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Ivan_Gusev

the main story that has plenty of checks and balances in the system everything works perfectly so far. and everything is quite logical in his planning I just wish you were updated more.

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Daoist8u5AgG

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1yr
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lyle_Walt

This fanfic is something that I wish happened in the original novel, where roland understands the romantic feelings of witches, and for roland to be able to become the witcg king

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2yr
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Shinen

This is a great fanfic and I love it if it would be continued. It makes me want to read more, so it would be great if you started writing again.

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Unlucky_13

Just found this story today and boy am I glad I did. I love RtW and seeing how you’re doing this story by expanding on the characters to make it different from the original series is awesome. For instance, the romantic development between Roland and other witches besides Anna and Nightingale is something I’m looking forwards to see. That and your actually having Roland be more appreciative of Nightingale’s feelings is something I appreciate. Hope you update again soon.

2yr
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Thaihoa_Q_Vuong

Recently started reading RTW last week and finished it this week. I wanted to see what fanfic's existed and was sad to find only a few, and more sad that many of them weren't very good are not that far written into the story. This story however was a most excellent find. I do appreciate the romance aspect your giving to other characters now since the original series only had Roland get with Anna, with Nightingale pinning for Roland, barely getting any affection back. In this story however, Roland is actually showing genuine physical affection to Nightingale and Wendy as well, which I really wanted to happen in RTW, but never got. Yea I know, the author originally wanted to have a harem, but his wife supposedly didn't like that and he followed her directions, which to me made no sense. The other thing I like in this story is while Roland is still in the inventive and modernizing role, he's adapt in combat as well which makes a bit more entertaining to see. For example, Roland going with Nightingale to the witch cave was a good deviation from canon and a highlight for me because it shows he can back up his words with his own skills and not just rely on others. I know it's been like seven months since this last updated, but I just wanted to let you know that have another reader know and I hope one day you return to this story. As of now, this is probably the best RTW fanfiction I've come across so far. Thanks for the effort you put into writing this.

2yr
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NH23kurogame

espero que lo retome el autor. que solo tenga un mes me da esperanza . me gusta que el prota sea un poco más activo con las brujas que el mc original.

3yr
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SUPREMO

It's a great fanfiction. I really hope that you will continue your work, because in my opinion, it has a lot of potential. I'll be waiting for the continuation😁

3yr
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THEdiveneONE11

I thought that it was a nice story overall.The assasin backstory gives our mc a reason for his streng and it gives him a compatible love interest.

3yr
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Lordmoonlight

to start it off I'm glad someone actually made a fic for RTW and the fact that even thou its almost the same as the original what do you expect when the story actually doesn't pass 100 chapters the mc has his own struggles from his past what he has to deal with as a person now most complains that's hes using the witches too much but can anyone tell me if you have someone who can help you do something faster than wouldn't you use it .....I just hope later on you can branch off from the story an add your own take to it I'm glad you did this fic and for a first timer it's better than most fic you see online hope you can finish it and don't care about all the negative comments you'll always have hater and people who enjoy your work that's pretty much all I got to say. ps: I hope you can continue this till the end and don't drop you'll always get a power stone from me [img=recommend]

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DeathConqueror

Everything about this novel is perfect . MC is balanced , neither weak nor OP, neither dense nor playboy , neither too ambitious nor too low key . The things that i think were missing in origin novel(MC having some powers , Harem) are present in this fanfic . Interaction between characters is good. Romance and Harem is proceeding nicely. All in all perfect. This doesn't even need to be called a fanfics it's a full fledged novel as MC has no knowledge of world previously. so it can be read even without reading original . I hope everyone gives it a try 🤘

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Ashmodai

It feels like the author is really young. The MC is a former "hitman"(typical childish background) with a system where he gets all the knowledge like physics, engineering and so on. Else it's mostly Canon. Not really a good story.

3yr
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caique_jesus

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NoHaremPlease

author is greta, story is engaging, sometimes even more than the original but.... harem tag.... i just hope he will choose one in the end like Roland did (possibly Nighingale since the poor girl didnt in the og). I just hope my boy wont ruin the story with with stuff like "we can all share Roland blablabla"

3yr
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LunariaN

a good fic with great potential, MC got a system which helps him a grear deal and he is stronger than a normal human...... just imagine when his stats rise above the peak of what humanly possible, just that alone can make him a monster among humans, add he just unlocked Magic stat now you can be sure he'll not need witches protection in the future; in case it may be the other way around. I totally recommend it and suggest readers to patienly read it, great changes does not happen from the get to go, sure most of it is similar to canon but it still early to show any great changes. Thanks to Mr. Author for putting all his effort to make this and succed in delivering chapters daily without any delay.

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caique_jesus

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Inferno_Vor

Honestly my favorite fanfic right now. The grammar could improve but personally doesn't affect my reading. Currently it's an update a day which is great. I love the characters and story with the new MC. Because the MC is vastly different from the original due to viewing his own life as unimportant, having a system with knowledge instead of a head full of facts and having fighting skills, the MC also seems more situationally and politically aware.

