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My favourite book right now. The reason I wake up in the morning😌. Like the author said there is some grammar mistakes but you barely even notice them! I highly recommend reading this book. Thank you for the updates author!
I'm so shocked, I was wondering why the writer didn't publish the chapters in Lucas' novel, but in fact he was stupid enough to write a second novel! And a harem novel! Such a thing would only be done by a fool who wants to increase his reading! I can accept that professional writers will write two novels at once, the writer of the descent of dimensions is a good example of that, his level is very good, the plots of the story are excellent, he has great ideas, he is a professional and that is why it is okay to divide his focus on two works.... but the writer of a survival novel The add-on is just a hobbyist! He did something very stupid, if he had focused more on his first novels it would have been better, I'm sure he was arrogant after he got some credit, but he has already crossed the line.... Personally, I am very critical of what he did.
bagus bangettt masih banyak typo tapi ngga yang mengganggu banget, keep it up authorr!!!
Adorei a estória, o único problema é que parou de atualizar. Quero tanto continuar lendo esse romance. Por favor não deixe o romance incompleto.
Estou gostando muito da história e quero mais capítulos. Poxa eu li tão rápido e não percebi que já faz muito tempo que não tem atualizações.
when will the next chapter come? its been a long time since we got a new chapter.
Author your book is excellent. Unlike other books the mc has great friends and is reliable. Could u please update the book I really liked it …..
Dear authorrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!! When will you update this book??🥺😭 please dying to read the story and development I also love another book but please once in a while update this book too you know like 5 chap per month maybe if possible pleassseeeee🥲
bhai apna address de mai ata ye konsi 5 wives waali novel likhra but ye jo pehli masterpiece likhi hai usko ignore maar raha, Haan bhai dekho hamko chaiye full izzat and uptade 200 chaps ka 🌚. maine baba ji ki jaributy khila deni hai.... 🙏
Una historia agradable para lectura disfrutable entretenida soy malo para andar reseñas así que con esto conclusiones la z Z Z Z ZZ zzz zzz zzz zzz
Tiết lộ Spoiler
Hello there author! I hope I'm not bothering too much with this review. I felt the need to write because I haven't seen any updates to this novel for 3 months. It's one of my favorites, right on the 2nd place and I'd like to see it continue. I saw that the other novel was updated and I thought that maybe you have some free time to write about this one as well? I know your situation, I hope to receive an answer as long as it takes until you update this novel. A wonderful novella, please keep writing!
Thanks bro for the great novel.In the start i thought it was a ripoff of Tapov and TNE but as the story progresses you really outdid them both. I think this story has potential to grow much more , i hope you don't drop it.
Love it, its a gem there’s barley any novel likes this keep it up more chapters 😂😂😂😂👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Did the author finally dropped the novel or is it his exams again. ... .......... ............ ..................................... ......?????????
Sir Author, when will be the next update.I have grown tired of checking whether there is an update. It doesn't matter much to me that you're working on another novel ,but it will be nice if you can make an announcement or comment informing the date of next update. Thank you
I started reading the novel and cought up in five or so days, the story is engaging, character interactions are mostly fun and sometimes hillarious, but i think you forgot that the mc is transmigrated to another world and in the whole novel i never seen him use his knowledge from that world except the novel which makes him less like reincarnator and more of a lucky guy getting a system and knows the future, other that that i enjoyed the story and it was a blast to read if i offended you in any i deeply apologize.
this is my favourite novel right now i prefer it over even author,pov this is the first time I have seen tournament arc so well done author,s grammar is great i find romance sparks between mc and you know who very sweet and has great potential
I recommend you to read this novel................................... ......................................... .....................
As this is the first book of the author, giving what I gave for the review is pretty lenient. Grammar mistakes are everywhere, breaking my immersion whenever I stumble upon them. The story itself is nothing exceptional. The characters have a couple sentence describing them, nothing like getting to know the characters more as the story progress. The world background is also standard litrpg/fantasy settings, with humans, elves, dwarves, and demons as the enemy. The Author's POV is just a better version of this.
