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Not a bad robot, well-written with an interesting plot and characters. The main downside is the very slow pace of the story: the first 16 chapters cover literally one day (or one night, if we talk about the protagonist's original world). I don't think I need to explain how many chapters it will take for something relatively interesting to start happening.
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It would be good if the updates are more often because the story so slow paced or the chapters are longer to make up for the slow story line. The story development should also fasten more because the author tells a story about what happened on a whole day for a chapter.
9 chapters and yet to start, tsk dumb author, you write fanfic like it's gonna go for 4000 chapters, wake up and write the important pieces, not why the chicken scream in the morning.
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FF keren please Don't Dropped oke?? Please Don't Dropped oke?? please Don't Dropped oke?? please Don't Dropped oke?? please Don't Dropped oke?? next chapter, next chapter, next chapter, next chapter, next chapter!!!
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Awesome story please don't drop it and keep writing more chapters 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece.
Overall: good, could be better, but i had to stop reading this because the writing style kinda annoyed me. I don't want to get headache. Writing quality - 1* (because i put high importance in this. so, stricter than other criteria) Longwinded. Bad reading flow. Sometimes there's missing word and used bad choice of words making it awkward and harder to read. Other than that, it's good Mc is not braindead, that's a plus. Most new novels nowadays have below average iq mc resulting in many plotholes or forced plot. Well, if you have passion in writing and want to improve yourself better. you should read your old chapters and fix what needed to be fixed. This includes your other novels too.
This novel is HIGH-QUALITY STANDARDS. Second, its enjoyable to read and the mc knows what he wants and gets it. For those interested, the setting is 4 years before the start of one piece and it seems likely that it will turn into a multiverse later but i find thats overdoing it with the current setup. The mc "Homeworld" is literally on the medieval age without seemly any fantasy power, just good old fantasy setting and mc having a devil fruit, he already is the TOP dog in his homeworld and his word will be the law... Unless his homeworld is more than it seems. I say this because there will be no need to travel to other universes to conquer his home planet. He can already do so.
I feel like this story is a very big idea I look forward to seeing the rest of it I recommend it to anybody that likes one piece it would take you right out of this world
its must be the 2nd review that I write in several years here and I just wanted to say that I really love your story :) ( google translate ) i'm frensh xD
This fanfic is very interesting, different from the others, I hope that in the world there were no characters with supernatural powers because I like overpowered MC
Great piece of work. Literally one of the best one piece fic out there. has unique approach to get into piracy and an MC who is not ooc, like a student who when coming to op world could start killing without psyche problems, but has explanation to his ways to do things.
An amazing novel (among the best ones i've read) i like the characters, i like the background and i think this is going to be one of my favourites
bro all i have to say is this is fantastique i love it bro pls dont drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Excellente story keep going[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
-Writing Quality: For me it is good and understandable, simple and has few errors, I'll give it 5/5 -Updating Stability: 13 chapters in three days since the fanfic was released so far is a very good thing deserves appreciation, I'll give it 5/5 -Story Development: Establishing a clear and explicit scenario for the story from the beginning sings the author and readers of the problems of progress and continuity of the story, because this story has really huge potential, I just hope that the author keeps up with the good work, the story has two main worlds in the beginning with the possibility of adding other worlds, MC is considered a host for a very powerful spatial system that can pick up the coordinates of the worlds and open a portal to move to them, this is a good and logical idea, it is clear that the system was designed to make its employer a global conqueror. Getting started in the world of One Piece is a great start, I look forward to seeing the world of the original protagonist that the author said was the OC. I'll give it 5/5 -Character Design: So far we have seen few characters beside the protagonist, the character design of the hero is good, he was reincarnated from the earth and lived for 17 years in a medieval world without any cheat but he was all lucky to be a crown prince in an empire, looks full of struggle and secret fighting between princes, the story is very good, as the protagoniste is very clever, as we saw how the author explained that the hero has already merged with the ideas of his new world. And we saw in the first chapter how cruel he is to test his food on a person before he eats it, and this is necessary to show his cruelty to others so that they do not overthrow him. Everything the protagonist is experiencing in his new world is very abnormal and I look forward to seeing more of him. I'll give it 5/5 -World background: Dolla's world, is the OC written by the writer, so far we've seen the diamond city where the hero lives, and the world of One Piece we've seen monsters island in the western blue, the organization is good so far and the background is great. I'll give it 5/5
Not a bad robot, well-written with an interesting plot and characters. The main downside is the very slow pace of the story: the first 16 chapters cover literally one day (or one night, if we talk about the protagonist's original world). I don't think I need to explain how many chapters it will take for something relatively interesting to start happening.
