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Never describe the main character. But I overlooked that which I hate. But it was pretty good. I love the krypton part. But after that, it all took a turn. random snippets from different scenes of things that we don't know anything about. A horrible insert from one of the worst Marvel TV shows ever written. Loki, which is horrible and has a lady loki in it for no reason. Then you don't even describe the main character's spaceship lands. You just have him instantly in the city. Then you don't describe where his AI is. Why is AI is not with them? Why is he a street performer? When he can just hack into something with his knowledge. He has a very high I. Q. Why didn't he just hack into a bank and steal money? Put in into an account and then hack into the D.M.V. Register himself as a citizen. hack into the computers in the government. And gave himself a social security number. But no, he becomes a street performer for money ridiculous.
as of ch. 43 i can say 35 of them were fillers. mc is a beta simp who let ppl walk over him and scuffed as if he is above them.. story is all over the place. first arc was nothing but a filler on its own with nothing to do with MCU. mc with all his knowledge is dumb as rock. so I Hope author stops writing for it's clear that it's not his strong point.
Bland is the best way to summarize this ff for me. I read up to 26 chaps and soo far nothing interesting has happened. The ff isn't terrible but it ain't good as well. The most notable issues i had were: 1. The english is sometimes good sometimes bad like 1 min i understand everything then comes a paragraph that makes me go "????" 2. When i read that it would start Dc then be Marvel i expected the mc to actually interact with dc world longer then go to marvel like a multiverse ff but it felt like the dc part was mostly filler that can be summarized into 3 chaps probably, especially since it felt like the reason Dc world was used was just to arm the mc with knowledge and fighting skills b4 dumping him in marvel. 3. The interactions between mc and the characters wasn't really the best. To me he felt like an emotionless doll from age 1-9 when he interacted with his brother, when he grew up more it was ok since he showed more emotions especially to kara but when he went to marvel it felt like mc suddenly became a mix of an edgy/autistic/loner when he interacted with tania especially since it's just another cliché damsel about to be r*p*d. 4. There was nothing to hook/make me want to read more, no epic fight scenes, nothing at all. It's just a slice of life of an mc learning,eating,creating,etc... 5. The Mc's 3rd wish which is 220 IQ (which is used to learn things quicker if i remember correctly) like sure this is author's choice but wow is it a waste of a wish. TLDR: I don't hate the ff but i don't like it either it's just bland and doesn't have anything wanting me to keep reading more
A very interesting fan fic with well written character [img=recommend][img=recommend], and I specifically like that it have multiple povs , and also looking forward to the others universes he travels to . The side stories are also good waiting for what will happen next [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Sigh, typical trash Chinese FF, with horrendous grammer, Cringe dialouge, a retard MC and enough misogyny to choke an incel to death. What a waste.
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To the Author- You said in the beginning of the Chapter The MC has life equation(-+×÷) has no weakness, can Master everything so make it - make him learn to master everything Magic(Sorcerer, Wizard, Runes), Martial Arts(Chi or any Arts of combat), Science /Scientist and many more In Marvel beyond Mastery Level, beyond any level to limit(Limitless or Unlimited) - hope to see those soon and bring All Asian characters as Shang Chi and more. Thanks for the new chapter!
Well, the story is interesting in terms of backstory, but the character writing, world-building, and how you handle the plot leave much to be desired. I'll be honest with you, the way you handled the girl. in that alley and how you then took him home because if for the sake of the plot it was forced you changed his personality to Serena the moment he activated in Marvel as opposed to when he was on Krypton the Protagonist feels super fake and makes decisions that by the way, you described it was stupid. Why did you decide to stay with the girl and her family if you didn't want to? maybe you had another intention when doing that but it didn't work for you. My advice structure your story and improve your character build. The idea was interesting and in fact, if you decide to rewrite this you have my full support because I think you have a lot of potentials, and the fact that you dared to publish is admirable, you already took the first step now just worry about improving, Good luck.
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mc is stupid, very naive, acts with his emotions, beta mc, novel is very cliche, mc only knows that power will help him etc but he plays the protagonist. He was going to use the codex himself but he didn't, that's stupid.
thanks for the great story author have a nice day and thanks..................... p.s. i hope mc can interact with kara later or maybe have a short interaction of kalel and kara and the gifts they got from him
Enjoyable story, no complaints about the grammar so far. The characters of Marvel have been decently portrayed, something I often struggle with when writing for my own leisure, but it feels like there is lacking something I can't put my finger on. The story goes along at a good pace. I was unbothered by the time jump which doesn't happen often. The world background is clear to those who know a good chunk of Marvel and DC. Overall something, I enjoy reading.
