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First of all, although the novel seemed like a cliché, it is not. It is full of surprises. Totally different. Secondly, great writing. There are almost no grammatical errors. The creativity is excellent and the plot is unique and interesting.
The novel has a cliche storyline but this author managed to make it very unique and equally as interesting. For a non-native english speaker, the author wrote very well with little to no grammatical errors compared to some native english speakers lol. This fits in perfectly in the contemporary romance genre and has the potential to be great. [img=recommend]
A wonderful contemporary Romance! The characters and deep, well-developed and very lovable. The beginning is a bit slow, but it's worth it to power through those first couple chapters, because the interactions between the FL and ML are wonderful! Keep up the good work author!
I loved the philosophy of the novel, as a girl I fully understand what it means to lose faith in love, and in the people you love, that crisis that is so difficult to overcome later. The simple, beautiful language most characterizes the novel. It goes in harmony, makes you simply focus on and relate to events. I strongly recommended the novel I like it.
This is a well-written story with an amazing plot. I love it! The synopsis did a great job starting the vibe of the story, while every chapter will keep you asking for more. It also has well-written characters and dialogues. I love it!
Interesting Plot!! The writer keeps us hook with each chapter. As a suspense is revealed, another follows. Well Written!! The character design is done perfectly along with the environment details. Keep Going!!!
First of all, even though the novel looked cliched, it's not. It's full of surprises. Totally different. Secondly, great writing. There are close to no grammatical mistakes. Creativity is excellent and the plot is unique and interesting. The story development and it's pace is smooth. It hook's the readers interest instantly. Especially, the first chapter. All and all, the work has a great potential. Well done Author! Waiting for more chapters.
I'm not a really great fan of modern life stories but when I read this story it felt different. The character is bold and strong and she doesn't hesitate to do the things that fell right to her, I'm looking forward to such a great story.
character Very well defined and loved the characters Alex, Ethan And very curious bout Elliot. Storyline Awesome and fantabolous....loved it I was very hooked n read the whole chapters....waiting for updates now. Author love u and hats off
Great story. pushed forward and made more interesting by the motivation of the lead. Keeps the readers on their toes in anticipation of what would happen next while loving what she has already done. Again, great story.
Curiosity is the best weapon to lure a prey and the author seemed to have done just that. First of all, everything that involves revenge is certainly intriguing. The story is good that it got reading nonstop to the point that I didn't even noticed that I was already at the last chapter. Now, I am very curious as how she would execute her plot of revenge to perfection. There are some problems with the grammars, punctuations and how it is written but those are problems that could be polish as the story goes. Other than that I enjoyed reading this novel, especially during bed time with only lampshade to light me and a cup hot chocolate milk to accompany me. Good work author-san!
I liked the idea but I'm not sure I'm very fond of the execution. The actual story honestly has a fun and interesting plot, but the way it's being told feels a little clunky. There are times when things are being described as if it was a movie script instead of a book. Things like, Alexis opened the fridge. She saw a bottle of milk. Alexis grabbed the milk. She poured some into her cup. It just feels a tad too stiff when imo it could be a little more poetic. Alexis opened the fridge while the worries of her task weighted on her shoulders. She approached the bottle of milk after putting it under her gaze as she opted to rely on its taste to rid herself of her concerns. Things like that to just make the experience less robotic. There is also an absurd reliance on terms like "beutifull, handsome, pretty". Beuty is kinda of a subjective thing and just saying "that person is beutifull" all the time kinda doesn't help me grasp why that person is beutifull. Lastly, the constant praise for Alexis feels really tiresome and ends up having the opposite effect. Its one thing to say a character is successful, it's another to just make them a perfect God in human form loved by everyone and everything. It feels like this novel is constantly trying to tell me what I should think and feel instead of letting me reach the conclusions by myself. 3 chapters in and I feel like I barely know Alexis because most of the text is about describing her instead of showing what she's like when she interacts with people. I don't want to read a description of a character, I want to see a character in action and let myself decide how I feel about her.
Revenge is always an interesting topic to write about. But there is always a tragic story behind it... The plot is intriguing, Alex is an interesting character. With pleasure, I will accompany her on her way to get the justice (added to the library). Well done!
The story is amazing! It is very well written. The character's design is so relevant. I'm so curious about the revenge. It's a good point to mention about that at the very first beginning. Just add this book into my collection. Can't wait to read more. Fighting, author nim!
