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Chương 222: Shedding Mortal Skin

"Lord…" Ga Shu took a deep breath, then clasped his hands towards Yaan and said: "I wish to undertaken my immortal ascension tribulation now, if that is ok with you."

"Right now?" Yaan blinked in surprise. "Don't you want to rest for a while?"

"No." Ga Shu shook his head firmly. "After going through Nirvana Death, I have been afflicted by the calamity of death. My life essence will deplete by 10% every day until I begin my Nirvana Rebirth…I am ready."

"Nobody is ever ready." Rui spoke in Yaan's mind.

"I see. Then, go ahead, Ga Shu." Yaan paused briefly, then decided to give him some advice, based on his understanding of the process. "Nirvana Rebirth is true rebirth. You will experience death, tribulation, and then new life. Be prepared to die…that is the only way to live."

Ga Shu nodded solemnly, then took his place far away.

"Good advice, considering you're clueless yourself." Rui commented.

Yaan ignored her. His eyes were trained on Ga Shu, wanting to see exactly what the immortal ascension tribulation looked like.

Ga Shu stood up, then took a deep breath and closed his eyes. After a few moments, he urged his mortal life essence to ascend past its limit, transcending into immortal life essence.

Instantly, Ga Shu died.

But this was to be expected.

His body simply slumped to the floor, dropping like a rag-doll. There was no great explosion, nothing spectacular…he just dropped.

This was the first stage of rebirth; death. In order to overcome this stage, Ga Shu needed to face his own death with a clear heart. If he failed to do so, he would simply just…die.

The second stage was the stage that would determine whether or not Ga Shu would get to live again; tribulation.

Ga Shu broke through into Nirvana Rebirth using his understanding of the dao of life. As such, he would experience the dao of life tribulation. He did not know what this might entail, but he felt that he was ready for anything.

Suddenly, Ga Shu found himself standing on one side of a line. There was no sign of any sort, but he instinctively knew that this side of the line was 'life'.

The other side of the line was 'death'.

Ga Shu looked across the line. He saw many people on the other side. They were all laughing, happy, at peace…

On his side of the line, he was the only one. It was cold, lonely and painful.

Suddenly, when Ga Shu looked across the line again, he froze.

On the other side of the line, he saw a familiar face, a face he had thought he would never see again…

It was his wife, Freya.

She was beautiful, her appearance was that of his wife during her most stunning stage of life. Her pale skin was decorated with a few freckles, her hair was braided up in a fashion which was all too familiar to Ga Shu. When he caught sight of her bright green eyes, his entire body trembled. He was so shocked, so overwhelmed with emotion, that he almost dropped to his knees on the spot.

Ga Shu knew that his emotional and mental state were being influenced heavily by the dao of life, but in this moment, he didn't care.

He reached towards her and cried out, but no voice came from his mouth. His wife was getting swept up with the festive crowd, enjoying the party, the relaxation, the comfort and peace to be found in death.

Whilst he stood alone on the side of life, Ga Shu felt cold. His heart was broken, shattered from pain. Nobody was here to share his burdens. There was really very little reason to stay on this side…

Ga Shu knew this was his immortal tribulation, and he finally understood how the tribulation of life could be so difficult.

Overcoming death was a battle, a fight, a challenge.

Overcoming life was an endless trial, often with no reward to ever be found.

Choosing life…was difficult.

Ga Shu took one last, longing look at his wife, before forcing himself to turn around.

He found that because he had stared into the comfort of death for too long, the pain of life had become countless times greater. Every millimetre he turned away from the comfort of death, felt like blades cutting into his skin. Every step he took away from that line, made him feel as if there was ice digging into his feet, spreading up through his legs and covering his entire body.

Every time he thought about how he had just turned his back on his wife, even if it was only a wishful dream of her, filled his heart with endless pain.

Ga Shu walked, with pain and difficulty, through the tunnel that led back to life. The tunnel seemed to be endless, as if it would never end, as if the only choice was to turn back, embracing death…

He knew that he could not glance back, not even once, because he would be entranced, he would not be able to continue persevering along the path of life.

Life was difficult…but at least life was life.

Finally, Ga Shu made it to the end of the tunnel.

Gasp!

