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Well written, despite minor errors, this is one of my favorite fanfic, so I wanted to ask if you will continue it, and if so, when? Please reply quickly or at all.
no entendí nada porque estaba en inglés pero empezar a traducir con el traductor y aveces me tocaba hacer asociaciones porque no se entendía la traducción pero de más me encantó pdt:te sigo en Youtube cuando vuelves a subir videos
He should’ve matured more since he is supposedly mentally older due to reincarnation… He’s making a lot of stupid decisions… Im sorry but until you rewrite this if ever then I’m dropping this story….
bruh kryptonite might not be present but you're still weak against magic and there is kamar-taj, where they teach mystic arts not to mention there is Asgard and Olympus.
If there was a lower rating i would have given it .so much wasted potential and he is so immature and hypocrite, .. .... .. .. . . ... . .
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
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Always trying to find a good superman powers in marvel👍👍, this is decently better than the rest out their out in webnovel. So i must recommend this one for sure.
The story isn't perfect but it gets better every day and be confident. MC is a genius in the Marvel universe so he could have done better than that, filing patents right to left. Stark Industries is over esteemed after the gun sale seceded, Tony has done nothing amazing to maintain SI, he keeps all the right technology for himself and leaves crumbs to people. Or are the press articles, which compare MC and Tony and show that he has done more than Tony and is smarter.I'm not looking for a MC who hates Tony but one who isn't impressed. I hope the MC is not going to be part of the Avengers, he has better things to do than take revenge from right to left, he must be there only for the big alien fights and the MC steals the Stone of mind to Hydra before giving maximum powers, they are too volatile. Gahhh I want the media to know who is hiding behind the industry and Tony gets jealous because at that age he was on drugs and drinking. And especially since the MC doesn't like Captain America,Captain's behavior in the franchise left me perplexed, the guy is more arrogant than Stark (which is hard to beat). I'm a girl, I gave up on female MCs because I'm tired of vehicle clichés and this way of domestic avengers she drives is a delusional illusion. I can't wait to read more, See you soon annnnd Kryptonian is immortal in the yellow sun, I hope you could fix that.
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This is not a bad story, we see the mc's growth over time, and as the old life and the new mix and influence, we realize that the mc's emotional intelligence and wisdom are few and far between, but the creative and scientific genius is enough, I notice that maybe more people are missing from the plot of the story, everything is very concentrated in a small little world, that's kind of boring, I play DC Hero In Marvel I recommend reading this story, the ending is a bit rushed, but the course of the story can be very nice, I even recommend that the author read it and use it as inspiration for this story could help a lot.
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I re-read this fan-fic from the start but this time I was drunk as f**k and trust me I enjoy it very much because I was able to relate to mc, MC was making the same choices I would make after two bottles of vodka cheers fellows!
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Well written, despite minor errors, this is one of my favorite fanfic, so I wanted to ask if you will continue it, and if so, when? Please reply quickly or at all.
no entendí nada porque estaba en inglés pero empezar a traducir con el traductor y aveces me tocaba hacer asociaciones porque no se entendía la traducción pero de más me encantó pdt:te sigo en Youtube cuando vuelves a subir videos
He should’ve matured more since he is supposedly mentally older due to reincarnation… He’s making a lot of stupid decisions… Im sorry but until you rewrite this if ever then I’m dropping this story….
bruh kryptonite might not be present but you're still weak against magic and there is kamar-taj, where they teach mystic arts not to mention there is Asgard and Olympus.
If there was a lower rating i would have given it .so much wasted potential and he is so immature and hypocrite, .. .... .. .. . . ... . .
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
"....""...."...."..."....."..."..."...."...."...."...."....."..."...."...."...."...."...."...."...."...."...."...."...."...."...."."...."...."...."
Tiết lộ Spoiler Always trying to find a good superman powers in marvel👍👍, this is decently better than the rest out their out in webnovel. So i must recommend this one for sure.
The story isn't perfect but it gets better every day and be confident. MC is a genius in the Marvel universe so he could have done better than that, filing patents right to left. Stark Industries is over esteemed after the gun sale seceded, Tony has done nothing amazing to maintain SI, he keeps all the right technology for himself and leaves crumbs to people. Or are the press articles, which compare MC and Tony and show that he has done more than Tony and is smarter.I'm not looking for a MC who hates Tony but one who isn't impressed. I hope the MC is not going to be part of the Avengers, he has better things to do than take revenge from right to left, he must be there only for the big alien fights and the MC steals the Stone of mind to Hydra before giving maximum powers, they are too volatile. Gahhh I want the media to know who is hiding behind the industry and Tony gets jealous because at that age he was on drugs and drinking. And especially since the MC doesn't like Captain America,Captain's behavior in the franchise left me perplexed, the guy is more arrogant than Stark (which is hard to beat). I'm a girl, I gave up on female MCs because I'm tired of vehicle clichés and this way of domestic avengers she drives is a delusional illusion. I can't wait to read more, See you soon annnnd Kryptonian is immortal in the yellow sun, I hope you could fix that.
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This is not a bad story, we see the mc's growth over time, and as the old life and the new mix and influence, we realize that the mc's emotional intelligence and wisdom are few and far between, but the creative and scientific genius is enough, I notice that maybe more people are missing from the plot of the story, everything is very concentrated in a small little world, that's kind of boring, I play DC Hero In Marvel I recommend reading this story, the ending is a bit rushed, but the course of the story can be very nice, I even recommend that the author read it and use it as inspiration for this story could help a lot.
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I re-read this fan-fic from the start but this time I was drunk as f**k and trust me I enjoy it very much because I was able to relate to mc, MC was making the same choices I would make after two bottles of vodka cheers fellows!
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