What a great story to read! i love it! im addicted to the first chapters! absolutely recommend it and would love to read more! the story keeps getting better!
Great story author. It is a revenge story about our girl Alex who is a independent model and business woman. The story not only shows her revenge but also highlights the truma she has from her past. How it sometimes affect her? Let's see her journey to overcome her truma and get her revenge. In this journey she isn't alone her bestie manger fifi is with her along with a handsome actor name ethan. Not to forget our ml. Writing Quality - It's great bit author can decrease the amount of dialogue slightly. Story development - It's not fast pace but I can guarantee you it's not gonna be a 2000 chapter long book that is slow as turtle 🐢. It gives a steady feel. character design - We have some great charcters here. Alex isn't perfect she has her flaws and she knows it. Fifi is the cheerful bestie who loves handsome guy but she doesn't shy away from alex when alex is at her lowest. Updating stability - A weekly update is coming. World background - It's modern fantasy romance, it doesn't need to much world building. It gives me vibes of 'The villain's wife' (I might be wrong but only author can tell properly). Will I recommend this? Yeah, I really like revenge genre the story has potential to it. I will suggest author to brace herself as most readers like to read completed story so don't get demotivated, easily. Keep up great work author.
Overall : I would recommend this story to others as this is a good book to read and it was also a intriguing story that catches my attention!! I love the story very much! Writing quality : it was good and simple to understand but it would be great if the non dialogue sentances were separated into shorter paragraphs as it would be better! Updating : it is consistent and it would be great if there were more chapters to it!! Characters : Somehow the synopsis states that the male name is Eliott but the written name was Ethan- but i suppose the name is supoosed to be Ethan. Anyways, the characters were well written by the author and they were interesting. Even the descriptions of each character were well described out, which makes it even better! World background : The world background was great and it was nice to see that it was described well, about the country and all. My thoughts : I personally love this kind of stories and it made me read from the start to the end without me noticing. I really do hope there will be more chapters to come as i want to see what will happen to Ethan and Alex, they should like just get together already hahah~ This book has a great potential to be out there! Good job author and hope to see more from you!! ☺️
So this book is off to a good start...Alex is an interesting character. I'm not sure how to evaluate ML yet, but he sounds decent. I like the plot and the world background. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but it doesn't detract from the story. Welldone
First of all, although the novel seemed like a cliché, it is not. It is full of surprises. Totally different. Secondly, great writing. There are almost no grammatical errors. The creativity is excellent and the plot is unique and interesting.
The novel has a cliche storyline but this author managed to make it very unique and equally as interesting. For a non-native english speaker, the author wrote very well with little to no grammatical errors compared to some native english speakers lol. This fits in perfectly in the contemporary romance genre and has the potential to be great. [img=recommend]
A wonderful contemporary Romance! The characters and deep, well-developed and very lovable. The beginning is a bit slow, but it's worth it to power through those first couple chapters, because the interactions between the FL and ML are wonderful! Keep up the good work author!
I loved the philosophy of the novel, as a girl I fully understand what it means to lose faith in love, and in the people you love, that crisis that is so difficult to overcome later. The simple, beautiful language most characterizes the novel. It goes in harmony, makes you simply focus on and relate to events. I strongly recommended the novel I like it.
This is a well-written story with an amazing plot. I love it! The synopsis did a great job starting the vibe of the story, while every chapter will keep you asking for more. It also has well-written characters and dialogues. I love it!
Interesting Plot!! The writer keeps us hook with each chapter. As a suspense is revealed, another follows. Well Written!! The character design is done perfectly along with the environment details. Keep Going!!!
First of all, even though the novel looked cliched, it's not. It's full of surprises. Totally different. Secondly, great writing. There are close to no grammatical mistakes. Creativity is excellent and the plot is unique and interesting. The story development and it's pace is smooth. It hook's the readers interest instantly. Especially, the first chapter. All and all, the work has a great potential. Well done Author! Waiting for more chapters.
I'm not a really great fan of modern life stories but when I read this story it felt different. The character is bold and strong and she doesn't hesitate to do the things that fell right to her, I'm looking forward to such a great story.
character Very well defined and loved the characters Alex, Ethan And very curious bout Elliot. Storyline Awesome and fantabolous....loved it I was very hooked n read the whole chapters....waiting for updates now. Author love u and hats off
Great story. pushed forward and made more interesting by the motivation of the lead. Keeps the readers on their toes in anticipation of what would happen next while loving what she has already done. Again, great story.
