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Please 🙏 Author, can you continue with the rest chapters cuz am dying to read the rest ❤️❤️❤️
Normally I would write a nice long review. But I think I shouldn't since the Author abandoned this work. Wich is a shame since it's got lot of potential. Maybe a rewrite to fix a few things? start fresh since its been a long time since last updates. I don´t know. You could write folowing the cannon more or less and from braking dawn start your own. Curently the story is good. But if you can't handle the wait of a never ending story. Then don't read
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Does anyone know a twilight fic, where the mc doesn't print with anyone? I like the twilight fic, but I hate when the mc is always printed with some vampire, it's frustrating that they are controlled like that. But hey, that's what twilight is about, right? anyway if anyone knows a fic tell me
This was really good. I couldn't stop reading. Please write more. I can't wait to read about what happens with Victoria and her army and the volturi.
Bem foi uma ideia interessante mais não foi bem executada, no meu ponto de vista o autor não deveria ter colocado romance tão cedo na historia, primeiro porque literalmente limito o poder dele a máximo possível. Foram 31 capitulo e quase não teve desenvolvimento nenhum do seus poderes e os que se sabem não é treinado de forma alguma. O romance nessa historia o limitou a permanecer fixo na mesma cidade por um longo tempo e não vejo ele se mudando tão cedo. O MC é um motoqueiro-fantasma pelo amor de Deus deixe ele fazer o trabalho dele, o cara usou o poder literalmente duas a três vezes apenas, e na ultima ainda perdendo para vampiros que nem ao menos se alimenta de sangue humano mais vergonha que isso impossuível. Mesmo se o autor quiser romance continuo deveria apenas pegar a parceira dele e levá-la junto em viagem pelo mundo enquanto o mc fica mais forte, a menina tem 100 anos cara ela já pode viajar sem ter a família inteira no pé. Me surpreende que com apenas essa força fraca ele tenha cogitado a ideia de lutar contra os vampiros mais velhos que literalmente controlam o mundo. Eu recomendaria uma reescrita desse romance. Não fique apenas em um lugar viaje mais lute e treine mais o mc é um motoqueiro-fantasma deixe-o fazer oque tem que ser feito. Não costumo deixa muitas avaliações em romances mais deixei nesse porque a ideia desse romance é incrível pelo menos para mim.
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You get full marks from me my friend, been a Ghost Rider fan myself and there aren't much of these stories out there in the fanfiction world. love the character, story plot executed very well (even though you interfered with Bella not getting the papercut in the timeline) but! all in all perfect story! hope my power stone helps you to make more chapters! Ride with the Spirit of Vengeance my friend!
hello, there👋 I liked the fic a lot ... pls update it and I hope that you don't abandon the fic... ghost rider in the twilight is a unique genre tbh...
Romance ruins the story completely. Author abuses imprinting to speed up romantic relationships so it just feels like the MC loves the love interest because she is pretty and the love interest loves the MC because she looked at him and has warm hugs. Most of the time the dialogue is cringe af. Especially when the MC has murderous and gruesome thoughts because someone said something bad about the love interest. Even when they weren't dating and barely knew each other he was overly defensive of her. The ghost riders' appearance is few and far between. I'm sure I don't speak for myself when I saw I'm mostly interested in the ghost rider aspect of the story. So when it takes a long 8 or 9+ chapters of wait time for real the ghost rider action to happen only for it to feel half-baked and cringe-worthy, it feels like a big letdown. The Writing quality is good and the MC was an interesting character in the beginning but the story simply fell when the bad romance took more precedence over the ghost rider parts of the story. TO summarize my thoughts. This fic is wasted potential. Anyways, that's my hot take on this fic.
keep updating I really enjoy reading this and it sucked when you stopped updating 11 months ago so I was glad when I seen the update of two new chapters
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ok so i haven read this yet but i am interested in it, but will the mc only be in twilight world or are there more worlds. because if not i think the ghost rider is too strong for such a low leveled world like twilight
Very good worth the read ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
i am enjoying it but can decide what my personal rating is yet so just gonna fill the res of this reveiw with random letters g g g g gngngng
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wuh happened to the scribblehub version, i was really enjoying it . . . dam . . . . . . . . . ............................................................
I enjoyed it a LOT so where are the chapters! ! ! . . . . . ................................................................................................
This story has potential, people seem to be enjoying it more for the fact that its a ghost rider fanfic rather than what the fanfic has actually delivered. For one 30/34 chapters have been spent with some teen romance wuxia young master BS that is quite a turn off. It wasnt until the most recent 4 chapters that things seem to be picking up. I believe this has the potential to be a 5 star novel however currently it is a 3. I look forward to what it has in store but at the same time if i am to take into account some of the authors earlier choices….dont expect much (Heads up, This story takes place in TWILIGHT)
Gotta say, already loving this ff as twilight ones are rare and especially ones with 10+ chapters 👍 a quick idea for another ff would be a werebear as in instead of shifting into a wolf shift into a bear as they are stronger than wolves, reckon it would be a great ff idea and i reckon you could pull it off 😃 keep up the good work
I honestly didn't know how I would feel about this when I started reading it because it was the first twilight story I've read other than the actual books, I can say for certain that I absolutely love it, I can't recommend it enough.
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Great story author definitely worth the read, just wish there was more chapters XD. Keep up the good work 😁👍.
