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5 stars for the author! yey! this story is really intriguing. The flow of the story is good too! Words used are pleasing to eyes, easy to underatand..thank you for making such wonderful book, author!!
Good start and clear writing style. It's immersive and easy to imagine, i like it! Good luck, Liza! Hope to read more! I added the book to my lib to follow the journey!
i tried for the second time to read it, as it was in free access, and I just can't. The level of naivety and stupidity shown by the MC is astounding. Additionally, I suppose that the language level should improve with the amount of text uploaded, but it did not. There are plenty of mistakes & inconsistencies that make it somewhat difficult and annoying to read. I do not know why is this book so often given in free access :/
the story itself and the world is very interesting, however the characters are not very developed and are extremely naive (the main heroine acts idiotically almost all the time. I thing that there is a solid base for a great story, but a lot of work needs to be put to improve it.
Very well done. Love the characters and world so far. I hope to keep seeing more chapters being published! Good job!
The story was clear and understandable. First chapter and I'm already liking it. It's a good and nice story for a fairytales fan like me. Nice
thank u author...for giving us this beautiful story...but u completed this story...actually i was looking for more..hopefully we will see more story from your side..waiting for your new...book all the best...and reader pl read this story..this is too good
Lol this is like a fairy tail novel, kind of like Beauty and the Beast mixed with Little Red Riding Hood. The novel has a very fresh and interesting plot and was depicted very nicely. There were a few errors in grammar here and there but nothing too major to affect the reader's understanding of the novel. Overall, this was well thought and was honestly a very good read. Keep up the good work! [img=recommend]
5/5 [img=recommend] What an interesting and fresh plot! I love how the story progressed. There's a mixture of mystery and excitement in every chapter! Hats up to this novel! Added to my library! <3
tho I don't know the whole story, the first scene is already eye catching. I'm intrigued to what's the mystery behind that cave. Not really my ideal genre but i totally love it. My curiosity tells me to read it. Good work, author!
With the touch of a seasoned author. This book has almost no mistakes. The book is great and the synopsis, especially the cover, is interesting and intriguing. Read the first few chapters and it's amazing!
So far i'm really enjoying this story. It's simple to follow and the plot is as described in synopsis. I feel like the flow of the story is really interesting and the world/characters are well described. Great job author!
It was like I was transported into the world of beauty and the beast and little red ridinghood. A good read for teens and adult a like. Good work Author! This book is really promising! Hoping for your success!
I wish I could give ten starts to this book❤❤❤ I'm in really love with this book🤗🤗🤗 basically I love fantasy theme most🥰🥰🥰 from now this book is one of my favorite💜💜💜
This book is great, really interesting, i love the characters but my favorite is the werewolf Rhett, this is a page-turner for sure and I will keep reading to see what happens next. Well done author.
I love how interesting the story is! I anticipate the revelation in the future and I'll definitely stay tuned! I hope that Sabrina would be fine when events started to unfold.
I like the characters, the gurl is innocent and don't know much of the world, the wolf is very naughty, not sure if he is good or evil yet, but he seems to be a good men. The grandma is heartfull and the witch is a good witch I guess. I would like if you could describe the world where they are in. And don't let them be in the cave for too long. Also you could make the chapters a little bit longer. But prinzipiell is the story good, continue writing :)
Writing Quality together with the World Background: So it happened in the cave after she promised her grandmother not to get inside that cave. And it happened. The cave has been described well and the location itself on Neendera. The writing quality has flaws but it can be edited from time to time. (I should say the same to myself I also have the same mistakes) Stability of Updates together with Story Development and Character Design: Grandmother is a soft-hearted one, Sabrina is easily tempted but not weak. She only just pitied the wolf. The witch and the rest including the wolf, are progressing well as the chapter goes on. (Well all the characters are in progress mainly Sabrina.) The development will continue ! I am glad I read this book. Write more !
Tiết lộ Spoiler
[WARNING: SPOILERS] Love this book so much! Sabrina and Mr Tall Handsome Guy (aka Rhett) are compelling characters, and I can't wait to read what happens next! I highly recommend this book, it's a wonderful page-turner that will leave you on the edge of your seat, waiting in torturing anticipation for what comes next! So read it, I guarantee you won't be disappointed ;) - mari <3
5 stars for the author! yey! this story is really intriguing. The flow of the story is good too! Words used are pleasing to eyes, easy to underatand..thank you for making such wonderful book, author!!