Yaan watched for three days as Ga Shu lay there, his body, soul and mind held in a state of false-death, all whilst his mortal life essence was steadily draining away. Spending three days in an immortal tribulation was quite long, but Ga Shu had plenty of life essence to endure it. He burned through 3,000 more drops of mortal life essence…but in the end, he prevailed.

The moment Ga Shu awoke, he slowly stood up, then stared down silently.

On the ground, was his body; his old, mortal body.

'Shedding the mortal skin' was a very literal term for the immortal ascension. Upon overcoming Nirvana, the cultivator would leave behind all of their mortal baggage, abandoning every unnecessary part of their past self, retaining only the superior, immortal components.

But that was not all.

After ascending to the Immortal Step, the mortal life essence also transcended, becoming immortal life essence!

Mortal life essence decreased by one drop every year, but immortal life essence did not decrease, not ever! An immortal with a single drop of immortal life essence could theoretically retain their life for eternity, though in reality, that was not the case, there were many other factors involved.

When Ga She returned from his immortal tribulation, he immediately began releasing his full immortal aura, so his full immortal spender was on display. This was common for newly ascended immortals, it often took them a few moments to relearn their control over their own power.

He had the appearance of a large, muscular, boisterous man, yet his dark hair was braided in the style of the fair-bodied Fae Tribe.

Ga Shu was now enormous, towering at over 30 feet tall. His muscles were dark, but possessed a faint golden glimmer, as if his entire body had been built from gold.

His aura exuded power and dominance, and yet, as he saw Yaan approaching, he bowed respectfully and clasped his hands in greeting.

"Lord Red, I have succeeded in my immortal ascension. Perhaps now, I can be of use to you."

Yaan smiled. A faint gleam could be seen in his eyes as he examined the newly ascended immortal.

"Yes. Perhaps you might."

Over the past three years, Yaan had been assaulting the Lunar Song Tribe's various branch tribes. He killed many of their powerhouses, devouring masses of slaughter aura into his sea of consciousness. He used this method to temper his sea of consciousness, all whilst trying to comprehend the complexities of slaughter.

Yaan knew that if he wanted to progress through soul cultivation, then he absolutely needed to find a way to refine slaughter aura into soul force!

It was the only way. Soul cultivation could not be forced using resources, it relied entirely on talent. Unfortunately, his talent in this path was non-existent, so he needed to develop his own way.

Aside from the Lunar Song Tribe's branch tribesmen, Yaan also ended up killing hordes of Rank 6 beasts, 6-Star astral spirits, and even a few 6-Star warriors. Almost all of these were traps laid out by the Lunar Song Tribe. In the end, those traps became Yaan's nourishment.

Because finally, he had a breakthrough.

Watching Ga Shu's complete journey through Nirvana opened Yaan's eyes to a new world of possibilities. Seeing this transformation for himself made him realise that a person could undergo some truly drastic changes! The essence of their being, their very form, their cultivation foundation; all of it could be transformed!

If a person could be changed so thoroughly, then his Vital Qi core could definitely be transformed into a dual layered core!

Before anything else, Ga Shu wanted to deal with his own mortal body. In the end, he dug a second grave besides his wife's grave, placing his old mortal form into a coffin by her side. He said nothing from beginning to end as he dug and filled in the grave, whilst Yaan watched silently, waiting for him to finish his business.

Once Ga Shu was done, they walked away from this place.

"We are now a Rank 7 tribe." Yaan explained to Ga Shu as they walked. "This means that we can only attack other Rank 7 tribes. We've already destroyed the Lunar Song Tribe's branches throughout the kingdom…so, why not topple their main tribe?"

Ga Shu forced a smile.

"My lord, they have four immortals, and I am just a newly ascended immortal."

"True." Yaan nodded. "But regardless, my goal this time is…unique. I don't actually care about taking over the kingdom, I just need to kill. This is for my cultivation, no more and no less."

Ga Shu's eyes lit up and he understood.

"You mean to say, you just want me to come along as insurance? To protect you incase they try anything?"

"Right." Yaan didn't deny it. "In theory, immortals cannot attack mortals, but what if those mortals threaten to destroy their entire tribe? Are they supposed to just sit back and watch?"

"My lord, I dare say that in this entire empire only you are able to threaten an immortal kingdom as a mortal, that is why this isn't mentioned in the war flower law. And generally speaking, an immortal tribe will be protected by an immortal formation…"

Ga Shu hesitated after saying this, but Yaan just laughed.