Author pls continue this fanfic. Z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z. Z z z. Z z z z. Z z. Z z z z z. Z z. Z. Z z. Z z. Z z z z. Z
Please 🙏 Author, can you continue with the rest chapters cuz am dying to read the rest ❤️❤️❤️
Normally I would write a nice long review. But I think I shouldn't since the Author abandoned this work. Wich is a shame since it's got lot of potential. Maybe a rewrite to fix a few things? start fresh since its been a long time since last updates. I don´t know. You could write folowing the cannon more or less and from braking dawn start your own. Curently the story is good. But if you can't handle the wait of a never ending story. Then don't read
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Does anyone know a twilight fic, where the mc doesn't print with anyone? I like the twilight fic, but I hate when the mc is always printed with some vampire, it's frustrating that they are controlled like that. But hey, that's what twilight is about, right? anyway if anyone knows a fic tell me
This was really good. I couldn't stop reading. Please write more. I can't wait to read about what happens with Victoria and her army and the volturi.
Bem foi uma ideia interessante mais não foi bem executada, no meu ponto de vista o autor não deveria ter colocado romance tão cedo na historia, primeiro porque literalmente limito o poder dele a máximo possível. Foram 31 capitulo e quase não teve desenvolvimento nenhum do seus poderes e os que se sabem não é treinado de forma alguma. O romance nessa historia o limitou a permanecer fixo na mesma cidade por um longo tempo e não vejo ele se mudando tão cedo. O MC é um motoqueiro-fantasma pelo amor de Deus deixe ele fazer o trabalho dele, o cara usou o poder literalmente duas a três vezes apenas, e na ultima ainda perdendo para vampiros que nem ao menos se alimenta de sangue humano mais vergonha que isso impossuível. Mesmo se o autor quiser romance continuo deveria apenas pegar a parceira dele e levá-la junto em viagem pelo mundo enquanto o mc fica mais forte, a menina tem 100 anos cara ela já pode viajar sem ter a família inteira no pé. Me surpreende que com apenas essa força fraca ele tenha cogitado a ideia de lutar contra os vampiros mais velhos que literalmente controlam o mundo. Eu recomendaria uma reescrita desse romance. Não fique apenas em um lugar viaje mais lute e treine mais o mc é um motoqueiro-fantasma deixe-o fazer oque tem que ser feito. Não costumo deixa muitas avaliações em romances mais deixei nesse porque a ideia desse romance é incrível pelo menos para mim.
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You get full marks from me my friend, been a Ghost Rider fan myself and there aren't much of these stories out there in the fanfiction world. love the character, story plot executed very well (even though you interfered with Bella not getting the papercut in the timeline) but! all in all perfect story! hope my power stone helps you to make more chapters! Ride with the Spirit of Vengeance my friend!
hello, there👋 I liked the fic a lot ... pls update it and I hope that you don't abandon the fic... ghost rider in the twilight is a unique genre tbh...
Romance ruins the story completely. Author abuses imprinting to speed up romantic relationships so it just feels like the MC loves the love interest because she is pretty and the love interest loves the MC because she looked at him and has warm hugs. Most of the time the dialogue is cringe af. Especially when the MC has murderous and gruesome thoughts because someone said something bad about the love interest. Even when they weren't dating and barely knew each other he was overly defensive of her. The ghost riders' appearance is few and far between. I'm sure I don't speak for myself when I saw I'm mostly interested in the ghost rider aspect of the story. So when it takes a long 8 or 9+ chapters of wait time for real the ghost rider action to happen only for it to feel half-baked and cringe-worthy, it feels like a big letdown. The Writing quality is good and the MC was an interesting character in the beginning but the story simply fell when the bad romance took more precedence over the ghost rider parts of the story. TO summarize my thoughts. This fic is wasted potential. Anyways, that's my hot take on this fic.
keep updating I really enjoy reading this and it sucked when you stopped updating 11 months ago so I was glad when I seen the update of two new chapters
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ok so i haven read this yet but i am interested in it, but will the mc only be in twilight world or are there more worlds. because if not i think the ghost rider is too strong for such a low leveled world like twilight
Very good worth the read ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
i am enjoying it but can decide what my personal rating is yet so just gonna fill the res of this reveiw with random letters g g g g gngngng
looks like this is the end of the road............ nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
Tiết lộ Spoiler wuh happened to the scribblehub version, i was really enjoying it . . . dam . . . . . . . . . ............................................................
I enjoyed it a LOT so where are the chapters! ! ! . . . . . ................................................................................................
This story has potential, people seem to be enjoying it more for the fact that its a ghost rider fanfic rather than what the fanfic has actually delivered. For one 30/34 chapters have been spent with some teen romance wuxia young master BS that is quite a turn off. It wasnt until the most recent 4 chapters that things seem to be picking up. I believe this has the potential to be a 5 star novel however currently it is a 3. I look forward to what it has in store but at the same time if i am to take into account some of the authors earlier choices….dont expect much (Heads up, This story takes place in TWILIGHT)
Gotta say, already loving this ff as twilight ones are rare and especially ones with 10+ chapters 👍 a quick idea for another ff would be a werebear as in instead of shifting into a wolf shift into a bear as they are stronger than wolves, reckon it would be a great ff idea and i reckon you could pull it off 😃 keep up the good work
I honestly didn't know how I would feel about this when I started reading it because it was the first twilight story I've read other than the actual books, I can say for certain that I absolutely love it, I can't recommend it enough.
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Great story author definitely worth the read, just wish there was more chapters XD. Keep up the good work 😁👍.
Author pls continue this fanfic. Z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z z. Z z z. Z z z z. Z z. Z z z z z. Z z. Z. Z z. Z z. Z z z z. Z