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It feels done in a sort of throwaway sort of way. The conversations and story progression are quite bad too. That being said, it feels a lot better to read than a lot of other stuff of it's level.
Moreeeeee pleaseeee no more haremmmmmm focus on theeeeee mcccccc........ Cant wait anymoreeeeeee iwant morreeeee chaptersssss Moreeeeee pleaseeee no more haremmmmmm focus on theeeeee mcccccc........ Cant wait anymoreeeeeee iwant morreeeee chaptersssss
It's good!!!👊👊👊 /////////////// ////////////// /////////////// ////////////// ////////////// ////////////// 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Pretty good so far maybe try and develop the characters more to add depth to them. ...............................................................
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Plain stupid[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Is this going to be a harem?? Please don't 🥺🥺 I had enough of harem.So please don't be a harem 🥺😥 ........................................
Pretty Good keep up the good work Rdffffgffffdfddfxxfxccxxxxxxxxxxddfccxxxdffcxfgccfffcdffcdfccxdfgvcdfggc hRemembrances
so far its ok odncoe cenocneocboenconeocbeobobfwboxbwcboebconoxnwocnowbcoevvoenc9bwx9behfjdojfodhdlxhfndbocbeovcos boen,osho,hsocboehcoevoneocb
it's good can't wait for the next chapters ..............,..................................................................................
It feels done in a sort of throwaway sort of way. The conversations and story progression are quite bad too. That being said, it feels a lot better to read than a lot of other stuff of it's level.
Moreeeeee pleaseeee no more haremmmmmm focus on theeeeee mcccccc........ Cant wait anymoreeeeeee iwant morreeeee chaptersssss Moreeeeee pleaseeee no more haremmmmmm focus on theeeeee mcccccc........ Cant wait anymoreeeeeee iwant morreeeee chaptersssss
It's good!!!👊👊👊 /////////////// ////////////// /////////////// ////////////// ////////////// ////////////// 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Pretty good so far maybe try and develop the characters more to add depth to them. ...............................................................
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Plain stupid[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Is this going to be a harem?? Please don't 🥺🥺 I had enough of harem.So please don't be a harem 🥺😥 ........................................
Pretty Good keep up the good work Rdffffgffffdfddfxxfxccxxxxxxxxxxddfccxxxdffcxfgccfffcdffcdfccxdfgvcdfggc hRemembrances
so far its ok odncoe cenocneocboenconeocbeobobfwboxbwcboebconoxnwocnowbcoevvoenc9bwx9behfjdojfodhdlxhfndbocbeovcos boen,osho,hsocboehcoevoneocb
it's good can't wait for the next chapters ..............,..................................................................................