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I knoe my books have a lot of grammar errors and typos. I have dedicated the whole of next week to proofread and correct misspells and errors. And change a few aspects of the novel where necessary. Thanks for reading. To those who are reading..
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This novel would make a good comic, it kinda reminded me of that one anime I watched which had a similar plot. The synopsis gave a nice outline of the plot and was extremely intriguing, though I got a bit confused near the end of it lol. The novel has quite a few grammatical, spelling and punctuation errors, some that could be called typos. Some paragraphs and sentences were very confusing because of a few typos and weird wording. Some paragraphs were like riddles and they were just as difficult to comprehend. I recommend that the writer reads over their chapters before publishing to get rid of the typos. Character design could use some work too, the reader is not at all introduced to any of the characters but I predict readers will learn more as they read on. (Hopefully) Overall, the novel was a good read. It was slow paced but fast at the same time since Alex just rushed through the days not really focusing on anything in particular. I hope the author can work on the typos and only get better and better.[img=recommend]
A great concept, no doubt. But sometimes the novel is bit confusing. Past and present are mixed and not easily understandable. Besides that everything is great. Great writing, plot, story development, world background. All and all, the work has a great potential. I will recommend everyone to read it at least once.
Writing Quality- The descriptions laid out on the novel is great compared to the ones I read here in webnovel. However, the author needs to check for the sentence varieties to hook readers as well as "showing" in the chapters. Overall, this is a unique concept for me and an entertaining one! Kudos for the author!
So far so good, please continue updating and giving us more of this. The story has a strong beginning and is mysterious enough to make a reader want more. I'm rooting for you author 👍
This is a review a to motivate and hopefully help the author for later chapters. Since there are barely any chapters yet, I will base mostly on the synopsis for the plot... There are interesting points provided on the synopsis that can easily attract people. But it would be better if author rewrite and fix it to appeal more. The best thing so far is the world background. I can see its potential to be one of this book strong point depending on how the author will continue. And the part where it needs the most improvement, is the technical writing. I am not an English teacherbor anything, but it can be a turn off when some paragraphs are difficult to read. I suggested something in the comments so I hope author sees it. In conclusion. The strong points of the book for the meantime is little. This can be attributed to the lack of chapters, but with good premise, there is a chance for this to be great.
I love how it begins [img=exp]. Keep updating because we want more content [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I knoe my books have a lot of grammar errors and typos. I have dedicated the whole of next week to proofread and correct misspells and errors. And change a few aspects of the novel where necessary. Thanks for reading. To those who are reading..
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This novel would make a good comic, it kinda reminded me of that one anime I watched which had a similar plot. The synopsis gave a nice outline of the plot and was extremely intriguing, though I got a bit confused near the end of it lol. The novel has quite a few grammatical, spelling and punctuation errors, some that could be called typos. Some paragraphs and sentences were very confusing because of a few typos and weird wording. Some paragraphs were like riddles and they were just as difficult to comprehend. I recommend that the writer reads over their chapters before publishing to get rid of the typos. Character design could use some work too, the reader is not at all introduced to any of the characters but I predict readers will learn more as they read on. (Hopefully) Overall, the novel was a good read. It was slow paced but fast at the same time since Alex just rushed through the days not really focusing on anything in particular. I hope the author can work on the typos and only get better and better.[img=recommend]
A great concept, no doubt. But sometimes the novel is bit confusing. Past and present are mixed and not easily understandable. Besides that everything is great. Great writing, plot, story development, world background. All and all, the work has a great potential. I will recommend everyone to read it at least once.
Writing Quality- The descriptions laid out on the novel is great compared to the ones I read here in webnovel. However, the author needs to check for the sentence varieties to hook readers as well as "showing" in the chapters. Overall, this is a unique concept for me and an entertaining one! Kudos for the author!
So far so good, please continue updating and giving us more of this. The story has a strong beginning and is mysterious enough to make a reader want more. I'm rooting for you author 👍
This is a review a to motivate and hopefully help the author for later chapters. Since there are barely any chapters yet, I will base mostly on the synopsis for the plot... There are interesting points provided on the synopsis that can easily attract people. But it would be better if author rewrite and fix it to appeal more. The best thing so far is the world background. I can see its potential to be one of this book strong point depending on how the author will continue. And the part where it needs the most improvement, is the technical writing. I am not an English teacherbor anything, but it can be a turn off when some paragraphs are difficult to read. I suggested something in the comments so I hope author sees it. In conclusion. The strong points of the book for the meantime is little. This can be attributed to the lack of chapters, but with good premise, there is a chance for this to be great.
I love how it begins [img=exp]. Keep updating because we want more content [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]