Life didn't get easier, even in another world.

LV 3

daniz_

Ahem, it's the author here... Well, as all of you might have noticed, I have quite a lot of spelling and grammatical errors in my novel. I am really trying to solve them but there are still some that I miss. English is not my first language so it's a little bit hard... So I wanted to apologize for making so many mistakes. Thank you for your understanding.

LV 2

NotBeatrix

I think the story is off a pretty good start! There are grammatical and sentence structure errors here and there, but the author said he's doing his best to improve on that. Plus, despite the errors, it still does not take away from the interesting plot and storyline! I think Kairen is so far relatable and you can understand the world from his perspective. I also sympathize with him and his struggles and I can't wait to see more into this second world he has been taken into! Keep up the awesome work, author! And, readers? You should give this story a read!

The story is nice and all... but sometimes it feels like you write in a hurry, I mean, you sometimes skip events a lot and also pass some nice points in the story so easily. it's as if you want to force the story to move faster. please don't hurry and take your time, let the story grow by itself But except that everything else is fine, I like the characters and the mysterious storyline.

LV 15

RAMINATOR

MC has no backbone and sometimes is the smartest person around and then they are the dumbest person who can't understand anything. The only things the MC's friends do is yell at him nonstop, act superior to him, blame him for things they did, and never take into consideration what he wants to do.

LV 2

PrugnaKerai

It is evident that the author's first language is not English, however, they have done an impressive attempt in writing this novel, so a well done to them. There is a delicate and nice balance between dialogue and description, which is tricky to achieve. I would say that there are moments where the description is rushed and incomplete, there is so much more potential in captivating the reader's imagination, the author just needs to tweak this. Otherwise, a good start.

LV 3

Mahaiye

loving the story so far! mc gets pushed around a lot as far as I have read but it seems necessary to develop the story? It's not too annoying yet so I guess that much is alright. Keep it up!

LV 11

delores

So I am writing this review after reading chapter 254 (such a touching chapter) l. To be honest I hated Kairen so much in the first few chapters, and that's because the transmigration books I read about mostly have their MCs move on quickly from their initial confusion, but that aside, his stupidity does add to the story, it's not that you get used to it, but it gets better over time. If I had a query with this book it would be the fact that you don't see his friends as often in more recent chapters. But since the book follows Kairen's POV you understand that except for Ariyan, Kain related things most things subconsciously become secondary to him. It's a fun read especially if you like mystery, action and comedy, so don't be deterred by the MC at the beginning ☺️

LV 3

itsDanielJohnson

I shouldn’t be impatient and should follow the MC determination BUT!This novel need more recognition!Sure, 1 million is a lot but for me, it’s not…

LV 2

wudux

please 🙏🥺 please give u novel tag GAY be couse u lead person is Gay. why are u gay?))) just be careful 🤠№🥳🥴🥳🥴🥳🥴🥳🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥺🥴🥴🥴🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

LV 5

MBE1

at first I liked it, I thought It was good to have some changes in the default settings of MCs being fearless and I thought I would see some character growth, but he stays with same personality, at least till chapter 56 I couldn't continue after that. . . if you don't like whimp idiotic (not always idiot) MC, then this book isn't for you.

LV 1

L_Poren

This had a good start, but it's been going downhill lately. I don't mind slow-paced novels but everything in this novel has grinded to a halt. Every mission is a fruitless endeavor leading nowhere. Every chapter has a barrage of pointless questions that rarely get answered. The last couple chapters had over 50 questions each. (Never counted them before.) Questions like " What? How? What's going on? W-Why? why? why? why? Why you get nervous man?" Kairen: I-I don't...I don't k-know?.. The protagonist also stutters a lot. If you've ever been around someone who asked a million questions and enjoyed the experience, this novel is definitely for you. There's still hope if the author gets back on track. I would suggest taking some time off to flesh out the story and character development. Releasing a couple quality chapters per week would be better than this type of filler.

LV 3

Bolcurut

Wow, what an amazing presentation for chapter 1. The narration is so captivating, I'm sure readers will love this novel. Somehow the author made this novel so good as if we were made to be in that position. It's stunning.

LV 4

KayLillyt_1

Great story. Intense and compelling so far. And clearly it will only get worse… better (positively). It’s so well written, it sparks the imagination and controls the readers emotions. The lead is intriguing. The author is doing a great job. A must read.

LV 14

Shiho3

Love the writer ＜3 their stories never disappoints!

LV 11

BooksLiker

it's one of the rare books which actually touched my heart

LV 11

BooksLiker

an interesting book, I most like the main character who is a bit childish and cute.I hope he'll turn into a child again, it would be facenating

LV 3

Jerry_Kudos

Kairan is a male MC and he acts lika a typical Karen. He annoyed the brown thing out of me. I gave up on 26th chapter.I couldn't get through his development phase.

LV 14

Celestial_Blood917

Hello dear author, I can see that you're improving your writing skills bit by bit. This novel is fun and interesting, specially with the mc's personally. A scaredy cat but strong mc is funny and unique un its own way. Although I am just in chapters 50, I can tell that this will be good novel to read. Keep up the fun and excitement dear author. I silently support this novel till the end. 😊 As for my fellow readers, I understand that we have our own different preferences. I felt sad dor those who dropped this novels after reading just the early chapters. I can say that you guys missed a lot. But well, it depends on your preferences really. This novel is slow paced, specially for the mc's chapters development, but that's what made it fun and exciting for me. And also the thrill. I don't have anymore to say. I just wish dor our dear author a good health and a motivation to keep on writing this story. 🤗

LV 1

angie_ayala

I like it. That is all I have to say. Because I haven't finished it reading, I never knew of the character development since I didnt stay long. But I love the setting.