Curiosity is the best weapon to lure a prey and the author seemed to have done just that. First of all, everything that involves revenge is certainly intriguing. The story is good that it got reading nonstop to the point that I didn't even noticed that I was already at the last chapter. Now, I am very curious as how she would execute her plot of revenge to perfection. There are some problems with the grammars, punctuations and how it is written but those are problems that could be polish as the story goes. Other than that I enjoyed reading this novel, especially during bed time with only lampshade to light me and a cup hot chocolate milk to accompany me. Good work author-san!
I liked the idea but I'm not sure I'm very fond of the execution. The actual story honestly has a fun and interesting plot, but the way it's being told feels a little clunky. There are times when things are being described as if it was a movie script instead of a book. Things like, Alexis opened the fridge. She saw a bottle of milk. Alexis grabbed the milk. She poured some into her cup. It just feels a tad too stiff when imo it could be a little more poetic. Alexis opened the fridge while the worries of her task weighted on her shoulders. She approached the bottle of milk after putting it under her gaze as she opted to rely on its taste to rid herself of her concerns. Things like that to just make the experience less robotic. There is also an absurd reliance on terms like "beutifull, handsome, pretty". Beuty is kinda of a subjective thing and just saying "that person is beutifull" all the time kinda doesn't help me grasp why that person is beutifull. Lastly, the constant praise for Alexis feels really tiresome and ends up having the opposite effect. Its one thing to say a character is successful, it's another to just make them a perfect God in human form loved by everyone and everything. It feels like this novel is constantly trying to tell me what I should think and feel instead of letting me reach the conclusions by myself. 3 chapters in and I feel like I barely know Alexis because most of the text is about describing her instead of showing what she's like when she interacts with people. I don't want to read a description of a character, I want to see a character in action and let myself decide how I feel about her.
Revenge is always an interesting topic to write about. But there is always a tragic story behind it... The plot is intriguing, Alex is an interesting character. With pleasure, I will accompany her on her way to get the justice (added to the library). Well done!
The story is amazing! It is very well written. The character's design is so relevant. I'm so curious about the revenge. It's a good point to mention about that at the very first beginning. Just add this book into my collection. Can't wait to read more. Fighting, author nim!
What a great story to read! i love it! im addicted to the first chapters! absolutely recommend it and would love to read more! the story keeps getting better!
Great story author. It is a revenge story about our girl Alex who is a independent model and business woman. The story not only shows her revenge but also highlights the truma she has from her past. How it sometimes affect her? Let's see her journey to overcome her truma and get her revenge. In this journey she isn't alone her bestie manger fifi is with her along with a handsome actor name ethan. Not to forget our ml. Writing Quality - It's great bit author can decrease the amount of dialogue slightly. Story development - It's not fast pace but I can guarantee you it's not gonna be a 2000 chapter long book that is slow as turtle 🐢. It gives a steady feel. character design - We have some great charcters here. Alex isn't perfect she has her flaws and she knows it. Fifi is the cheerful bestie who loves handsome guy but she doesn't shy away from alex when alex is at her lowest. Updating stability - A weekly update is coming. World background - It's modern fantasy romance, it doesn't need to much world building. It gives me vibes of 'The villain's wife' (I might be wrong but only author can tell properly). Will I recommend this? Yeah, I really like revenge genre the story has potential to it. I will suggest author to brace herself as most readers like to read completed story so don't get demotivated, easily. Keep up great work author.
Overall : I would recommend this story to others as this is a good book to read and it was also a intriguing story that catches my attention!! I love the story very much! Writing quality : it was good and simple to understand but it would be great if the non dialogue sentances were separated into shorter paragraphs as it would be better! Updating : it is consistent and it would be great if there were more chapters to it!! Characters : Somehow the synopsis states that the male name is Eliott but the written name was Ethan- but i suppose the name is supoosed to be Ethan. Anyways, the characters were well written by the author and they were interesting. Even the descriptions of each character were well described out, which makes it even better! World background : The world background was great and it was nice to see that it was described well, about the country and all. My thoughts : I personally love this kind of stories and it made me read from the start to the end without me noticing. I really do hope there will be more chapters to come as i want to see what will happen to Ethan and Alex, they should like just get together already hahah~ This book has a great potential to be out there! Good job author and hope to see more from you!! ☺️
So this book is off to a good start...Alex is an interesting character. I'm not sure how to evaluate ML yet, but he sounds decent. I like the plot and the world background. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but it doesn't detract from the story. Welldone