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The fact that author had to put in martial arts BS and make it extremely cringy is something I dont understand. It's good to add something unique to fanfic, but adding most generic thing that is martial arts BS stuff aint it.
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yh this isnt too good beggining was a bit rushed couldve had more development of our chracters feels like im reading a chinese fanfic or something with how dumb and weird people are in this story
SUPER FANFIC, sa faisait longtemps j'avais pas apprécié une bonne fanfic, gg a toi auteur et bonne continuation, en tout cas on attend les autres chapitres.
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Can we kiss and ride off into the sunset because you seem like the ideal match. . . . .… . . . . … . . . . . . Jsjskksksejjsjsjsjsjsjdjdjdjdjjd
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bro keeps on rewriting or creating a new tog novel before dropping them again. You made good novels but unfortunately, you always drop them... well since you said that this is the last imma just give this a try
How pathetic, you can only use two or three techniques, what an interesting form of nerf, you make an OP character, but you limit it to a few techniques immediately afterwards.
bro you should choose first you want to properly write or not you always just reset chapters and its really frustrating you can't even decide
I really love this story. It is one of the rare novel/fanfic that I'm always impatient to read the rest. Can't wait to see where it's going to go. Pls never drop this piece of art,
Umm to be honest i don't know how to review buttt... The grammar need sone work but more than that pretty much nothing that's from my understanding of it don't judge me
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I like where it's set in but your character is weak and not strength wise but in disposition. He managed to withstand 8 years of solo training with no interactions yet he hasn't changed at all that is very strange. I'm going for a middle score because while it hasn't been a good show up to what I've read, I like that it's on a setting few visit in their writing.
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Unquie, not in the time of the maincast but with mazino urek. I wonder if enryu exists or if the mc replaced him. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It has minor grammar errors, but it doesn't affect the story much. So far, the progress of the story is good, it's also very good that the Author is always asking readers for their opinion. And apparently the Author hasn't found a standard style for writing yet, I hope he finds a fast.
Creo que esta historia será muy buena en el futuro lo único que creo que "podría ser malo" es que es un poco confuso la redacción en tercera persona pero luego vi que los últimos dos capítulos los corregiste y es mas entendible sigue así ssjsjsjsj salu2
I think this story has a lot of potential. I like the choices made so far and the way the author asks readers for opinions. All in all I really recommend trying it out. very little chapters right now cause the author is still tryna sort out the plot but it has a lot of potential for the future.
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not much to say here. The story was going very well until ch. 22, the story was moving in an interesting way but the author chose to re-do the second floor and kinda got lost there and quit so I'd say read this until ch 22 and day-dream what the rest of the story would be like.
The fact that author had to put in martial arts BS and make it extremely cringy is something I dont understand. It's good to add something unique to fanfic, but adding most generic thing that is martial arts BS stuff aint it.
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yh this isnt too good beggining was a bit rushed couldve had more development of our chracters feels like im reading a chinese fanfic or something with how dumb and weird people are in this story
SUPER FANFIC, sa faisait longtemps j'avais pas apprécié une bonne fanfic, gg a toi auteur et bonne continuation, en tout cas on attend les autres chapitres.
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Can we kiss and ride off into the sunset because you seem like the ideal match. . . . .… . . . . … . . . . . . Jsjskksksejjsjsjsjsjsjdjdjdjdjjd
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Romance, harem? . ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
bro keeps on rewriting or creating a new tog novel before dropping them again. You made good novels but unfortunately, you always drop them... well since you said that this is the last imma just give this a try
How pathetic, you can only use two or three techniques, what an interesting form of nerf, you make an OP character, but you limit it to a few techniques immediately afterwards.
bro you should choose first you want to properly write or not you always just reset chapters and its really frustrating you can't even decide
I really love this story. It is one of the rare novel/fanfic that I'm always impatient to read the rest. Can't wait to see where it's going to go. Pls never drop this piece of art,
Umm to be honest i don't know how to review buttt... The grammar need sone work but more than that pretty much nothing that's from my understanding of it don't judge me
the best fanfic of tog continurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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I like where it's set in but your character is weak and not strength wise but in disposition. He managed to withstand 8 years of solo training with no interactions yet he hasn't changed at all that is very strange. I'm going for a middle score because while it hasn't been a good show up to what I've read, I like that it's on a setting few visit in their writing.
boa história............................................................................................................
Unquie, not in the time of the maincast but with mazino urek. I wonder if enryu exists or if the mc replaced him. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It has minor grammar errors, but it doesn't affect the story much. So far, the progress of the story is good, it's also very good that the Author is always asking readers for their opinion. And apparently the Author hasn't found a standard style for writing yet, I hope he finds a fast.
Creo que esta historia será muy buena en el futuro lo único que creo que "podría ser malo" es que es un poco confuso la redacción en tercera persona pero luego vi que los últimos dos capítulos los corregiste y es mas entendible sigue así ssjsjsjsj salu2
I think this story has a lot of potential. I like the choices made so far and the way the author asks readers for opinions. All in all I really recommend trying it out. very little chapters right now cause the author is still tryna sort out the plot but it has a lot of potential for the future.
This is my third and last attempt at a Tower of God FanFic. Shameless Author Comment🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐
not much to say here. The story was going very well until ch. 22, the story was moving in an interesting way but the author chose to re-do the second floor and kinda got lost there and quit so I'd say read this until ch 22 and day-dream what the rest of the story would be like.