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more details on the background has made the decision of reading the book very much interesting..........................................,......
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Should have told us he'd be the narrator in dunno how else to put it... let someone who would is better with their words say it for me......
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
A few errors here and there but it's ok, there's not a lot of unrealistic things and it even talks a little about theories of the series. The MC is not a guy who, I don't know, creates moons and can destroy everything with one finger. In general it's a good Fanfic, realistic and with potential to improve
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Although the idea is promising, the story doesn't unfold too well. The first 4 chapters are mainly the internal thoughts of MC and then he changes perspective to another character, and then changes him again and at the end with the internal thoughts of the MC. It advances little or nothing in my opinion
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more details on the background has made the decision of reading the book very much interesting..........................................,......
Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank
Should have told us he'd be the narrator in dunno how else to put it... let someone who would is better with their words say it for me......
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
A few errors here and there but it's ok, there's not a lot of unrealistic things and it even talks a little about theories of the series. The MC is not a guy who, I don't know, creates moons and can destroy everything with one finger. In general it's a good Fanfic, realistic and with potential to improve
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Although the idea is promising, the story doesn't unfold too well. The first 4 chapters are mainly the internal thoughts of MC and then he changes perspective to another character, and then changes him again and at the end with the internal thoughts of the MC. It advances little or nothing in my opinion