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A solid side story from one of my favorite books. As expected from ein, It is of a similar quality to the main story, with an overall great writing and fantástico world building.
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this is very very good!!!!!!!!!!!! ................................................................................................................................
As always, Ein hits home with his gorgeous writing and fairly fleshed out character development. He even somehow made Yamcha and Chi-Chi out to look.. lets say.. 'non-deplorable'. Here's to hoping that Sarina and the others face something of a challenge instead of Broly destroying everyone on his own!
ITS BUILT DIFFFFENT OHH YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH BUILT DIFFFENR YYAEDDS BEGSJDHSHE BRUHHHHHHH YEHHHHHH IWUW OW WIS SHGSCA ATISSG FRIGGGWR FRACKER CERIXBK
Great like always ! I didnt expected it to be soo fkng good, bud as always ein sama can turn dust into gold. I'm actually a huge fan of dragon ball , z, s. Bud holy fk epic + db is something else... i dont know how to explain it but i will pay my soul for it lol
I am compelled to give every single thing Ein has written a five star review. He is my favorite author (literally nothing comes even close to EPIC) and this short story is a great way for people on the fence about starting a story with more than a couple thousand chapters to get an idea about how enjoyable his writing is.
Since I've read this one and kept on thinking how much would the original plot be changed, I couldn't keep myself from being curious..,.... Hope you would continue this alongside the main plot of EPIC.
having this as its own side story book will make corupt.. umhem... converting people to reading epic as a whole.. i would vote to continue since you had said it would only be about 200 chapters.
Man, what's masterpiece you're created!!! KEEP THE GOOD WORK, and take care of your health. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxppppppppppp[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I have absolutely nothing against this "filler" arc of DragonBall. I can't get enough of the adventures of Vahn and his family and now that I startet to read this sidestory I really wanna know what happens next. It would be a shame to have to wait until November. Even more because not all chapters which were already released were uploaded here. So my vote: please continue this!
This is a delayed re-upload of a tangent I went on due to an injury. There are about 50 chapters at present, but, unless there is interest in the story, I won't be updating it until November. Inversely, if people seem to enjoy it, I don't mind putting NOICE on hold in order to wrap things up. All in all, this side story should have around 150-200 chapters by the end.
A solid side story from one of my favorite books. As expected from ein, It is of a similar quality to the main story, with an overall great writing and fantástico world building.
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Tiết lộ Spoiler this is very very good!!!!!!!!!!!! ................................................................................................................................
As always, Ein hits home with his gorgeous writing and fairly fleshed out character development. He even somehow made Yamcha and Chi-Chi out to look.. lets say.. 'non-deplorable'. Here's to hoping that Sarina and the others face something of a challenge instead of Broly destroying everyone on his own!
ITS BUILT DIFFFFENT OHH YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH BUILT DIFFFENR YYAEDDS BEGSJDHSHE BRUHHHHHHH YEHHHHHH IWUW OW WIS SHGSCA ATISSG FRIGGGWR FRACKER CERIXBK
Great like always ! I didnt expected it to be soo fkng good, bud as always ein sama can turn dust into gold. I'm actually a huge fan of dragon ball , z, s. Bud holy fk epic + db is something else... i dont know how to explain it but i will pay my soul for it lol
I am compelled to give every single thing Ein has written a five star review. He is my favorite author (literally nothing comes even close to EPIC) and this short story is a great way for people on the fence about starting a story with more than a couple thousand chapters to get an idea about how enjoyable his writing is.
Since I've read this one and kept on thinking how much would the original plot be changed, I couldn't keep myself from being curious..,.... Hope you would continue this alongside the main plot of EPIC.
having this as its own side story book will make corupt.. umhem... converting people to reading epic as a whole.. i would vote to continue since you had said it would only be about 200 chapters.
Man, what's masterpiece you're created!!! KEEP THE GOOD WORK, and take care of your health. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxppppppppppp[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I have absolutely nothing against this "filler" arc of DragonBall. I can't get enough of the adventures of Vahn and his family and now that I startet to read this sidestory I really wanna know what happens next. It would be a shame to have to wait until November. Even more because not all chapters which were already released were uploaded here. So my vote: please continue this!
This is a delayed re-upload of a tangent I went on due to an injury. There are about 50 chapters at present, but, unless there is interest in the story, I won't be updating it until November. Inversely, if people seem to enjoy it, I don't mind putting NOICE on hold in order to wrap things up. All in all, this side story should have around 150-200 chapters by the end.
one of my absolute favorite fanfics, just wish for more! !!