Legalzin.................................................... Legalzin.................................................... Legalzin.................................................... Legalzin.................................................... Legalzin....................................................
Akhirnya setelah lama menunggu akhirnya rilis juga capter terbaru Tetap semangat untuk penulis Kalo bisa capter terbaru lebih cepat lagi keluar nya
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It would be good if the updates are more often because the story so slow paced or the chapters are longer to make up for the slow story line. The story development should also fasten more because the author tells a story about what happened on a whole day for a chapter.
9 chapters and yet to start, tsk dumb author, you write fanfic like it's gonna go for 4000 chapters, wake up and write the important pieces, not why the chicken scream in the morning.
k!ll Luffy and get hito hito : nika fruit [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
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Sedang menunggu bab baru Kenapa bab baru sangat lama Aku suka cerita di novel ini terutama pencuriyan buah iblis yang di lakukan Aku berharap buah iblis milik kaido atau big mom bisa di curi juga
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Tiết lộ Spoiler FF keren please Don't Dropped oke?? Please Don't Dropped oke?? please Don't Dropped oke?? please Don't Dropped oke?? please Don't Dropped oke?? next chapter, next chapter, next chapter, next chapter, next chapter!!!
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Awesome story please don't drop it and keep writing more chapters 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece. A very good fanfic about one piece.
Overall: good, could be better, but i had to stop reading this because the writing style kinda annoyed me. I don't want to get headache. Writing quality - 1* (because i put high importance in this. so, stricter than other criteria) Longwinded. Bad reading flow. Sometimes there's missing word and used bad choice of words making it awkward and harder to read. Other than that, it's good Mc is not braindead, that's a plus. Most new novels nowadays have below average iq mc resulting in many plotholes or forced plot. Well, if you have passion in writing and want to improve yourself better. you should read your old chapters and fix what needed to be fixed. This includes your other novels too.
This novel is HIGH-QUALITY STANDARDS. Second, its enjoyable to read and the mc knows what he wants and gets it. For those interested, the setting is 4 years before the start of one piece and it seems likely that it will turn into a multiverse later but i find thats overdoing it with the current setup. The mc "Homeworld" is literally on the medieval age without seemly any fantasy power, just good old fantasy setting and mc having a devil fruit, he already is the TOP dog in his homeworld and his word will be the law... Unless his homeworld is more than it seems. I say this because there will be no need to travel to other universes to conquer his home planet. He can already do so.
I feel like this story is a very big idea I look forward to seeing the rest of it I recommend it to anybody that likes one piece it would take you right out of this world
its must be the 2nd review that I write in several years here and I just wanted to say that I really love your story :) ( google translate ) i'm frensh xD
This fanfic is very interesting, different from the others, I hope that in the world there were no characters with supernatural powers because I like overpowered MC
Great piece of work. Literally one of the best one piece fic out there. has unique approach to get into piracy and an MC who is not ooc, like a student who when coming to op world could start killing without psyche problems, but has explanation to his ways to do things.
An amazing novel (among the best ones i've read) i like the characters, i like the background and i think this is going to be one of my favourites
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Excellente story keep going[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
-Writing Quality: For me it is good and understandable, simple and has few errors, I'll give it 5/5 -Updating Stability: 13 chapters in three days since the fanfic was released so far is a very good thing deserves appreciation, I'll give it 5/5 -Story Development: Establishing a clear and explicit scenario for the story from the beginning sings the author and readers of the problems of progress and continuity of the story, because this story has really huge potential, I just hope that the author keeps up with the good work, the story has two main worlds in the beginning with the possibility of adding other worlds, MC is considered a host for a very powerful spatial system that can pick up the coordinates of the worlds and open a portal to move to them, this is a good and logical idea, it is clear that the system was designed to make its employer a global conqueror. Getting started in the world of One Piece is a great start, I look forward to seeing the world of the original protagonist that the author said was the OC. I'll give it 5/5 -Character Design: So far we have seen few characters beside the protagonist, the character design of the hero is good, he was reincarnated from the earth and lived for 17 years in a medieval world without any cheat but he was all lucky to be a crown prince in an empire, looks full of struggle and secret fighting between princes, the story is very good, as the protagoniste is very clever, as we saw how the author explained that the hero has already merged with the ideas of his new world. And we saw in the first chapter how cruel he is to test his food on a person before he eats it, and this is necessary to show his cruelty to others so that they do not overthrow him. Everything the protagonist is experiencing in his new world is very abnormal and I look forward to seeing more of him. I'll give it 5/5 -World background: Dolla's world, is the OC written by the writer, so far we've seen the diamond city where the hero lives, and the world of One Piece we've seen monsters island in the western blue, the organization is good so far and the background is great. I'll give it 5/5