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Nice [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
i take my review back, in later chapters, the mc and some oc are unreaslticlly strong. How can eight year olds be as strong as elite jonins. The story development is onteresting but not best and the mc has a pretty bland personlity.
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updates: good World: naruto charcater design: black hair, black eyes, and looks like a mix of sasuke and madara, basically the cover. Now the most important part, story development: The story is going pretty typical that i seen in other fanfics, genis mc, the mc being bland other than decoding his future choices. He choice is going to anbu and almost beong forced by danzo to join root. The story goes towards a more colder but somewhat hero mc as he has no hostiltity anyhting and is fine fighting for the leaf. Not enough chapters to find out.
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Nice [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
i take my review back, in later chapters, the mc and some oc are unreaslticlly strong. How can eight year olds be as strong as elite jonins. The story development is onteresting but not best and the mc has a pretty bland personlity.
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very nice! very nice! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
updates: good World: naruto charcater design: black hair, black eyes, and looks like a mix of sasuke and madara, basically the cover. Now the most important part, story development: The story is going pretty typical that i seen in other fanfics, genis mc, the mc being bland other than decoding his future choices. He choice is going to anbu and almost beong forced by danzo to join root. The story goes towards a more colder but somewhat hero mc as he has no hostiltity anyhting and is fine fighting for the leaf. Not enough chapters to find out.
moreeemomoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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