3yr
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Ivan_Gusev

the main story that has plenty of checks and balances in the system everything works perfectly so far. and everything is quite logical in his planning I just wish you were updated more.

2mth
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Daoist8u5AgG

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1yr
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lyle_Walt

This fanfic is something that I wish happened in the original novel, where roland understands the romantic feelings of witches, and for roland to be able to become the witcg king

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2yr
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Shinen

This is a great fanfic and I love it if it would be continued. It makes me want to read more, so it would be great if you started writing again.

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Unlucky_13

Just found this story today and boy am I glad I did. I love RtW and seeing how you’re doing this story by expanding on the characters to make it different from the original series is awesome. For instance, the romantic development between Roland and other witches besides Anna and Nightingale is something I’m looking forwards to see. That and your actually having Roland be more appreciative of Nightingale’s feelings is something I appreciate. Hope you update again soon.

2yr
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Thaihoa_Q_Vuong

Recently started reading RTW last week and finished it this week. I wanted to see what fanfic's existed and was sad to find only a few, and more sad that many of them weren't very good are not that far written into the story. This story however was a most excellent find. I do appreciate the romance aspect your giving to other characters now since the original series only had Roland get with Anna, with Nightingale pinning for Roland, barely getting any affection back. In this story however, Roland is actually showing genuine physical affection to Nightingale and Wendy as well, which I really wanted to happen in RTW, but never got. Yea I know, the author originally wanted to have a harem, but his wife supposedly didn't like that and he followed her directions, which to me made no sense. The other thing I like in this story is while Roland is still in the inventive and modernizing role, he's adapt in combat as well which makes a bit more entertaining to see. For example, Roland going with Nightingale to the witch cave was a good deviation from canon and a highlight for me because it shows he can back up his words with his own skills and not just rely on others. I know it's been like seven months since this last updated, but I just wanted to let you know that have another reader know and I hope one day you return to this story. As of now, this is probably the best RTW fanfiction I've come across so far. Thanks for the effort you put into writing this.

2yr
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NH23kurogame

espero que lo retome el autor. que solo tenga un mes me da esperanza . me gusta que el prota sea un poco más activo con las brujas que el mc original.

3yr
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SUPREMO

It's a great fanfiction. I really hope that you will continue your work, because in my opinion, it has a lot of potential. I'll be waiting for the continuation😁

3yr
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THEdiveneONE11

I thought that it was a nice story overall.The assasin backstory gives our mc a reason for his streng and it gives him a compatible love interest.

3yr
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Lordmoonlight

to start it off I'm glad someone actually made a fic for RTW and the fact that even thou its almost the same as the original what do you expect when the story actually doesn't pass 100 chapters the mc has his own struggles from his past what he has to deal with as a person now most complains that's hes using the witches too much but can anyone tell me if you have someone who can help you do something faster than wouldn't you use it .....I just hope later on you can branch off from the story an add your own take to it I'm glad you did this fic and for a first timer it's better than most fic you see online hope you can finish it and don't care about all the negative comments you'll always have hater and people who enjoy your work that's pretty much all I got to say. ps: I hope you can continue this till the end and don't drop you'll always get a power stone from me [img=recommend]

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Horse_soup

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DeathConqueror

Everything about this novel is perfect . MC is balanced , neither weak nor OP, neither dense nor playboy , neither too ambitious nor too low key . The things that i think were missing in origin novel(MC having some powers , Harem) are present in this fanfic . Interaction between characters is good. Romance and Harem is proceeding nicely. All in all perfect. This doesn't even need to be called a fanfics it's a full fledged novel as MC has no knowledge of world previously. so it can be read even without reading original . I hope everyone gives it a try 🤘

3yr
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Ashmodai

It feels like the author is really young. The MC is a former "hitman"(typical childish background) with a system where he gets all the knowledge like physics, engineering and so on. Else it's mostly Canon. Not really a good story.

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NoHaremPlease

author is greta, story is engaging, sometimes even more than the original but.... harem tag.... i just hope he will choose one in the end like Roland did (possibly Nighingale since the poor girl didnt in the og). I just hope my boy wont ruin the story with with stuff like "we can all share Roland blablabla"

3yr
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LunariaN

a good fic with great potential, MC got a system which helps him a grear deal and he is stronger than a normal human...... just imagine when his stats rise above the peak of what humanly possible, just that alone can make him a monster among humans, add he just unlocked Magic stat now you can be sure he'll not need witches protection in the future; in case it may be the other way around. I totally recommend it and suggest readers to patienly read it, great changes does not happen from the get to go, sure most of it is similar to canon but it still early to show any great changes. Thanks to Mr. Author for putting all his effort to make this and succed in delivering chapters daily without any delay.

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caique_jesus

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Inferno_Vor

Honestly my favorite fanfic right now. The grammar could improve but personally doesn't affect my reading. Currently it's an update a day which is great. I love the characters and story with the new MC. Because the MC is vastly different from the original due to viewing his own life as unimportant, having a system with knowledge instead of a head full of facts and having fighting skills, the MC also seems more situationally and politically aware.

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