"I've studied their formation in my spare time during the past three years. From up close, from afar, from drawings, from probing attacks, and so on. At the very least, I'm confident that I can get us in."

In the end, despite his uncertainties, Ga Shu went along with Yaan's wishes.

In order to make this look like a proper war and not just a lone man's crazy attack, Yaan ordered multiple teams to attack every direct vassal underneath the Lunar Song Tribe at the same time. If they were lucky, this might also serve as a distraction.

Yaan and Ga Shu crossed the kingdom.

Now that he was an immortal, Ga Shu noticed some extra details about Yaan that he had overlooked up until now.

His calm demeanour when dealing with immortals was always impressive, but now that Ga Shu understood the immense strength held by immortals, he was stunned by his lord's tenacity in this regard.

And then there was the slaughterous desire that lingered in his eyes…

That slaughter was clearly a part of his cultivation. His lord was obviously trying to immerse himself in slaughter to progress his cultivation somehow or another, but that killing intent really was horrifying.

And then finally, there was the air of loneliness about him.

He did not show it much, he actively tried to hide it even, but this lord of his…was probably the loneliest man that Ga Shu had ever met…

Finally, they reached the Lunar Song Tribe.


Chương 223: Lunar Song Tribe

The Lunar Song Tribe's main tribe was truly enormous, spanning 3,000 miles from end to end.

It was like a giant dome, and in fact, the tribe-protecting formation really did look like a giant glass dome, covering the entire tribe.

From afar, Ga Shu stared doubtfully.

"How are we supposed to break in exactly? Brute force?"

"Of course not, that would set off every defensive measure across the formation. No, we're going to block out the moon." Yaan replied matter of factly, as if he hadn't just said something absurd.

"I'm sorry, what?"

Yaan smiled as he stared at the formation.

"Lunar Song Tribe…a tribe named after the moon, and after song. Or rather, a tribe named after the formation that was built in this place eons ago by the tribe's founding ancestor."

Seeing that Ga Shu wasn't following, Yaan explained it properly.

"This formation is powered by the lunar rays. It is charged during the night by absorbing energy from the lunar rays. The energy is channelled through vibrations, or songs, through the glass dome. The energy gathered during the night is sufficient to last throughout the following day…but there is no further storage than that! A single day without moonlight will leave this tribe completely defenceless!"

"How could that be?" Ga Shu asked with wide eyes. "What if there are clouds? Or a storm?"

"Formations are built with their environment in mind. There hasn't been a single cloud capable of blocking the lunar rays since this formation's creation."

After calming down, Ga Shu asked the important question.

"So what are we going to do?"

"As I said, block out the moon. If we create a big cloud, there will be no more lunar rays to power the formation. If the formation goes down, the tribe is ours."

"This…will this really work?" Ga Shu asked doubtfully.

"It's worth at least trying, isn't it?"

And so, the pair set about blocking out the moon.

Creating a huge cloud turned out to be a task beyond their capabilities, so instead, they created air currents and shifted countless clouds from the surrounding regions to totally cover the tribe.

The tribesmen were shocked by the sudden appearance of never seen before clouds, but they were more excited than anything. Even the tribe's immortals only thought it to be a strange coincidence, they did not consider something so ridiculous like someone moving the clouds to block out the moon in order to disable their formation.

When nightfall came, five hours into the moon-less night, the formation finally went dark. Seeing this, Ga Shu's jaw dropped.

"I…I can't believe that actually worked…"

The two entered through the front entrance, concealed of course, but also hidden from the formation's detection systems which were presently disabled.

They immediately flew inwards, heading towards the elite warrior sector. Here, all the promising 5-Star warriors of the tribe trained ceaselessly, day in and day out. This was also the place where the immortals usually resided.

On this day, the warriors were distracted from their usual training as the imperial court's central bell rang out chaotically. The bell chimes were normally elegant sounding, but the chaos of the repeated overlaps of ringing caused the elegance to be lost.

When Yaan saw that he had attracted everyone's attention, he finally made his announcement. He decided to attract everyone's attention, as this way, he would be able to draw the tribesmen towards him quickly, saving him time in hunting them all down.

"My name is…well, most people like to call me 'Red Demon' these days. Anyway, I am here for your lives."

Instantly, all hell broke lose. Yaan ran rampant, massacring every 5-Star warrior he could find. In fact, he killed everyone in this imperial sector, the 4-Stars and 5-Stars alike.

