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te doy 3 estrellas solo por ser un fanfic de Pokémon, pero sinceramente no voy a leerlo el hecho de que hagas como unos de sus mayores deseo del mc vencer al inútil de ash de por si me saco el 100% de ganas de leer la historia pero aprecio que te molestes en crear una historia de Pokémon. buena suerte
Honestly a good story, I won't go into detail about it but ya'll should check it out yourself, but idk if the author will see this but please let us know if you dropped this or not, if not when's the next update?
it is ok overall but the constent bad grammer, names that are consent wrong and the plot holes that keep popping up right after each other makes it annoying and a waste of time to read
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I gave you a four because I feel bad dunking on your story after only reading 3 chapters. Unfortunately getting a legendary or mythical as a starter is a non-starter for me. What is the point of going on an adventure if you have a Pokémon that is anywhere even close to the realm of a god as a starter? And if is not a god and you make the Pokémon weak what is the point of making it a mythical? It just confuses my why a writer would start a story like that. It limits the storytelling potential so much and makes it hard to justify giving any sort of struggle to your charactor. It delves into the realm of power fantisy, which is only really gratifying to read if it takes work to get.
hello! I've read your story and I've let it update so I have more to read. I would like to ask if you could translate it into Spanish on Wattpad
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
I would give this a higher review but, the authors decided to use a trope that I detest. the author is decided that even though the main character has been alive for multiple years in the New world that he should still have Old wounds in his heart. thus making the character an emotional stick.
the first 50 chapters where good, then it seems like the author had a stroke, which turned the story wuxia and the grammar to be almost as bad as mtl
Well for one. Way to fast paced.. one moment your alive doing things save a child. Now your talking infront of god.… yea. It could also thin out the paragraphs as well.
I actuall liked this novel. yeah it kinda went left fast but it’s definitely not deserving of as much hate that is in the comments. Y’al acting like its supposed to be exactly like the original. It’s a fanfic plus he said that he aint play the game nd stuff so cut them some slick. im glad i actually looked at if for myself instead of going off the comments.
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Tiết lộ SpoilerDou 2 estrelas ou personagem pois que dar uma de gostosão de MC de xianxian, em outras palavra quando se trata de mulher não tem uma atitude ou e decisivo com o relação ao mesmo, a história está nota 9,5 no desenvolvimento 👍
This Fan-fic is too frustrating first mc gets mytical pokemon like it's common pokemon second author makes said mytical pokemon potantial too weak in anime/manga/game there is no such a limit but some pokemons can be more powerful stat wise yet pokemons do not have such a limit in the end pokemons always improve themselves and that's what makes one of the most attracting point of franchise but author turned this into chinese cultivitation novel and I even don't want to talk about mc's enemies it just gives me more headache and mc is supposed to be talent incarnate and in 3 months he improves a lot but for not giving mc a moment to shine author adds team rockets attack on finals mc gives up finals to Cynthia(fifteen year old version) this part I don't think totaly bad for mc but after watching pokemon and seeing how many times ash lost I can't help but triggered anyway lastly mc, oak, ash and gary's idiotic bad blood part is absolutely thrash so if you gonna read it skip those part and that's all
J'ai l'impression que personne ne parle du système de combat niveau qui est le mois réaliste, genre Leviator sous pluie + intimidation ««« garshompe
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Motivos de baja puntuacion : 1- los miticos parecen aparecer debajo de una piedra sin intentarlo 2- mc con minusculas cansino en el mejor de los casos 3- cuesta leer la historia ( no por mala traduccion no por errores ortograficos si no ...el desarrollo o forma de llevar a cabo la historia 4- Y ESTE SE LLEVA LA PALMA NO MAS DE 4 ATAQUE NADA para cualquier fic de pokemon eso me mata hablas de los asesinatos por pokemons pero lo de 4 movimientos nada ja
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te doy 3 estrellas solo por ser un fanfic de Pokémon, pero sinceramente no voy a leerlo el hecho de que hagas como unos de sus mayores deseo del mc vencer al inútil de ash de por si me saco el 100% de ganas de leer la historia pero aprecio que te molestes en crear una historia de Pokémon. buena suerte
Honestly a good story, I won't go into detail about it but ya'll should check it out yourself, but idk if the author will see this but please let us know if you dropped this or not, if not when's the next update?
