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Amazing Minamina shima wa atakai. Paina-puru puru. Attama pokapoka. Aho baka! Niban! Kitano shima wa samui. Hyakoi koi koi Attama buruburu. Aho baka!
This novel feels ripped of another. Main character with weak stats, main character with special identification skill, main character forms a team with a big guy to survive the "tutorial", main character meets super strong crazy female, main character meets a regreszor and decides to team up with him, those points are from another novel. Read this one and tell me if the point I alluded to above are real.
yo, i think you should change the sinopsis, people would prbs avoid this novel with that kind if sinopsis :) just saying, you dont have to change it tho if you find it satisfactory
A book with a great premise that has lots of potential. Despite a few grammar issues and misnomers due to the author learning English as a second language it is an enjoyable read. Author if possible I'd love to talk to you. If possible I'd like to help you with the editing for minor issues 😁
Hey, Author here. I just wanted to say two things for the readers. 1. First! Don't expect anything, like this will happen in the future and oh it's a cliche, and stuff. So you will not be disappointed by this if you don't like anything about this novel. 2. Second! Again, don't expect anything from this novel and later on, it will be good in its own way. For example, as I said in number one. This will happen in the future and stuff. No. 3. I lied to y'all, heh. Third! Just have fun reading and quit if you don't like it!
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Amazing Minamina shima wa atakai. Paina-puru puru. Attama pokapoka. Aho baka! Niban! Kitano shima wa samui. Hyakoi koi koi Attama buruburu. Aho baka!
This novel feels ripped of another. Main character with weak stats, main character with special identification skill, main character forms a team with a big guy to survive the "tutorial", main character meets super strong crazy female, main character meets a regreszor and decides to team up with him, those points are from another novel. Read this one and tell me if the point I alluded to above are real.
yo, i think you should change the sinopsis, people would prbs avoid this novel with that kind if sinopsis :) just saying, you dont have to change it tho if you find it satisfactory
A book with a great premise that has lots of potential. Despite a few grammar issues and misnomers due to the author learning English as a second language it is an enjoyable read. Author if possible I'd love to talk to you. If possible I'd like to help you with the editing for minor issues 😁
Hey, Author here. I just wanted to say two things for the readers. 1. First! Don't expect anything, like this will happen in the future and oh it's a cliche, and stuff. So you will not be disappointed by this if you don't like anything about this novel. 2. Second! Again, don't expect anything from this novel and later on, it will be good in its own way. For example, as I said in number one. This will happen in the future and stuff. No. 3. I lied to y'all, heh. Third! Just have fun reading and quit if you don't like it!