He needed to kill…to slaughter!

He killed and killed, losing himself in a sea of red.

Inevitably, the immortals showed up, three of the four in total. They showed enraged expressions, but when Ga Shu suddenly showed himself, they all looked shocked.

"How about we allow the juniors to fight it out amongst themselves, hmm?" Ga Shu suggested with a fearless smile.

These immortals were all older, stronger, and more experienced than Ga Shu, but Ga Shu was not afraid. Even if the others were stronger, they were all 7-Star Immortals! Ga Shu felt confident that if he wanted to leave with his lord, they would not be able to stop him.

Besides, Ga Shu had been through too much, and at this point, his fear towards death had completely faded away.

The three immortals looked down at the wreckage and destruction, at the murder and death of their most promising young warriors. Seeing the wanton devastation caused by Yaan in such a short period of time, they turned to Ga Shu in rage.

"There is one of you and three of us, what makes you think you can stop us?!"

Ga Shu sighed and shook his head.

"I can't. But can you do anything to him?" He nodded towards Yaan, watching as he slew yet another 5-Star elite.

"We can…we can release the beasts, the astral spirits, the-"

"Do as you wish." Ga Shu nodded. "I just don't want to see any immortal level characters interfering with my lord's battle."

Hearing an immortal refer to a mortal as his 'lord' made these immortals show serious expressions. They had all suspected it at some point, but now they were almost certain…the Red Demon must definitely possess a seriously powerful backer!

Naturally, Yaan had anticipated this misunderstanding. Since it worked in his favour, neither he nor Ga Shu had any intention of correcting them.

"Damnit all!" The Third Immortal King, the man who had been toyed with the most by Yaan, almost lost his mind, suddenly releasing every ferocious defence upon the invader that they had available to them.

Yaan quickly turned, his expression becoming serious as he saw the incoming wave of Rank 6 beasts, astral spirits, and other strange creatures. This horrifying scene caused his eyes to light up with slaughterous joy.

He had been planning this for three long years, and finally, his plan was about to come to fruition…

Yaan suddenly stopped. He ignored the chaos and focussed inwards on his sea of consciousness. Within his sea of consciousness, the slaughter aura that he had been gathering and accumulating for three long years, actually underwent a very strong, very interesting change.

During the constant battles within his sea of consciousness, it was inevitable that the slaughter aura would end up slaughtering countless psyche power avatars.

What Yaan did not expect, was that after a large amount of slaughter aura gathered in one place and slaughtered so much of his psyche power, it underwent a change.

It transformed into a seed of slaughter power, or as Rui called it, 'slaughter essence'.

Slaughter essence was the very same power that was born within his Qi back on the Southern Continent, forming the variant Slaughter Qi. Slaughter essence was the same power that entered his soul, causing his soul to transform into a slaughter soul. Slaughter essence was the same residual power that he fought against in his sea of consciousness back then, building up the strength of his psyche power, before returning all of the slaughter essence to his soul.

Yaan finally understood slaughter now, or at least, he understood a certain essence of slaughter.

Two years ago, a slaughter essence seed was born from the dense accumulation of slaughter aura in his sea of consciousness. Over the past two years, he had nourished and grown this seed, transforming it into a full-fledged slaughter essence. It wasn't nearly as powerful as the slaughterous essence in his spirit soul, but it was a similar type of entity.

He grew the slaughter essence by feeding it more and more slaughter aura, but also by fighting it constantly, allowing it to devour his wisdom from his sea of consciousness. As the slaughter essence consumed the fabric of his sea, Yaan came to understand slaughter on an even deeper level.

When Yaan comprehended this essence of slaughter, he finally came to understand the Fiend Transformation technique and the Fiend Foundation.

They both involved slaughter essence…

The Fiend Transformation transformed the body, but it also transformed the dantian and the dantian walls. It made the dantian walls into a membrane which converted slaughter aura into slaughter energy. Then, within the dantian, the slaughter energy was naturally turned into a more stable, safe state; Qi.

The Fiend Foundation functioned on the principle of the dantian containing the smallest trace of slaughter essence, and that was enough to completely change a person's life.

And now, in the midst of this chaotic battle, Yaan was going to create his own change.

Using a giant illusory hand, imbued with slaughterous soul force, he grasped the slaughter essence within his sea of consciousness. He tore this essence out, with much greater ease compared to the first time he did this.

