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Started out decent quality with a good concept but went downhill fast. Not a great understanding of the world this fic is based off and the formatting of the fic is pretty bad as well.
Une histoire passionnante !!! Merci de nous faire voyage à travers ton imagination. Histoire différente des fanfictions classiques et je valide à 100%!!!
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It is too self centered. The chapters are too afraid to not include the Self Insert's thoughts and feelings. The Character is also a Cuck. A Coward is an understatement for how stupid this is.
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Okay, so I have only read the first 10 chapters or so and I don't know if the story changes much from there but all in all it is a very avg. fanfic with an interesting idea but poor execution. Add to that the highly unlikeable MC and all you have is frustration about his mannerisms and all make it highly unnatural.
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even if at the beginning of the story is boring but i'm still give you 5 stars for my appreciation to you. keep your spirit and improve yourself
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Tiết lộ SpoilerA very good story and I liked that the mc was reborn as an adult already instead of being reborn as a kid or something differently a new idea and the story is still going strong so can't wait to see what comes next
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Tiết lộ SpoilerVery good.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Something I hate about this fanfic is that apparently all ninjas are stupid. The MC reincarnates in the body of a social misfit who hardly ever spoke to someone and isolates himself from other people, but shortly after reincarnating he begins to talk with Naruto, flirt with Anko and among other things that do not fit with the previous personality. The ridiculous thing is nobody suspects anything of the change of the mc. (Google translate)
One of the really good Naruto fanfic out there. I personally like this becoz the starting point of this story is different from almost all the other stories in Naruto. So give it a try
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Tiết lộ SpoilerWriting Quality: Not stellar, but definitely above average for a fanfic. It could be more engaging. Stability of Updates: Its seemingly dropped sooooo... Story Development: There isn't much development frankly. MC has no hardships. Stats are easy come. There are no defining conflicts. MC did not have issues reconciling their situation or the embedded trauma of the body he inhabits etc Character Design: Eh, it is serviceable but I feel there was more in the tank World Background: Depends on prior franchise knowledge as a lot of things are taken for granted. This is great when its in service of other development, bad when original content gets the same treatment and never gets fleshed out. There is a bonus star in there for no harem😂
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Started out decent quality with a good concept but went downhill fast. Not a great understanding of the world this fic is based off and the formatting of the fic is pretty bad as well.
Une histoire passionnante !!! Merci de nous faire voyage à travers ton imagination. Histoire différente des fanfictions classiques et je valide à 100%!!!
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Great story. Hope that you will continue writing this story. Great story. Hope that you will continue writing this story. Great story. Hope that you will continue writing this story. Great story. Hope that you will continue writing this story. Great story. Hope that you will continue writing this story. Great story. Hope that you will continue writing this story. Great story. Hope that you will continue writing this story.
It is too self centered. The chapters are too afraid to not include the Self Insert's thoughts and feelings. The Character is also a Cuck. A Coward is an understatement for how stupid this is.
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Okay, so I have only read the first 10 chapters or so and I don't know if the story changes much from there but all in all it is a very avg. fanfic with an interesting idea but poor execution. Add to that the highly unlikeable MC and all you have is frustration about his mannerisms and all make it highly unnatural.
great story. hope that you will continue writing this fic. 😊😆😊😆😊😆😊😆😄😆😊😆😊😆😊😆😊😆😊😆😊😆😄😄😆😆😄😆😊😊😆😊😆😊😆😊😆😆😊😆😊😆
Вы должны это продолжить!!!!! Очень нравится то как именно развиваются события. Очень интересно и захватывающе! Продолжение пожалуйста сюда давай а!!!
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even if at the beginning of the story is boring but i'm still give you 5 stars for my appreciation to you. keep your spirit and improve yourself
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Tiết lộ SpoilerA very good story and I liked that the mc was reborn as an adult already instead of being reborn as a kid or something differently a new idea and the story is still going strong so can't wait to see what comes next
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Tiết lộ SpoilerVery good.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Something I hate about this fanfic is that apparently all ninjas are stupid. The MC reincarnates in the body of a social misfit who hardly ever spoke to someone and isolates himself from other people, but shortly after reincarnating he begins to talk with Naruto, flirt with Anko and among other things that do not fit with the previous personality. The ridiculous thing is nobody suspects anything of the change of the mc. (Google translate)
One of the really good Naruto fanfic out there. I personally like this becoz the starting point of this story is different from almost all the other stories in Naruto. So give it a try
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Writing Quality: Not stellar, but definitely above average for a fanfic. It could be more engaging. Stability of Updates: Its seemingly dropped sooooo... Story Development: There isn't much development frankly. MC has no hardships. Stats are easy come. There are no defining conflicts. MC did not have issues reconciling their situation or the embedded trauma of the body he inhabits etc Character Design: Eh, it is serviceable but I feel there was more in the tank World Background: Depends on prior franchise knowledge as a lot of things are taken for granted. This is great when its in service of other development, bad when original content gets the same treatment and never gets fleshed out. There is a bonus star in there for no harem😂