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it could be better if you use full shift werewolf and for less strength full battle uses partial shift and wolf form is a dire wolf and make it unique over time mc learning about his abilities and adapted to many situations and maybe he can rejection voice of the alpha
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Please don't make a him somebody that help Scott all the time never liked Scott I do see it might be a cora romance still hoping for Malia tho. 😁
pretty good so far I'm just hope you can finish it or just keep going, do whatever you want... I'm always here to support you. I'm kind of wishing you would put a primordial race or races in the story thank you :3
moreeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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it could be better if you use full shift werewolf and for less strength full battle uses partial shift and wolf form is a dire wolf and make it unique over time mc learning about his abilities and adapted to many situations and maybe he can rejection voice of the alpha
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Please don't make a him somebody that help Scott all the time never liked Scott I do see it might be a cora romance still hoping for Malia tho. 😁
pretty good so far I'm just hope you can finish it or just keep going, do whatever you want... I'm always here to support you. I'm kind of wishing you would put a primordial race or races in the story thank you :3
moreeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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