There's some minor errors almost every chap. Grammatical errors like some missing words, missing punctuation marks even tho there's supposed to be there like some " , " especially in their conversations. Yeah, let's say it's just minor errors , but the problem is there's a lot of it. Like I said almost every chap. I'm reading some reviews before typing mine and I saw where you, the author, said that the cause of the grammatical errors are some technical problem (from your phone's keyboard) and you not being good in English as you said you have good grades in it . Why don't you turn on "word suggestion" in your keyboard's settings? It'll probably help you. Or you can just double check the chap to see the errors before posting/uploading it. I've only read up to chapter 20 tho so I can't say anything about the plot but I'm interested in this story so I'm willing to invest some time. Hope the grammatical errors will be fixed in the future chaps. Good luck!
Hello, the recently self-hired editor here. I found this novel accidentally on Web, and I hit gold here. I haven't read Author's POV much, that's why this novel is quite fresh for me. I was keeping up with the novel in 1st volume but the novel itself carried me in the next volume. The humor, grammar and author's flow of writing improved by a large margin. The world spread is also getting wider and its getting exciting. But many people's minds were stuck on the 'GRAMMAR'. Honestly, mine too. And then I thought, why not try it myself? I've never done this, but it's fun. Author's grammar is improving and I might be unemployed soon. Jokes aside, I strongly recommend all of you this novel as it is filled with well written action and well paced events within. Read "The Extra's Survival".
Is it just me or does this also appear in your [LIMITED FREE FOR YOU] all the time? At this point i won't even need to use my Fps for this novel.
Although there are some annoying misspellings I particularly liked the story aspects. My review is still shallow, as I only read up to chapter 16 --- I intend to re-review it later, but so far I highly recommend giving this book a chance. Btw, keep up the good work and effort, author ;D
1- Bad grammar (close to MTL) 2- Bad plot, after unlocking the system we found out that the protagonist can just upgrade his bloodline to the highest tier possible by killing 1000 of the weakest G rank monster, which makes his system very OP, but it's fine, since his goal is survival and he's the one with the OP system and not the Protagonist, why would he enter the academy that will restrict his actions and follow the plot? He could've very easily just used his knowledge of the future and his system to get stronger and gg, but we wouldn't have a novel if it went that way, so our Extra had to enter the academy and do what every other extra does... Anyway I just feel like this novel has no soul, most things are done just to include the cliche's that we readers already know of or just to copy/parody/be inspired by other novels, but the fact is, that certain plots work on these other novels because the MC doesn't have an OP system (Novel's extra, The Author's POV, The Villain wants to live, etc), in all of these novels the MC had to follow the plot, because mostly he needed the protagonist of the world to become strong, not the case in this novel since the MC also has a system, so we're just fed a plot we don't want and get bored really f* fast. Protagonist = Protag of the novel MC =Extra = Our protag (Lucas)
The story started out like solid copy of NovelExtra etc. At this point it might as well be a genre. However as the story progresses it loses the charm of this genre completely. MC very rarely uses his Novel knowledge and instead he just rallies on the system. We don't have any scenes of him finding hidden skills or artifacts like a proper novel MC should, but instead he just uses the system and buys everything out of it. So in general if someone came here looking for another Extra in novel storyline, then they will be disappointed as other than copied beginning setting. It quickly becomes "MC in fantasy setting having OP system". Now that's not necessarily too bad. However past chapter 100 or so the novel becomes weird. MC becomes typical MC who attracts trouble wherever he goes. The storyline or dialogue between character is pretty much skipped over and we just time-skip from one event to another. There is whole bunch of fighting chapters and barely any proper plot development.
I like your novel I expect more from you author, Please update your novel regularly bro and you made as wait so you need to add more chapter in upcoming days... thanks for novel author all the best...
This is first time writing a novel so I am wishing myself luck by giving 5 star. I have no experience in writing so there may be lot of grammatical mistake. If you don't like any part of the novel you can comment what you didn't like. I will surely try my best to improve myself with time hearing your comments
My favourite book right now. The reason I wake up in the morning😌. Like the author said there is some grammar mistakes but you barely even notice them! I highly recommend reading this book. Thank you for the updates author!