The illusory hand directly dragged the slaughter essence through his body at its fastest possibly speed. Everything it touched nearly died along the way, including many of Yaan's cells and portions of his vitality…

Once it reached his chest, he slammed the slaughter essence into his vital core.

He controlled his slaughter soul on the inside, preventing the new slaughter essence from coming in and fusing with his soul. Such a fusion would cause his soul cultivation to improve, but it would be a temporary gain, forsaking the long term benefits.

At the same time, the illusory hand tightly grasped tightly his vital core. This hand forced the slaughter essence to dig deeper into the core, until it reached the core's inner region.

The new slaughter essence rapidly spread out. Under the restrictions from inside and out, the only thing it could do was attach itself to the inside of his Vital Qi core, plastering around the inner perimeter and latching onto the inner surface.

On the outside, the Vital Qi core remained the same.

On the inside, it no longer resembled a Vital Qi core, as it had been remoulded by the slaughter essence!

But Yaan was not yet done.

Just as the slaughter essence was taking its hold within his Vital Qi core, he used yet another illusory hand to grasp at his entire dantian…

RIP!

A grating sound echoed through Yaan's body and mind as he tore the faint trace of slaughter essence out from his own dantian walls!

This was the portion of the Fiend Foundation that allowed the dantian to refine Qi from slaughter aura. Yaan no longer needed this ability, and in fact, it was actively hindering his current cultivation progress!

Right now, this trace of slaughter essence would be of much greater use if it was moved to the boundary between the two layers of his new dual layered core!

Bang!

Yaan let out a muffled grunt as he forcefully slammed the extracted slaughter essence into his Vital Qi core. It travelled through the core, reaching the inside, where the new slaughter essence was taking hold. The trace of slaughter essence extracted from his dantian weaved its way into the empty spaces within this layer.

All of this took a while to explain, but it happened in an instant. Yaan had planned this for a long time, he knew exactly what he was going to do beforehand, so he wasted very little time when he finally acted.

Just as the newly formed dual core was beginning to set, the scores of fiendish creatures in the outside world finally reached him. Yaan opened his eyes and grinned evilly, not hiding the burning slaughterous light from his gaze.

The dual layered core had been formed, but for his core to truly stabilise, it would need to be fed with a continual stream of high level, powerful slaughter aura. The internal region of the core needed to be filled with 'slaughter force', which was the new name that Yaan had given to his slaughter variant soul force. Likewise, Yaan had started referring to his slaughter variant spirit soul as a 'slaughter soul'.

Soul force was typically something temporary, it was created by the soul and used in an instant during soul attacks, but it could also be turned into a stable power. It was entirely possible to create a dense region of soul force within a completely enclosed space!

Yaan needed to fill the inside of his dual layered core with slaughter force; only by doing this would the dual layered core reach completion and stabilise its internal environment.

Even then, there was a chance that this would all fail…

But it was too late to back down now, the enemies were already upon him.

WOMP!

A swarm of 6-Star astral spirits enveloped Yaan entirely, completely burying him beneath a sheet of darkness. Seeing this, the First and Second Immortal Kings relaxed. They even laughed as they glanced at the Third King, teasing him for his incompetence.

"This child caused you such a headache? All it took was a dozen 6-Star astral spirits and he-"

BANG!

The astral spirits were blown back, but that was not all; each had been penetrated by a sword imbued with the power of slaughter!

Yaan was now able to combine his sword arts with the illusory attacks that were filled with slaughter force. He even managed to massacre a dozen 6-Star astral spirits instantly using this move, shocking the First and Second Immortal Kings up above.

The Third King was not surprised, whilst Ga Shu thought this much was only normal.

Freed from the astral spirits, Yaan felt their powerful slaughter auras flowing into him. His eyes shone brightly as, for the first time ever, the slaughter aura was not attracted to his dantian as a whole, but specifically to his dual layered core!

After removing the slaughter essence from the membrane of his dantian, his dantian could no longer convert slaughter aura into slaughter energy…but that was exactly what he wanted. Yaan didn't want slaughter energy or Slaughter Qi, he wanted slaughter force!

He would love to stop and observe for a moment, but unfortunately, he didn't have that luxury. Beasts were charging at him, from the ground, from the skies, from each and every direction.

