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Viết đánh giáI love the clan background and the looming threat as a story line. But my favorite is the characters I like the MC's playful personality and how Bao'er became a battle maniac. The interactions between characters is fun and engaging if a bit rushed with Tang San and Nian Rongrong but even than it's still engaging
The MC was an unwilling loner in his past life, so when he reincarnated he basically acted like a kid in a candy store, which made the village who thinks of him as a nobel look down on him... All of this is alright. My problem is that he craves love, and in this case his sister was embarrassed by him acting like a kid that she threatened him to stop or else she will ignore him. I don't have a problem with "craves love" part, but when this love turns toxic like when a person wants you to change when you're fine as you are then I will stop reading His sister dosen't love him whole she love some parts and hate others, It would have been fine if the parts she hated were bad but being exited and curious about stuff isn't it for me. And so the MC is scared of his sister not because she is a bad person or something but because she will ignore him if his parts she hate are revealed.
Tiết lộ SpoilerThe author writes interestingly. The text is clear. BUT! He does not understand the world he is writing about. Characters have unreasonable strength and power. In some respects, he writes contradictory things. In order not to be considered verbose, I will give an example: Chapter 12 - Terror Tiger King and Shadow Assassin Panther. In this chapter, his sister consumes a thousand-year-old spiritual skull bone. If you know the world of Douluo Dalu, you will understand that none of the grandfathers present there allowed to merge with this bone. The bones of the skull, trunk, and external bones cannot be replaced. In other situations, the author writes real nonsense, showing that he just liked the original work and decided to write something of his own, but did not understand what he was writing about. This is confirmed by his stupid questions. I apologize, some of the sentences were written using Google Translate.
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I like the story a lot. The character is nice. It also shows the mc works hard to achieve his goals. Overall it is nice to read. It gave me a new perspective of the douluo world. Yup, it has a lot of potentials. Keep up the good work. I hope that it will not be dropped. Love lots... hahahahha [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Me encanta la historia el MC me parece divertido y simpático. Espero que vuelvas a actualizar pronto porque veo que hace un año no actualizas. Besos,salud . Vuelve pronto.
Tiết lộ SpoilerI love the clan background and the looming threat as a story line. But my favorite is the characters I like the MC's playful personality and how Bao'er became a battle maniac. The interactions between characters is fun and engaging if a bit rushed with Tang San and Nian Rongrong but even than it's still engaging
The MC was an unwilling loner in his past life, so when he reincarnated he basically acted like a kid in a candy store, which made the village who thinks of him as a nobel look down on him... All of this is alright. My problem is that he craves love, and in this case his sister was embarrassed by him acting like a kid that she threatened him to stop or else she will ignore him. I don't have a problem with "craves love" part, but when this love turns toxic like when a person wants you to change when you're fine as you are then I will stop reading His sister dosen't love him whole she love some parts and hate others, It would have been fine if the parts she hated were bad but being exited and curious about stuff isn't it for me. And so the MC is scared of his sister not because she is a bad person or something but because she will ignore him if his parts she hate are revealed.
Tiết lộ SpoilerThe author writes interestingly. The text is clear. BUT! He does not understand the world he is writing about. Characters have unreasonable strength and power. In some respects, he writes contradictory things. In order not to be considered verbose, I will give an example: Chapter 12 - Terror Tiger King and Shadow Assassin Panther. In this chapter, his sister consumes a thousand-year-old spiritual skull bone. If you know the world of Douluo Dalu, you will understand that none of the grandfathers present there allowed to merge with this bone. The bones of the skull, trunk, and external bones cannot be replaced. In other situations, the author writes real nonsense, showing that he just liked the original work and decided to write something of his own, but did not understand what he was writing about. This is confirmed by his stupid questions. I apologize, some of the sentences were written using Google Translate.
Tiết lộ Spoiler.. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. im just lazy
3 wishes. ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... ....... .......
I like the story a lot. The character is nice. It also shows the mc works hard to achieve his goals. Overall it is nice to read. It gave me a new perspective of the douluo world. Yup, it has a lot of potentials. Keep up the good work. I hope that it will not be dropped. Love lots... hahahahha [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Tiết lộ SpoilerMore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Good story. Recommend it. ThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanksThanks
Me encanta la historia el MC me parece divertido y simpático. Espero que vuelvas a actualizar pronto porque veo que hace un año no actualizas. Besos,salud . Vuelve pronto.
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