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One of the best harry potter stories, if only the original harry potter, was a bit like the one in this story would be much better, do not think bad I like the wizarding world, but harry potter leaves much to be desired, manipulated by Dumbledore, the ignorant ron where it is dark to even have tennis shoes, ron abandons him in the chalice, in the relics of death and still continues to make friends with ron, he has money a lot of money and does not go to his uncles who mistreat him, look at dumbledore as a mentor when he only tells him: harry stay at your uncles house or some other words, nothing out of this world, I'm just saying it can get better. In this story I see the harry potter that is worth it, it is somewhat OP but nothing so exaggerated, even explains correctly why this harry is OP. this harry uses wand nothing like those other stories where magic without wand does not cost and is like drinking water, I just say that it goes with logic, Dumbledore uses wand if he uses the wand of elder but uses, voldemort uses wand and it is assumed that the two are close to the level of merlin. In the end I just say this is one of the best harry potter stories on this website.
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Good premise and execution so far. I really like the power lvls, it is easy to understand and creates more layers than completely: useless normal wizard > dumbs/voldy powerhouse ( and thank god the mc is not super op or simply a complete pushover ). The slice of life aspect and the relationships are shapping up nicely aswell, no character feels forced. 5/5 so far
If Harem has a million Haters, I am one of them . If Harem has ten Haters, I am one of them. If Harem have only one Hater, then that Hater is me. If Harem has no Haters, that means that I am no longer alive. If the entire world accepts Harems, I am against the world. Till my Last Breath, I'll hate Harems
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So good. It's a somewhat major AU but it works very nicely. I love how the MC has overpowered potential but still has to work for any power he gains (for the most part). This lends itself well to better story and character development as opposed to just making him OP right at the start
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These types of hp fanfic are one of the best in my opinion. Here, the Author has tried to portray a world that can be best and worst at the same time. It's such a great concept.
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A dark world , closed views seen by the watcher for its crueler than he thought. Seriously however this is next level dark , not because of the general themes it has but how closely those views are knit around a single gender . Perhaps having the same for the other gender wouldn't have been bad particularly.
One of the best harry potter stories, if only the original harry potter, was a bit like the one in this story would be much better, do not think bad I like the wizarding world, but harry potter leaves much to be desired, manipulated by Dumbledore, the ignorant ron where it is dark to even have tennis shoes, ron abandons him in the chalice, in the relics of death and still continues to make friends with ron, he has money a lot of money and does not go to his uncles who mistreat him, look at dumbledore as a mentor when he only tells him: harry stay at your uncles house or some other words, nothing out of this world, I'm just saying it can get better. In this story I see the harry potter that is worth it, it is somewhat OP but nothing so exaggerated, even explains correctly why this harry is OP. this harry uses wand nothing like those other stories where magic without wand does not cost and is like drinking water, I just say that it goes with logic, Dumbledore uses wand if he uses the wand of elder but uses, voldemort uses wand and it is assumed that the two are close to the level of merlin. In the end I just say this is one of the best harry potter stories on this website.
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Good premise and execution so far. I really like the power lvls, it is easy to understand and creates more layers than completely: useless normal wizard > dumbs/voldy powerhouse ( and thank god the mc is not super op or simply a complete pushover ). The slice of life aspect and the relationships are shapping up nicely aswell, no character feels forced. 5/5 so far
If Harem has a million Haters, I am one of them . If Harem has ten Haters, I am one of them. If Harem have only one Hater, then that Hater is me. If Harem has no Haters, that means that I am no longer alive. If the entire world accepts Harems, I am against the world. Till my Last Breath, I'll hate Harems
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So good. It's a somewhat major AU but it works very nicely. I love how the MC has overpowered potential but still has to work for any power he gains (for the most part). This lends itself well to better story and character development as opposed to just making him OP right at the start
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These types of hp fanfic are one of the best in my opinion. Here, the Author has tried to portray a world that can be best and worst at the same time. It's such a great concept.
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A dark world , closed views seen by the watcher for its crueler than he thought. Seriously however this is next level dark , not because of the general themes it has but how closely those views are knit around a single gender . Perhaps having the same for the other gender wouldn't have been bad particularly.