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If you’re looking for an adventurous story with mystery, romance and murder, this is the page turner for you. Glimmy doesn’t disappoint. And this fan would love to a side story if Glimmy is up to it. 😉 Regarding the sons and her bestie, Beatrice along with General Alaska.
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This was a very enjoyable story with a rather relatable FL who really grew into a better version of herself through the bonds of family, friendship, and ofc romantic interests. I liked how she was emboldened by her awareness that the world was full of NPCs and was a story world. It gave her the freedom to take risks and really develop as a person. The story developed well but I personally was a little let down by the rushed feeling of the ending and some things that I saw as missed opportunities. There were still a few unaddressed matters that feel unresolved but there is also room for follow on stories with new MCs which may be interesting. The writing quality was pretty good overall with a nice paced narrative and some good spicy scenes. There were some reasonably consistent errors with things like English sayings (eg birds in the hands v a bird in the hand), grammar, certain pronouns, typos, etc but it wasn’t overly bothersome and the good points of the writing were what was most noticeable. Overall, I recommend this book. Come give it a whirl 🙂↕️
The story is going amazingly; I absolutely love it. However, I have a small problem. Is the main character Dehlia or Dahlia? I'm having trouble here, just in case I misunderstood or there are two different characters?
I really wish more people can see this book. Have been looking for a similar kind of book but still can’t find any
It's a nice read. I wanted to know what happened to other characters, though. Hope there are more side stories 😊
All in all, I'm very glad I found this story and continued ahead with it instead of stopping in between like I usually do(😅). The story was just what I needed as of right now- satisfying and just sweet~ though it's natural I couldn't ever get enough of Dahlia and Romulus and their little family, I know the story had to end at some point🥲 Thankyou author for such a beautiful story ❤ (p.s. please keep making more vampire stories! I am a sucker for them (≧∇≦)/)
this book got me traped all day thank you Author this one is a banger and I'm your biggest fan i read all your books hope to see more of your wonderful inspirations
well written Amazing story Great chara cters development!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
cannot wait for another chapters [img=update]..interesting consept and author doing good job for making me curious and keep reading.. hopefully author will soon update new chapter 🥹
I must say, this book got me thrilled from the beginning, love it, nice job author 😘😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰❤️❤️🧡🧡🧡❤️🧡🧡😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Another wonderful book from Glimmy! Yah! If you're a vampire fan, then this book is for you. And the fact it's a system book, yeah get your reading glasses
If there's anything I love about Glimmy, it's the fact that she finishes all of her books and the coin spent on each book is always worth it.
A refreshing book and a different genre. can't wait to see what glimmey's up to on this one. I really wish for more updates and can't wait for dahlia to interact with the king.
Great story. The synopsis is well written. The story looks unique and good. [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
I love the start if the book. Love the synopsis as well. Wen I heard of a break up hmm I must say, I was thrilled to watch it happen but her attitude ,dat was it for me. Good story. Lovely start. Keep it up dear author.
Romance here i come! Well i was going to read some more modern style but then this caught my eye and my inner fantasy lover and before i knew it i have been hooked. Well thats all i can say really. Hooked so quick, if that doesn't tell you to read this novel then i am not sute what will
I do love the storyline although it only had 4 chapters. It made me think of what will it happen next after the last update. It's been awhile since I haven't read this kind of stories and it made me wonder more and more. Keep it up author !
Though haven't read much, I can already see the potential of this novel. The storyline is really intriguing and the first few chapters are already pulling me into this story. I can't wait to see more of what this author gat to give🥰🥰🥰
Hi Glimmy here, Yeah I'm back with a system book and although I'm still trying to figure my way around. I promise that this would be a thrilling journey. Thanks for your massive supports.
Sweet blend of vampire, system and all hehe nice. The writing style in the book and the way the author portrayed the characters shows insight and emotion. Good one author. Keep it up.
If you’re looking for an adventurous story with mystery, romance and murder, this is the page turner for you. Glimmy doesn’t disappoint. And this fan would love to a side story if Glimmy is up to it. 😉 Regarding the sons and her bestie, Beatrice along with General Alaska.
Tiết lộ Spoiler This was a very enjoyable story with a rather relatable FL who really grew into a better version of herself through the bonds of family, friendship, and ofc romantic interests. I liked how she was emboldened by her awareness that the world was full of NPCs and was a story world. It gave her the freedom to take risks and really develop as a person. The story developed well but I personally was a little let down by the rushed feeling of the ending and some things that I saw as missed opportunities. There were still a few unaddressed matters that feel unresolved but there is also room for follow on stories with new MCs which may be interesting. The writing quality was pretty good overall with a nice paced narrative and some good spicy scenes. There were some reasonably consistent errors with things like English sayings (eg birds in the hands v a bird in the hand), grammar, certain pronouns, typos, etc but it wasn’t overly bothersome and the good points of the writing were what was most noticeable. Overall, I recommend this book. Come give it a whirl 🙂↕️
The story is going amazingly; I absolutely love it. However, I have a small problem. Is the main character Dehlia or Dahlia? I'm having trouble here, just in case I misunderstood or there are two different characters?
I really wish more people can see this book. Have been looking for a similar kind of book but still can’t find any
It's a nice read. I wanted to know what happened to other characters, though. Hope there are more side stories 😊
All in all, I'm very glad I found this story and continued ahead with it instead of stopping in between like I usually do(😅). The story was just what I needed as of right now- satisfying and just sweet~ though it's natural I couldn't ever get enough of Dahlia and Romulus and their little family, I know the story had to end at some point🥲 Thankyou author for such a beautiful story ❤ (p.s. please keep making more vampire stories! I am a sucker for them (≧∇≦)/)
this book got me traped all day thank you Author this one is a banger and I'm your biggest fan i read all your books hope to see more of your wonderful inspirations
well written Amazing story Great chara cters development!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
cannot wait for another chapters [img=update]..interesting consept and author doing good job for making me curious and keep reading.. hopefully author will soon update new chapter 🥹
I must say, this book got me thrilled from the beginning, love it, nice job author 😘😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰❤️❤️🧡🧡🧡❤️🧡🧡😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Another wonderful book from Glimmy! Yah! If you're a vampire fan, then this book is for you. And the fact it's a system book, yeah get your reading glasses
If there's anything I love about Glimmy, it's the fact that she finishes all of her books and the coin spent on each book is always worth it.
A refreshing book and a different genre. can't wait to see what glimmey's up to on this one. I really wish for more updates and can't wait for dahlia to interact with the king.
Great story. The synopsis is well written. The story looks unique and good. [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
I love the start if the book. Love the synopsis as well. Wen I heard of a break up hmm I must say, I was thrilled to watch it happen but her attitude ,dat was it for me. Good story. Lovely start. Keep it up dear author.
Romance here i come! Well i was going to read some more modern style but then this caught my eye and my inner fantasy lover and before i knew it i have been hooked. Well thats all i can say really. Hooked so quick, if that doesn't tell you to read this novel then i am not sute what will
I do love the storyline although it only had 4 chapters. It made me think of what will it happen next after the last update. It's been awhile since I haven't read this kind of stories and it made me wonder more and more. Keep it up author !
Though haven't read much, I can already see the potential of this novel. The storyline is really intriguing and the first few chapters are already pulling me into this story. I can't wait to see more of what this author gat to give🥰🥰🥰
Hi Glimmy here, Yeah I'm back with a system book and although I'm still trying to figure my way around. I promise that this would be a thrilling journey. Thanks for your massive supports.
Sweet blend of vampire, system and all hehe nice. The writing style in the book and the way the author portrayed the characters shows insight and emotion. Good one author. Keep it up.