Good start and clear writing style. It's immersive and easy to imagine, i like it! Good luck, Liza! Hope to read more! I added the book to my lib to follow the journey!
i tried for the second time to read it, as it was in free access, and I just can't. The level of naivety and stupidity shown by the MC is astounding. Additionally, I suppose that the language level should improve with the amount of text uploaded, but it did not. There are plenty of mistakes & inconsistencies that make it somewhat difficult and annoying to read. I do not know why is this book so often given in free access :/
the story itself and the world is very interesting, however the characters are not very developed and are extremely naive (the main heroine acts idiotically almost all the time. I thing that there is a solid base for a great story, but a lot of work needs to be put to improve it.
Very well done. Love the characters and world so far. I hope to keep seeing more chapters being published! Good job!
The story was clear and understandable. First chapter and I'm already liking it. It's a good and nice story for a fairytales fan like me. Nice
thank u author...for giving us this beautiful story...but u completed this story...actually i was looking for more..hopefully we will see more story from your side..waiting for your new...book all the best...and reader pl read this story..this is too good
Lol this is like a fairy tail novel, kind of like Beauty and the Beast mixed with Little Red Riding Hood. The novel has a very fresh and interesting plot and was depicted very nicely. There were a few errors in grammar here and there but nothing too major to affect the reader's understanding of the novel. Overall, this was well thought and was honestly a very good read. Keep up the good work! [img=recommend]
5/5 [img=recommend] What an interesting and fresh plot! I love how the story progressed. There's a mixture of mystery and excitement in every chapter! Hats up to this novel! Added to my library! <3
tho I don't know the whole story, the first scene is already eye catching. I'm intrigued to what's the mystery behind that cave. Not really my ideal genre but i totally love it. My curiosity tells me to read it. Good work, author!
With the touch of a seasoned author. This book has almost no mistakes. The book is great and the synopsis, especially the cover, is interesting and intriguing. Read the first few chapters and it's amazing!
So far i'm really enjoying this story. It's simple to follow and the plot is as described in synopsis. I feel like the flow of the story is really interesting and the world/characters are well described. Great job author!
It was like I was transported into the world of beauty and the beast and little red ridinghood. A good read for teens and adult a like. Good work Author! This book is really promising! Hoping for your success!
I wish I could give ten starts to this book❤❤❤ I'm in really love with this book🤗🤗🤗 basically I love fantasy theme most🥰🥰🥰 from now this book is one of my favorite💜💜💜
This book is great, really interesting, i love the characters but my favorite is the werewolf Rhett, this is a page-turner for sure and I will keep reading to see what happens next. Well done author.
I love how interesting the story is! I anticipate the revelation in the future and I'll definitely stay tuned! I hope that Sabrina would be fine when events started to unfold.
I like the characters, the gurl is innocent and don't know much of the world, the wolf is very naughty, not sure if he is good or evil yet, but he seems to be a good men. The grandma is heartfull and the witch is a good witch I guess. I would like if you could describe the world where they are in. And don't let them be in the cave for too long. Also you could make the chapters a little bit longer. But prinzipiell is the story good, continue writing :)
Writing Quality together with the World Background: So it happened in the cave after she promised her grandmother not to get inside that cave. And it happened. The cave has been described well and the location itself on Neendera. The writing quality has flaws but it can be edited from time to time. (I should say the same to myself I also have the same mistakes) Stability of Updates together with Story Development and Character Design: Grandmother is a soft-hearted one, Sabrina is easily tempted but not weak. She only just pitied the wolf. The witch and the rest including the wolf, are progressing well as the chapter goes on. (Well all the characters are in progress mainly Sabrina.) The development will continue ! I am glad I read this book. Write more !
Tiết lộ Spoiler
[WARNING: SPOILERS] Love this book so much! Sabrina and Mr Tall Handsome Guy (aka Rhett) are compelling characters, and I can't wait to read what happens next! I highly recommend this book, it's a wonderful page-turner that will leave you on the edge of your seat, waiting in torturing anticipation for what comes next! So read it, I guarantee you won't be disappointed ;) - mari <3