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Extremely short story without any motivation from writer. You can even consider this scribbles without thought or practice for writing as the writer coaims. In short read if you have nothing to read and want to only waste time as there is no meaning if you read it or not
Man, this was a better read than expected. I saw some reviews about the ending, so I actually thought it would be worse. There sure is some stuff I don't like, but at least there is an ending. It was relaxing, kind of. Considering I could easily binge read it. Peace.
was really good actually! mb he need to get Toneri + hogoromo and hamura to get all))) i like it!i like it!i like it!i like it!i like it!i like it!i like it!i like it!i like it!
It was okay. A lot of what was happening needed a bit more detail but overall I got what was happening and felt it was pretty good for what it was. I wish it was a bit more fleshed out on what heppened during the timeskips or even what happened to Akatsuki after Zetsu switched sides. How did Kuro and Ino meet again? Is Anko there as a lover or a retired Mentor? Did Konan betray Nagato? (*I know there was a bit about this that I skimmed over, if someone can remind me, that’d be cool). Also wanted more of the Cat Sactuary 🥺 I did like how it didn’t dwell too heavily on Naruto canon - instead, canon was happening in the background and MC used that to get what he wanted.
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Niente male anche se il finale sembra molto affrettato ma è pur sempre la tua prima fanfiction perciò va bene se avessi continuato con l'arco narrativo di shippuden immagino che sarebbe stato wow oh è hai anche dimenticato fase videogame sai come missione alla fine l'hai totalmente saltata c'era ma era più come uno strumento
The story is pretty good!The character was OP and there were some plot holes but I really liked it . The last episode was too rushed, having a sherigan ruined everything, heurzus it was at the end., Thanks to the author.
It was a fine for a short read. Kinda wish their was any romantic interaction between him and those girls tho. So it doesn't just come out of left field in the epilogue.
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The Author knew what he was doing when he wrote this. MC was OP, exploited his ability in logical manner and even took proper advantage of elements of the naruto world.
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HORRÍVEL! HORROROSO! ME FAZ MAL! PÉSSIMO! Odeio obras com sistema por que os autores são péssimos em usar esta função! Detestável! Blerg![img=faceslap]
Literally will not stop showing up for "recently updated" hhhhhhhhhhhhjdstugdtihd to dtifyydyyhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Increíble simplemente increíble 🏆🏅[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Intesante hasta el capítulo 14, luego solo fueron ideas dispersas del autor y todo lo que se le ocurrió. Tengo que confesar que luego del capítulo 14 sólo leí bastante rápido y llegó un punto que sólo leí el final para ver que sucede con la historia.
I really liked the story but there was more info than dialogues and it got a bit boring but otherwise the story is good and it has a solo levelling vibe and the character design is good
Спасибо, за работу прочитал за один раз очень понравилось, жду следующих работ, также начну смотреть другие ваши работы
It's decent.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
I really enjoyed reading it, seemingly slow paced yet at the same time a rather short story made it simple to enjoy, although it didn't seem to have any large conflict throughout the book an the main character simply swept through the plot, the concepts of using the jutsus and knowledge of the plot in "Naruto" was also more on the original side of me, the only thing slightly lacking was the world background, and the story did have rather large plotholes to the end. To sum it up I'll simply say "Kaguya Any% Speedrun"
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I liked this fan fiction, even though gg is still a cheater [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
as the story progresses I was not even able to understand what is happening. It can be that I am an idiot, or the story is getting a little confusing.
I don't get the story, at first it was okay but after the storyline where danzo death it get's worse. The time skip is bad the explanation for the timeskip and why he did it is also bad. Everything is bad. Seriously i didn't get the story even until the ending why he did it and how the story got progressed so fast.
Legalzin........................................................................................................................................................................................
I love it .how it starts at not to op but op enough to make a good story at least in my opinion. so I could stay with you canyon more be it is still pretty great.
Fue un buen rato de entretenimiento, aunque había, cosas que no me agradaron fue bueno, también me hubiera gustado más saber cómo fueron las relaciones amorosas
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SkyNeves Review is absolute perfection. TLDR: The author rushes the ending so fast that its nearly incomprehensible.
