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Nunca largue isso e tente avançar um pouco mais rápido Never let it go, and try to move a little faster ______________________________________________
where are you author when are you going to continue this fanfic even in reddit somebody recommend your work and this is the only martial peak fanfic that has good ratings and translation. the other fanfics are very slow or they drop it with just few chapters
update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please!1!!!1!!1
It started good ,but it soon came to end. As same ,exact ,copy,paste whatever you call it started playing again from canon ,I mean you can still somehow approach the ladies from different perspective but no you have to start playing canon for ladies😐😐😐
unfortunately i can't find a way to describe this awful jumbled up mess. I like wish fulfillments even tho they tend to be stupid most of the time, and i would've liked this...if i could read at least!
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5 Stars for an actual Martial Peak fanfic, that novel has one of the most diverse cast and such a massive world that literally anything and everything can be done in it so it's nice to see it actually used for a change. Also Zhang Ruo Xi (Heavenly Punishment) is best girl, also most broken waifu in the xianxia multiverse by far.
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Voy en el capitulo 7 y es bastante dificil de entender, no se por que derrepente esta en una escena y salta a otra. O una explicación de lo que hace, es algo bastante enredado Y por ende por eso doy una puntuación tan baja, por que es bastante difícil no por decir imposible de leer lo que el protagonista esta haciendo
I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
I look forward to the continuation of the story dear author I look forward to the continuation of the story dear author I look forward to the continuation of the story dear author
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I think this fanfic is good, and as far as development is no problem [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
i will give you all of my stones just for choose this novel. XD i will read more and update here if i see no no things so future readers can atleast dont make their hopes high 💔😂
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thank you thank you thank you author thank you thank you thank you author thank you thank you thank you author thank you thank you thank you author author_sama U are my saver that gives me a spike of hope that there is somone writing about martial peak
mate if you drop this I am gonna find you and am gonna make you write it once more .
The first martial peak fanfic I've ever read, and it didn't disappoint I can't wait for more chapters hahahahahaaha [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Just seeing what is planned gets me hyped so I hope you won't drop this because you won't be forgiven. Looking forward to how this will develop.
that's how to fulfill my own wishes. but if you can't read a bad handwriting, give it up because the handwriting is worse than a child's... refresh rate pretty good. horrible story development. Even worse, character development looks like the harem is made of dolls. bottom of the world, it's not so bad because it's the bottom of martial peak itself
I'd honestly rate it lower, but usually people take the rating too seriously and evade the story completely when some could find it likeable. Writing has mistakes that breaks reading consistency. The story is generally boring I expected it proceeding at a reasonable rate but it just has too many jumps and random decisions. The characters honestly are one dimensional. The author has a goal for them and they conform to fit that goal. Personally it was too much surreal wish-fulfilment for me. Like MC meets the girl at the beginning, reveals several red flags and acts too dumb and the girl follows his instructions like it is only sensible to do so. After their first encounter she for some reason has a good feeling about him and the second time he meets her at her house right before she is about to be turned into a yin cauldron(which he acted out with his clone) with a way higher cultivation then she saw earlier and is able to get her to do it with him without finding anything suspicious with all that happened.
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Systems ruin a good xian xia novel, how can you go against the heavens if your soul is tied to a crutch? And not to mention those that have a store, an aberration to logic, few authors bother to explain how it works well, I love LN fanfiction, but I think that in webnovel the systems with a store are everywhere, nel The only system that I see acceptable here is that of The gamer. Anyway, a little vent, although I don't like it, luck with the story work, work hard and give a lot to the pencil maybe you can be the next Tolkien Pddt: Sorry for My English
Really was expecting something good but It is just A copy if the actual novel with slight alterations. Maybe add some new story without just copying the novel. Was really excited to read a fanfic about this novel but well brownies for trying.
5 stars just for making this fanfic .........................................................................................................