He lashed out crazily, slaughtering every living being around him using any means necessary.

A giant six legged rat was killed using the Agile Illusion Art's first step.

A strange ogre-esque creature was killed using the Agile Illusion Art's second step.

Other beasts were simply culled using the abyssal blood sword.

Sometimes, Yaan launched slaughter force-infused attacks, imbuing slaughter into his illusions and killing in this concealed manner.

Bodies stacked up around him, and Yaan soon found himself gasping for breath.

Every opponent sent to attack him was a Rank 6 powerhouse, he really wasn't being given a break here…

A smile spread across Yaan's lips.

As another four beasts approached from all four sides, he suddenly looked up and burst out with a wave of crazed laughter.

"Hahaha! It worked! It actually worked!"

To the Lunar Song Tribe Immortals, his words were mere crazed ramblings.

To Ga Shu, it was a gesture that his lord had finally achieved the breakthrough that he had been so diligently searching for.

And for Rui…it was frankly a shock.

"A dual layered core…" She muttered. "It's an incredible concept, but its use is far too niche. He might really be the first person to ever achieve such a thing!"

But Yaan's gains went far beyond just this…

The moment he formed the dual layered core, he finally comprehended the dao of slaughter to the immortal stage!

Yaan had been waiting for this for a long time. His hope was that after he comprehended slaughter to this degree, he would stop feeling these bloodthirsty desires…

But the opposite turned out to be the truth. His dao of slaughter only caused the insane blood-thirst emanating from his soul to amplify his killing intent even further!

Although others could see that Yaan's slaughterous aura had risen to a whole new level, they were unable to deduce the truth behind his dao comprehension. After all, they were not familiar with the dao of slaughter.

As dense wave after wave of slaughter aura swept through Yaan's dantian like a breeze, those waves were unhindered until they reached his dual layered core. Upon colliding with the external Vital Qi portion of his core, the waves of slaughter aura continued to storm through the outer layer like it was nothing…

It was only when the slaughter aura reached the central membrane that a change took place.

The slaughter aura, at the membrane between the solid Vital Qi core's shell and the hollow region within which contained the slaughter soul, converted the slaughter aura into slaughter energy.

The moment the slaughter energy passed through the membrane and entered the hollowed out space, seeping into the region occupied by the slaughter soul, it was rapidly refined into slaughter force!

This slaughter force served two purposes; filling the inside of this hollow core with the perfect environment for the slaughter soul, and being absorbed into the slaughter soul itself, helping the soul to finally grow stronger!

Yaan's original intention was to slaughter his own Vital Qi to develop his slaughter force, but now, things had changed. He had already experimented with slaughtering a portion of his Vital Qi, but he had also killed multiple Rank 6 beings…

The refined slaughter aura provided a benefit so much greater that it was simply incomparable!

And so, Yaan continued to kill.

Four immortals watched from above as a lone, red-robed child, killed viciously, savagely, growing more adept with his moves, whilst developing new methods and footwork techniques as he went. They watched as he killed, they watched as he improved.

They realised that they were watching the rise of a true monster.

Eventually, Yaan was beyond exhausted, whilst the Lunar Song tribe also no longer felt like wasting all of their Rank 6 weapons just for their enemy to harvest as his nourishment.

When Ga Shu carried Yaan away, nobody obstructed him, but they all watched closely. From today on, the name 'Red Demon' would forever be engraved in their minds.


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Quick Update!

(I previously posted this update as its own chapter, but now I'm moving it to the postnote on this chapter).

I've built up a good sized backlog of chapters, so I'm going to release daily starting from today on my Patreon, and next Thursday on RR and WN. This will continue until we reach the near-end of the volume, at which point I plan to mass-release the ending arc, which will include a mortal arc that I've had in my mind for some time now. I've planned the ending to this volume for a long time, so I'm determined to write it well!

As I've mentioned before, after I finish releasing volume 4, I'm going to halt 'A Desolate Life' and release 'Desolate Fate' publicly (the earlier chapters are already on my private Patreon). Desolate Fate will be a polished version of this novel, hopefully fixing the issues that were prevalent early on in the novel, without changing anything major (you don't need to reread it unless you really want to). Since I'll mostly just be editing chapters, I should be able to release multiple chapters per day, catching up to the current update quite quickly.

Hope you're all enjoying the novel so far, because I honestly believe it's only going to get better and better!

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