Extremely short story without any motivation from writer. You can even consider this scribbles without thought or practice for writing as the writer coaims. In short read if you have nothing to read and want to only waste time as there is no meaning if you read it or not
Man, this was a better read than expected. I saw some reviews about the ending, so I actually thought it would be worse. There sure is some stuff I don't like, but at least there is an ending. It was relaxing, kind of. Considering I could easily binge read it. Peace.
was really good actually! mb he need to get Toneri + hogoromo and hamura to get all))) i like it!i like it!i like it!i like it!i like it!i like it!i like it!i like it!i like it!
It was okay. A lot of what was happening needed a bit more detail but overall I got what was happening and felt it was pretty good for what it was. I wish it was a bit more fleshed out on what heppened during the timeskips or even what happened to Akatsuki after Zetsu switched sides. How did Kuro and Ino meet again? Is Anko there as a lover or a retired Mentor? Did Konan betray Nagato? (*I know there was a bit about this that I skimmed over, if someone can remind me, that’d be cool). Also wanted more of the Cat Sactuary 🥺 I did like how it didn’t dwell too heavily on Naruto canon - instead, canon was happening in the background and MC used that to get what he wanted.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Niente male anche se il finale sembra molto affrettato ma è pur sempre la tua prima fanfiction perciò va bene se avessi continuato con l'arco narrativo di shippuden immagino che sarebbe stato wow oh è hai anche dimenticato fase videogame sai come missione alla fine l'hai totalmente saltata c'era ma era più come uno strumento
The story is pretty good!The character was OP and there were some plot holes but I really liked it . The last episode was too rushed, having a sherigan ruined everything, heurzus it was at the end., Thanks to the author.
It was a fine for a short read. Kinda wish their was any romantic interaction between him and those girls tho. So it doesn't just come out of left field in the epilogue.
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The Author knew what he was doing when he wrote this. MC was OP, exploited his ability in logical manner and even took proper advantage of elements of the naruto world.
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HORRÍVEL! HORROROSO! ME FAZ MAL! PÉSSIMO! Odeio obras com sistema por que os autores são péssimos em usar esta função! Detestável! Blerg![img=faceslap]
Literally will not stop showing up for "recently updated" hhhhhhhhhhhhjdstugdtihd to dtifyydyyhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Increíble simplemente increíble 🏆🏅[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Intesante hasta el capítulo 14, luego solo fueron ideas dispersas del autor y todo lo que se le ocurrió. Tengo que confesar que luego del capítulo 14 sólo leí bastante rápido y llegó un punto que sólo leí el final para ver que sucede con la historia.
I really liked the story but there was more info than dialogues and it got a bit boring but otherwise the story is good and it has a solo levelling vibe and the character design is good
Спасибо, за работу прочитал за один раз очень понравилось, жду следующих работ, также начну смотреть другие ваши работы
It's decent.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
I really enjoyed reading it, seemingly slow paced yet at the same time a rather short story made it simple to enjoy, although it didn't seem to have any large conflict throughout the book an the main character simply swept through the plot, the concepts of using the jutsus and knowledge of the plot in "Naruto" was also more on the original side of me, the only thing slightly lacking was the world background, and the story did have rather large plotholes to the end. To sum it up I'll simply say "Kaguya Any% Speedrun"
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I liked this fan fiction, even though gg is still a cheater [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
as the story progresses I was not even able to understand what is happening. It can be that I am an idiot, or the story is getting a little confusing.
I don't get the story, at first it was okay but after the storyline where danzo death it get's worse. The time skip is bad the explanation for the timeskip and why he did it is also bad. Everything is bad. Seriously i didn't get the story even until the ending why he did it and how the story got progressed so fast.
Legalzin........................................................................................................................................................................................
I love it .how it starts at not to op but op enough to make a good story at least in my opinion. so I could stay with you canyon more be it is still pretty great.
Fue un buen rato de entretenimiento, aunque había, cosas que no me agradaron fue bueno, también me hubiera gustado más saber cómo fueron las relaciones amorosas
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SkyNeves Review is absolute perfection. TLDR: The author rushes the ending so fast that its nearly incomprehensible.