that good either. The mc is a joke and a lazy way for the author to justify him doing what he does. He has rich and powerful adoptive grandparents so the mc can do anything, go anywhere and buy anything he want (his grandparents bought him an internet café and a supermarket)....
ya I just read the world's and as soon as I saw kimetsu no yaiba it got added to my library............ .
I liked everything about this story and I have read other similar ones but for me this is the best keep it up the fanfic is incredible and I want to continue reading more
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is he Lucifer Morningstar or his son ? anyway this is great i love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
Tiết lộ Spoiler this story is really well made and i love the concept so far keep up the good work and I hope to see more of your content .
1)Качество письма - 5. 2)Обновление стабильности - 5. 3)Развитие сюжета - 3. 4)Дизайн персонажа - 4 5)фон мира - 4. 6)Общая оценка - 4. 1) Quality of writing - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3. 4) Character design - 4 5) background of the world - 4. 6) Overall rating - 4.
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I will give myself five star because why not! and to whom give me low star with unreasonable I will deleted all of it but i will shamelessly keep five and four star for myself hehe