it is ok overall but the constent bad grammer, names that are consent wrong and the plot holes that keep popping up right after each other makes it annoying and a waste of time to read
Are u going to update it anytime soon ??[img=update][img=update][img=angry][img=gift][img=coins][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
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I gave you a four because I feel bad dunking on your story after only reading 3 chapters. Unfortunately getting a legendary or mythical as a starter is a non-starter for me. What is the point of going on an adventure if you have a Pokémon that is anywhere even close to the realm of a god as a starter? And if is not a god and you make the Pokémon weak what is the point of making it a mythical? It just confuses my why a writer would start a story like that. It limits the storytelling potential so much and makes it hard to justify giving any sort of struggle to your charactor. It delves into the realm of power fantisy, which is only really gratifying to read if it takes work to get.
hello! I've read your story and I've let it update so I have more to read. I would like to ask if you could translate it into Spanish on Wattpad
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
I would give this a higher review but, the authors decided to use a trope that I detest. the author is decided that even though the main character has been alive for multiple years in the New world that he should still have Old wounds in his heart. thus making the character an emotional stick.
the first 50 chapters where good, then it seems like the author had a stroke, which turned the story wuxia and the grammar to be almost as bad as mtl
Well for one. Way to fast paced.. one moment your alive doing things save a child. Now your talking infront of god.… yea. It could also thin out the paragraphs as well.
I actuall liked this novel. yeah it kinda went left fast but it’s definitely not deserving of as much hate that is in the comments. Y’al acting like its supposed to be exactly like the original. It’s a fanfic plus he said that he aint play the game nd stuff so cut them some slick. im glad i actually looked at if for myself instead of going off the comments.
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Tiết lộ SpoilerDou 2 estrelas ou personagem pois que dar uma de gostosão de MC de xianxian, em outras palavra quando se trata de mulher não tem uma atitude ou e decisivo com o relação ao mesmo, a história está nota 9,5 no desenvolvimento 👍
This Fan-fic is too frustrating first mc gets mytical pokemon like it's common pokemon second author makes said mytical pokemon potantial too weak in anime/manga/game there is no such a limit but some pokemons can be more powerful stat wise yet pokemons do not have such a limit in the end pokemons always improve themselves and that's what makes one of the most attracting point of franchise but author turned this into chinese cultivitation novel and I even don't want to talk about mc's enemies it just gives me more headache and mc is supposed to be talent incarnate and in 3 months he improves a lot but for not giving mc a moment to shine author adds team rockets attack on finals mc gives up finals to Cynthia(fifteen year old version) this part I don't think totaly bad for mc but after watching pokemon and seeing how many times ash lost I can't help but triggered anyway lastly mc, oak, ash and gary's idiotic bad blood part is absolutely thrash so if you gonna read it skip those part and that's all
J'ai l'impression que personne ne parle du système de combat niveau qui est le mois réaliste, genre Leviator sous pluie + intimidation ««« garshompe
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Motivos de baja puntuacion : 1- los miticos parecen aparecer debajo de una piedra sin intentarlo 2- mc con minusculas cansino en el mejor de los casos 3- cuesta leer la historia ( no por mala traduccion no por errores ortograficos si no ...el desarrollo o forma de llevar a cabo la historia 4- Y ESTE SE LLEVA LA PALMA NO MAS DE 4 ATAQUE NADA para cualquier fic de pokemon eso me mata hablas de los asesinatos por pokemons pero lo de 4 movimientos nada ja
It is really nice 👍. Power stone for you , keep it up