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He started out very well but since he came to Marvel it seems that he became just a supporting character while his AI wants a Harem Yuri and is also too annoying and with little loyalty to the protagonist. All in all it was fun while it lasted. (Translated from Google) :D
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海贼：看见熟练度的我成为传奇最新章节目录海贼：看见熟练度的我成为传奇最新章节目录海贼：看见熟练度的我成为传奇最新章节目录海贼：看见熟练度的我成为传奇最新章节目录海贼：看见熟练度的我成为传奇最新章节目录海贼：看见熟练度的我成为传奇最新章节目录海贼：看见熟练度的我成为传奇最新章节目录海贼：看见熟练度的我成为传奇最新章节目录
the story was going pretty well when he was in dc but then in marvel mc it got stupid with a lot of clichés, mc seems to have gotten stupid suddenly and a lot of things get stupid, i think parts are omitted in the story or mc gets nerfed and some are skipped pieces like when he uses the PC and his IP becomes unreachable - invisible, he quietly grabs and hacks sites without programs in a few minutes, the plot becomes forced because of the house and the girl he meets immediately after entering the marvel, honestly it seems that there they were 2 different authors for the story
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2 CHAPTERS WASTED TALING ABOUT RELIGION AS IF THE AUTHOR DOES NOG MAKE HIS READERS WAIT LONG FOR CHAPTERS HE EVEN WASTED 2 CHAPTERS ON RELIGION TALK. I MYSELF am a Muslime but if I like to study about my Religion or all the other I would not try learning from a random Novel but reading the Holy books themselves
Nothing special about it mc made some of the most basic wishes you can make. the interactions between characters is ok for a webnovel story.other then that nothing makes me wanna keep reading it
Kitshaar, Im coming for yor rank. Your time is up. Number 3 is mine. Say your prayers. Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe
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This novel piqued my interest. Oh my God, I didn't expect this turn to be better and better each chapter. Keep it up! and I can not wait for next chapter
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Never describe the main character. But I overlooked that which I hate. But it was pretty good. I love the krypton part. But after that, it all took a turn. random snippets from different scenes of things that we don't know anything about. A horrible insert from one of the worst Marvel TV shows ever written. Loki, which is horrible and has a lady loki in it for no reason. Then you don't even describe the main character's spaceship lands. You just have him instantly in the city. Then you don't describe where his AI is. Why is AI is not with them? Why is he a street performer? When he can just hack into something with his knowledge. He has a very high I. Q. Why didn't he just hack into a bank and steal money? Put in into an account and then hack into the D.M.V. Register himself as a citizen. hack into the computers in the government. And gave himself a social security number. But no, he becomes a street performer for money ridiculous.
as of ch. 43 i can say 35 of them were fillers. mc is a beta simp who let ppl walk over him and scuffed as if he is above them.. story is all over the place. first arc was nothing but a filler on its own with nothing to do with MCU. mc with all his knowledge is dumb as rock. so I Hope author stops writing for it's clear that it's not his strong point.
Bland is the best way to summarize this ff for me. I read up to 26 chaps and soo far nothing interesting has happened. The ff isn't terrible but it ain't good as well. The most notable issues i had were: 1. The english is sometimes good sometimes bad like 1 min i understand everything then comes a paragraph that makes me go "????" 2. When i read that it would start Dc then be Marvel i expected the mc to actually interact with dc world longer then go to marvel like a multiverse ff but it felt like the dc part was mostly filler that can be summarized into 3 chaps probably, especially since it felt like the reason Dc world was used was just to arm the mc with knowledge and fighting skills b4 dumping him in marvel. 3. The interactions between mc and the characters wasn't really the best. To me he felt like an emotionless doll from age 1-9 when he interacted with his brother, when he grew up more it was ok since he showed more emotions especially to kara but when he went to marvel it felt like mc suddenly became a mix of an edgy/autistic/loner when he interacted with tania especially since it's just another cliché damsel about to be r*p*d. 4. There was nothing to hook/make me want to read more, no epic fight scenes, nothing at all. It's just a slice of life of an mc learning,eating,creating,etc... 5. The Mc's 3rd wish which is 220 IQ (which is used to learn things quicker if i remember correctly) like sure this is author's choice but wow is it a waste of a wish. TLDR: I don't hate the ff but i don't like it either it's just bland and doesn't have anything wanting me to keep reading more
A very interesting fan fic with well written character [img=recommend][img=recommend], and I specifically like that it have multiple povs , and also looking forward to the others universes he travels to . The side stories are also good waiting for what will happen next [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Sigh, typical trash Chinese FF, with horrendous grammer, Cringe dialouge, a retard MC and enough misogyny to choke an incel to death. What a waste.