I'm so shocked, I was wondering why the writer didn't publish the chapters in Lucas' novel, but in fact he was stupid enough to write a second novel! And a harem novel! Such a thing would only be done by a fool who wants to increase his reading! I can accept that professional writers will write two novels at once, the writer of the descent of dimensions is a good example of that, his level is very good, the plots of the story are excellent, he has great ideas, he is a professional and that is why it is okay to divide his focus on two works.... but the writer of a survival novel The add-on is just a hobbyist! He did something very stupid, if he had focused more on his first novels it would have been better, I'm sure he was arrogant after he got some credit, but he has already crossed the line.... Personally, I am very critical of what he did.
bagus bangettt masih banyak typo tapi ngga yang mengganggu banget, keep it up authorr!!!
Adorei a estória, o único problema é que parou de atualizar. Quero tanto continuar lendo esse romance. Por favor não deixe o romance incompleto.
Estou gostando muito da história e quero mais capítulos. Poxa eu li tão rápido e não percebi que já faz muito tempo que não tem atualizações.
when will the next chapter come? its been a long time since we got a new chapter.
Author your book is excellent. Unlike other books the mc has great friends and is reliable. Could u please update the book I really liked it …..
Dear authorrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!! When will you update this book??🥺😭 please dying to read the story and development I also love another book but please once in a while update this book too you know like 5 chap per month maybe if possible pleassseeeee🥲
bhai apna address de mai ata ye konsi 5 wives waali novel likhra but ye jo pehli masterpiece likhi hai usko ignore maar raha, Haan bhai dekho hamko chaiye full izzat and uptade 200 chaps ka 🌚. maine baba ji ki jaributy khila deni hai.... 🙏
Una historia agradable para lectura disfrutable entretenida soy malo para andar reseñas así que con esto conclusiones la z Z Z Z ZZ zzz zzz zzz zzz
Tiết lộ Spoiler Hello there author! I hope I'm not bothering too much with this review. I felt the need to write because I haven't seen any updates to this novel for 3 months. It's one of my favorites, right on the 2nd place and I'd like to see it continue. I saw that the other novel was updated and I thought that maybe you have some free time to write about this one as well? I know your situation, I hope to receive an answer as long as it takes until you update this novel. A wonderful novella, please keep writing!
Thanks bro for the great novel.In the start i thought it was a ripoff of Tapov and TNE but as the story progresses you really outdid them both. I think this story has potential to grow much more , i hope you don't drop it.
Love it, its a gem there’s barley any novel likes this keep it up more chapters 😂😂😂😂👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Did the author finally dropped the novel or is it his exams again. ... .......... ............ ..................................... ......?????????
Sir Author, when will be the next update.I have grown tired of checking whether there is an update. It doesn't matter much to me that you're working on another novel ,but it will be nice if you can make an announcement or comment informing the date of next update. Thank you
I started reading the novel and cought up in five or so days, the story is engaging, character interactions are mostly fun and sometimes hillarious, but i think you forgot that the mc is transmigrated to another world and in the whole novel i never seen him use his knowledge from that world except the novel which makes him less like reincarnator and more of a lucky guy getting a system and knows the future, other that that i enjoyed the story and it was a blast to read if i offended you in any i deeply apologize.
this is my favourite novel right now i prefer it over even author,pov this is the first time I have seen tournament arc so well done author,s grammar is great i find romance sparks between mc and you know who very sweet and has great potential
I recommend you to read this novel................................... ......................................... .....................
As this is the first book of the author, giving what I gave for the review is pretty lenient. Grammar mistakes are everywhere, breaking my immersion whenever I stumble upon them. The story itself is nothing exceptional. The characters have a couple sentence describing them, nothing like getting to know the characters more as the story progress. The world background is also standard litrpg/fantasy settings, with humans, elves, dwarves, and demons as the enemy. The Author's POV is just a better version of this.