Please continue this and If possible u should release more chapter this will be popular fast 😋 🤩
Overall Rating: Below average. Tons of grammatical errors and English language inconsistencies. MC is the typical "Young-master" type. Story progression could've been better if it matches MC development as well. I highly recommend author-san to proof read your work, use grammarly and/or read English dictionary to broaden your vocabulary. Still kudos for writing a FF, keep progressing and moving forward xD
Nunca largue isso e tente avançar um pouco mais rápido Never let it go, and try to move a little faster ______________________________________________
where are you author when are you going to continue this fanfic even in reddit somebody recommend your work and this is the only martial peak fanfic that has good ratings and translation. the other fanfics are very slow or they drop it with just few chapters
update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please!1!!!1!!1
It started good ,but it soon came to end. As same ,exact ,copy,paste whatever you call it started playing again from canon ,I mean you can still somehow approach the ladies from different perspective but no you have to start playing canon for ladies😐😐😐
unfortunately i can't find a way to describe this awful jumbled up mess. I like wish fulfillments even tho they tend to be stupid most of the time, and i would've liked this...if i could read at least!
................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
5 Stars for an actual Martial Peak fanfic, that novel has one of the most diverse cast and such a massive world that literally anything and everything can be done in it so it's nice to see it actually used for a change. Also Zhang Ruo Xi (Heavenly Punishment) is best girl, also most broken waifu in the xianxia multiverse by far.
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Voy en el capitulo 7 y es bastante dificil de entender, no se por que derrepente esta en una escena y salta a otra. O una explicación de lo que hace, es algo bastante enredado Y por ende por eso doy una puntuación tan baja, por que es bastante difícil no por decir imposible de leer lo que el protagonista esta haciendo
I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
I look forward to the continuation of the story dear author I look forward to the continuation of the story dear author I look forward to the continuation of the story dear author
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I think this fanfic is good, and as far as development is no problem [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
i will give you all of my stones just for choose this novel. XD i will read more and update here if i see no no things so future readers can atleast dont make their hopes high 💔😂
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thank you thank you thank you author thank you thank you thank you author thank you thank you thank you author thank you thank you thank you author author_sama U are my saver that gives me a spike of hope that there is somone writing about martial peak
mate if you drop this I am gonna find you and am gonna make you write it once more .
The first martial peak fanfic I've ever read, and it didn't disappoint I can't wait for more chapters hahahahahaaha [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Just seeing what is planned gets me hyped so I hope you won't drop this because you won't be forgiven. Looking forward to how this will develop.
that's how to fulfill my own wishes. but if you can't read a bad handwriting, give it up because the handwriting is worse than a child's... refresh rate pretty good. horrible story development. Even worse, character development looks like the harem is made of dolls. bottom of the world, it's not so bad because it's the bottom of martial peak itself
I'd honestly rate it lower, but usually people take the rating too seriously and evade the story completely when some could find it likeable. Writing has mistakes that breaks reading consistency. The story is generally boring I expected it proceeding at a reasonable rate but it just has too many jumps and random decisions. The characters honestly are one dimensional. The author has a goal for them and they conform to fit that goal. Personally it was too much surreal wish-fulfilment for me. Like MC meets the girl at the beginning, reveals several red flags and acts too dumb and the girl follows his instructions like it is only sensible to do so. After their first encounter she for some reason has a good feeling about him and the second time he meets her at her house right before she is about to be turned into a yin cauldron(which he acted out with his clone) with a way higher cultivation then she saw earlier and is able to get her to do it with him without finding anything suspicious with all that happened.
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Systems ruin a good xian xia novel, how can you go against the heavens if your soul is tied to a crutch? And not to mention those that have a store, an aberration to logic, few authors bother to explain how it works well, I love LN fanfiction, but I think that in webnovel the systems with a store are everywhere, nel The only system that I see acceptable here is that of The gamer. Anyway, a little vent, although I don't like it, luck with the story work, work hard and give a lot to the pencil maybe you can be the next Tolkien Pddt: Sorry for My English
Really was expecting something good but It is just A copy if the actual novel with slight alterations. Maybe add some new story without just copying the novel. Was really excited to read a fanfic about this novel but well brownies for trying.
5 stars just for making this fanfic .........................................................................................................
Please continue this and If possible u should release more chapter this will be popular fast 😋 🤩
Overall Rating: Below average. Tons of grammatical errors and English language inconsistencies. MC is the typical "Young-master" type. Story progression could've been better if it matches MC development as well. I highly recommend author-san to proof read your work, use grammarly and/or read English dictionary to broaden your vocabulary. Still kudos for writing a FF, keep progressing and moving forward xD