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To the Author- You said in the beginning of the Chapter The MC has life equation(-+×÷) has no weakness, can Master everything so make it - make him learn to master everything Magic(Sorcerer, Wizard, Runes), Martial Arts(Chi or any Arts of combat), Science /Scientist and many more In Marvel beyond Mastery Level, beyond any level to limit(Limitless or Unlimited) - hope to see those soon and bring All Asian characters as Shang Chi and more. Thanks for the new chapter!
Well, the story is interesting in terms of backstory, but the character writing, world-building, and how you handle the plot leave much to be desired. I'll be honest with you, the way you handled the girl. in that alley and how you then took him home because if for the sake of the plot it was forced you changed his personality to Serena the moment he activated in Marvel as opposed to when he was on Krypton the Protagonist feels super fake and makes decisions that by the way, you described it was stupid. Why did you decide to stay with the girl and her family if you didn't want to? maybe you had another intention when doing that but it didn't work for you. My advice structure your story and improve your character build. The idea was interesting and in fact, if you decide to rewrite this you have my full support because I think you have a lot of potentials, and the fact that you dared to publish is admirable, you already took the first step now just worry about improving, Good luck.
Tiết lộ Spoiler mc is stupid, very naive, acts with his emotions, beta mc, novel is very cliche, mc only knows that power will help him etc but he plays the protagonist. He was going to use the codex himself but he didn't, that's stupid.
thanks for the great story author have a nice day and thanks..................... p.s. i hope mc can interact with kara later or maybe have a short interaction of kalel and kara and the gifts they got from him
Enjoyable story, no complaints about the grammar so far. The characters of Marvel have been decently portrayed, something I often struggle with when writing for my own leisure, but it feels like there is lacking something I can't put my finger on. The story goes along at a good pace. I was unbothered by the time jump which doesn't happen often. The world background is clear to those who know a good chunk of Marvel and DC. Overall something, I enjoy reading.
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He started out very well but since he came to Marvel it seems that he became just a supporting character while his AI wants a Harem Yuri and is also too annoying and with little loyalty to the protagonist. All in all it was fun while it lasted. (Translated from Google) :D
Tiết lộ Spoiler 海贼：看见熟练度的我成为传奇最新章节目录海贼：看见熟练度的我成为传奇最新章节目录海贼：看见熟练度的我成为传奇最新章节目录海贼：看见熟练度的我成为传奇最新章节目录海贼：看见熟练度的我成为传奇最新章节目录海贼：看见熟练度的我成为传奇最新章节目录海贼：看见熟练度的我成为传奇最新章节目录海贼：看见熟练度的我成为传奇最新章节目录
the story was going pretty well when he was in dc but then in marvel mc it got stupid with a lot of clichés, mc seems to have gotten stupid suddenly and a lot of things get stupid, i think parts are omitted in the story or mc gets nerfed and some are skipped pieces like when he uses the PC and his IP becomes unreachable - invisible, he quietly grabs and hacks sites without programs in a few minutes, the plot becomes forced because of the house and the girl he meets immediately after entering the marvel, honestly it seems that there they were 2 different authors for the story
Tiết lộ Spoiler I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this. I love this.
2 CHAPTERS WASTED TALING ABOUT RELIGION AS IF THE AUTHOR DOES NOG MAKE HIS READERS WAIT LONG FOR CHAPTERS HE EVEN WASTED 2 CHAPTERS ON RELIGION TALK. I MYSELF am a Muslime but if I like to study about my Religion or all the other I would not try learning from a random Novel but reading the Holy books themselves
Nothing special about it mc made some of the most basic wishes you can make. the interactions between characters is ok for a webnovel story.other then that nothing makes me wanna keep reading it
Kitshaar, Im coming for yor rank. Your time is up. Number 3 is mine. Say your prayers. Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe
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This novel piqued my interest. Oh my God, I didn't expect this turn to be better and better each chapter. Keep it up! and I can not wait for next chapter
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