There's some minor errors almost every chap. Grammatical errors like some missing words, missing punctuation marks even tho there's supposed to be there like some " , " especially in their conversations. Yeah, let's say it's just minor errors , but the problem is there's a lot of it. Like I said almost every chap. I'm reading some reviews before typing mine and I saw where you, the author, said that the cause of the grammatical errors are some technical problem (from your phone's keyboard) and you not being good in English as you said you have good grades in it . Why don't you turn on "word suggestion" in your keyboard's settings? It'll probably help you. Or you can just double check the chap to see the errors before posting/uploading it. I've only read up to chapter 20 tho so I can't say anything about the plot but I'm interested in this story so I'm willing to invest some time. Hope the grammatical errors will be fixed in the future chaps. Good luck!
Hello, the recently self-hired editor here. I found this novel accidentally on Web, and I hit gold here. I haven't read Author's POV much, that's why this novel is quite fresh for me. I was keeping up with the novel in 1st volume but the novel itself carried me in the next volume. The humor, grammar and author's flow of writing improved by a large margin. The world spread is also getting wider and its getting exciting. But many people's minds were stuck on the 'GRAMMAR'. Honestly, mine too. And then I thought, why not try it myself? I've never done this, but it's fun. Author's grammar is improving and I might be unemployed soon. Jokes aside, I strongly recommend all of you this novel as it is filled with well written action and well paced events within. Read "The Extra's Survival".
Is it just me or does this also appear in your [LIMITED FREE FOR YOU] all the time? At this point i won't even need to use my Fps for this novel.
Although there are some annoying misspellings I particularly liked the story aspects. My review is still shallow, as I only read up to chapter 16 --- I intend to re-review it later, but so far I highly recommend giving this book a chance. Btw, keep up the good work and effort, author ;D
1- Bad grammar (close to MTL) 2- Bad plot, after unlocking the system we found out that the protagonist can just upgrade his bloodline to the highest tier possible by killing 1000 of the weakest G rank monster, which makes his system very OP, but it's fine, since his goal is survival and he's the one with the OP system and not the Protagonist, why would he enter the academy that will restrict his actions and follow the plot? He could've very easily just used his knowledge of the future and his system to get stronger and gg, but we wouldn't have a novel if it went that way, so our Extra had to enter the academy and do what every other extra does... Anyway I just feel like this novel has no soul, most things are done just to include the cliche's that we readers already know of or just to copy/parody/be inspired by other novels, but the fact is, that certain plots work on these other novels because the MC doesn't have an OP system (Novel's extra, The Author's POV, The Villain wants to live, etc), in all of these novels the MC had to follow the plot, because mostly he needed the protagonist of the world to become strong, not the case in this novel since the MC also has a system, so we're just fed a plot we don't want and get bored really f* fast. Protagonist = Protag of the novel MC =Extra = Our protag (Lucas)
The story started out like solid copy of NovelExtra etc. At this point it might as well be a genre. However as the story progresses it loses the charm of this genre completely. MC very rarely uses his Novel knowledge and instead he just rallies on the system. We don't have any scenes of him finding hidden skills or artifacts like a proper novel MC should, but instead he just uses the system and buys everything out of it. So in general if someone came here looking for another Extra in novel storyline, then they will be disappointed as other than copied beginning setting. It quickly becomes "MC in fantasy setting having OP system". Now that's not necessarily too bad. However past chapter 100 or so the novel becomes weird. MC becomes typical MC who attracts trouble wherever he goes. The storyline or dialogue between character is pretty much skipped over and we just time-skip from one event to another. There is whole bunch of fighting chapters and barely any proper plot development.
I like your novel I expect more from you author, Please update your novel regularly bro and you made as wait so you need to add more chapter in upcoming days... thanks for novel author all the best...
This is first time writing a novel so I am wishing myself luck by giving 5 star. I have no experience in writing so there may be lot of grammatical mistake. If you don't like any part of the novel you can comment what you didn't like. I will surely try my best to improve myself with time hearing your comments