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Future co-writer here working on an exciting concept with Aina! I won't be here to read all the comments and reviews readers give but I would like to thank everyone who supports this work!
This is an amazing read! The first few chapters already got me hooked. Kudos to the writer. If you're looking for something to read, check this out!!! 😊
IDK why I'm here but gosh the story seems so interesting and unique. I've always wanted to read this kind of story, the romance between a writer and the reader, and this story fit so flawlessly in my cup of tea. The premise is without a shadow of doubt enthralling. I'm looking forward for more of this story. Hm, perhaps if you don't mind me asking, how many chapters you're planning for this one?
Wow. This story sure has an interesting and promising plot. Imagine you are entangled with one of your readers haha. The story is really interesting. Good choice of words. Keep it up![img=recommend]
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great job, nice work 👍👍👍 well-written synopsis and chapters 👍👍👍 nice twist and there's originality 👍👍👍 please upload more chapters 👍👍👍 goodluck 👍👍👍
Right...so here goes! I loved it PERIOD. I mean, it's such a fresh concept, really. I was drawn in from the very synopsis and when I read the first chap, it was so much more than I had expected. 5/5
Good book Good writing style Sometimes, saying the truth about authors... me like. I want Leona to get away from her brother! Argh!!!🤬🕯️ I love the thing that a mafia boss loves reading romance genre!!!
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I have read the first three chapters. it was nice and you can easli digest the flow of the story. For now, I'll rate it this way. I am expecting more from Leona hehe
Good start. Keep it up. nothing much to say as I can't tell how the story will go with few chapters. please upload more! :)[img=coins][img=coins]
(≧▽≦)I just read the first two chapters and I'm already loving this story. The author is really creative about her work. And as a reader I was here thinking about 😏two men fighting for one girl. or maybe more . author keep up the good work. I can't wait to see more updates .
This story is really great. I like it how you started the story. If this story continues, than it will be one of the great story evet. Keep your hard work author!!
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Great start and promising plot! I love to see the journey of Leona in the hands of this mafia boss. Hehehe KEEP IT UP, author! <3
Author-san's book always intrigues me right from the title, cover and the synopsis.From the beginning, this book hooked me!! Though there are a little chapters at this moment but reading them was fun. Leona (The FL) is a hard-workingauthor and trying her best to meet the ends. I'm waiting for Mafia Boss to fall in love with Leona!! Best wishes for the contest!! I will support you 🥰🤩 💜
Hello, excuse my shameless 5.0 rating 😂🌻 This plot kept on bugging me these past few days, and I knew I needed to write it all down 😂 I hope you'll like this story as much as you like my other works 💐 Please support it for WPC #201:Female Lead-Mafia! Thanks a lot 🌹
Future co-writer here working on an exciting concept with Aina! I won't be here to read all the comments and reviews readers give but I would like to thank everyone who supports this work!
This is an amazing read! The first few chapters already got me hooked. Kudos to the writer. If you're looking for something to read, check this out!!! 😊
IDK why I'm here but gosh the story seems so interesting and unique. I've always wanted to read this kind of story, the romance between a writer and the reader, and this story fit so flawlessly in my cup of tea. The premise is without a shadow of doubt enthralling. I'm looking forward for more of this story. Hm, perhaps if you don't mind me asking, how many chapters you're planning for this one?
Wow. This story sure has an interesting and promising plot. Imagine you are entangled with one of your readers haha. The story is really interesting. Good choice of words. Keep it up![img=recommend]
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great job, nice work 👍👍👍 well-written synopsis and chapters 👍👍👍 nice twist and there's originality 👍👍👍 please upload more chapters 👍👍👍 goodluck 👍👍👍
Right...so here goes! I loved it PERIOD. I mean, it's such a fresh concept, really. I was drawn in from the very synopsis and when I read the first chap, it was so much more than I had expected. 5/5
Good book Good writing style Sometimes, saying the truth about authors... me like. I want Leona to get away from her brother! Argh!!!🤬🕯️ I love the thing that a mafia boss loves reading romance genre!!!
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(≧▽≦)I just read the first two chapters and I'm already loving this story. The author is really creative about her work. And as a reader I was here thinking about 😏two men fighting for one girl. or maybe more . author keep up the good work. I can't wait to see more updates .
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Hello, excuse my shameless 5.0 rating 😂🌻 This plot kept on bugging me these past few days, and I knew I needed to write it all down 😂 I hope you'll like this story as much as you like my other works 💐 Please support it for WPC #201:Female Lead-Mafia! Thanks a lot 🌹