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i have to admit it started really nice, buh along the line I don't really know what to make of the MC,is he supposed to be a simp 🧐,and degrading the power of higher ranks just to make the MC look cool is a little too much
I started this book, not having much expectations, but now I can't peel my eyes away from it. Thank you for adding to my addiction Author. This is a very well written book.
.I love reading action novels.. well if possible in comic version ..😁😁😁 hehehe... . after reading the positive comments 👌👌 ... I think I should give it a go then .. 🤔🤔🤔🤔
I really thought this would be decent and tried to keep reading hoping it would get good but I had to stop. The grammar is not great which is usually not a big deal to me but it's hard to comprehend some of the content, the pacing is also weird, it'll just randomly kinda cut forward in time without saying anything, just suddenly they're having a conversation somewhere else. No real interest in the world or the mc, normally I would read more and give it a chance but this just feels very amateur and hard to read to me. If you enjoy this then more power to you but this is not for me.
A really good story. jafjafjsgjCjafsgkzcjafusgkacbafuwtidhpeypvkvnadhqrjeglzcjaduwtisvjaduwtizgjardkfkencnrkakckrwlri Had to add charactors
I have read about 10 chapters and I have to say that it's not bad the world-building is good there are no writing mistakes however I don't like the fact that the mc hates the deviants for no reason he comes from a powerful family I see no reason as to why he would hate them. he did say that they are oppressing the normal ppl but the author said that he's an antihero so that can't be it
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So far it is good, hope it keeps getting better. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
am an author myself and I have read so many books, both on web novel and other sites but I have to give you this credit, you nailed it, it's just so awesome that you are now taking part of my 5 hours Mobil access, but I think it's worth it 🤝🤝
evil mc : mc don't kill any one Smart mc :if smart, mc won't be tool Very weak MC every figt mc always uses his full power Boring nothing special about mc Evil mc, are you kidding me
A good book with nice character development. The backstory is also good, plot development and the character development. I'm not really a fan of superpowers kinda books but this one should be a keeper. Give a try and you will like it.
the world background is up average. the pace of the story is fast but slows down later. although character designs are good there are some characters that are not justified. there are some grammar mistakes but nothing noticeable. Overall a good story
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Shameless author review... I put in quite some effort into creating this world for my readers, with an antagonistic type protagonist, who would do whatever it takes to achieve his goal
i have to admit it started really nice, buh along the line I don't really know what to make of the MC,is he supposed to be a simp 🧐,and degrading the power of higher ranks just to make the MC look cool is a little too much
I started this book, not having much expectations, but now I can't peel my eyes away from it. Thank you for adding to my addiction Author. This is a very well written book.
.I love reading action novels.. well if possible in comic version ..😁😁😁 hehehe... . after reading the positive comments 👌👌 ... I think I should give it a go then .. 🤔🤔🤔🤔
I really thought this would be decent and tried to keep reading hoping it would get good but I had to stop. The grammar is not great which is usually not a big deal to me but it's hard to comprehend some of the content, the pacing is also weird, it'll just randomly kinda cut forward in time without saying anything, just suddenly they're having a conversation somewhere else. No real interest in the world or the mc, normally I would read more and give it a chance but this just feels very amateur and hard to read to me. If you enjoy this then more power to you but this is not for me.
A really good story. jafjafjsgjCjafsgkzcjafusgkacbafuwtidhpeypvkvnadhqrjeglzcjaduwtisvjaduwtizgjardkfkencnrkakckrwlri Had to add charactors
I have read about 10 chapters and I have to say that it's not bad the world-building is good there are no writing mistakes however I don't like the fact that the mc hates the deviants for no reason he comes from a powerful family I see no reason as to why he would hate them. he did say that they are oppressing the normal ppl but the author said that he's an antihero so that can't be it
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Tiết lộ Spoiler So far it is good, hope it keeps getting better. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
am an author myself and I have read so many books, both on web novel and other sites but I have to give you this credit, you nailed it, it's just so awesome that you are now taking part of my 5 hours Mobil access, but I think it's worth it 🤝🤝
evil mc : mc don't kill any one Smart mc :if smart, mc won't be tool Very weak MC every figt mc always uses his full power Boring nothing special about mc Evil mc, are you kidding me
A good book with nice character development. The backstory is also good, plot development and the character development. I'm not really a fan of superpowers kinda books but this one should be a keeper. Give a try and you will like it.
the world background is up average. the pace of the story is fast but slows down later. although character designs are good there are some characters that are not justified. there are some grammar mistakes but nothing noticeable. Overall a good story
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Shameless author review... I put in quite some effort into creating this world for my readers, with an antagonistic type protagonist, who would do whatever it takes to achieve his goal
Oga where you dey oooo? I still dey wait you