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I read some chapters and I already liked it, the chapters are long, writing is good, and man the cover is awesome.... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the world background is awesome and the title itself deserves 5 stars lol anyways story development is a bit slow but its ok ok byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Just about to read and see if it's worth it😁,the synopsis alone got me interested🙄 hope it doesn't flop 🙃🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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tbh the name alone deserves 5 stars, aside from large paragraphs there is nothing wrong... any major grammatically error or obscurity. I expect a looooot hopefully author is up for this tall order.
I highly recommend this book mostly to those who likes suspense and mystery like me. The author didn't failed to show the concept of dark novel with trill and everything you ever want. The writing is fine, it is readable. I won't pinpoint small mistakes as I think it is not that crucial plus I also adore how determined the author to learn more about writing, that is relatable as I also do the same thing. Well that's the beauty of learning right? It is limitless.
Interesting story, despite having a few parts published for the meantime, you can already see its shimmering potential. Each chapter is loaded with thrill and the writing style is creative indeed. Most importantly, the world background and other supporting details are very unique and clever. I certainly love this and I do have faith in the author's plans for the further development of the story. Keep it up!
Let me start by saying I do not like the blatantly occultic genre at all, so my reviews on these topic don't go in as much depth since I don't fancy this genre. The story is interesting. Perhaps there could be a bit more description of how the characters look, but description in general is solid. Well done overall. The writing quality seems solid. The updates seem consistent. The world background is great.
I really like the character's, they're well written and the interactions are interesting. Although there's a little too much gore for my taste. There's only a few chapters so far, but I can tell this story has potential. Keep up the good work
I'm giving it a 3.8 lol. I just read a few chapters. I like the effort put to to the Novel. The author seems to have a lot of passion the way this novel is structured.
a lot of parts from this are wittily written, the characters are complex and this has a good plot overall however the end isn't even alluded to slightly so that's GOOD. a 5/5 because i love plots like Lucifer, i mean Maguire and other characters here may be TAD BIT different but you should really go through lucifer's plot and you'll get better ideas too hehe, I am gonna finish reading more chapters as u upload more
This novel is giving great storytelling, an enticing storyline, mystery, character, and humor all at your disposal. Seldom do the beginning of stories have such an air to them but this author came in locked and loaded. I can tell that the novel’s plot is going to evolve to depths unexplored. A truly enjoyable ride so far.
The plot is very interesting and the characters are engaging to read. It has good potential once the author update with stable chapters. Keep it up.
Great idea with a great skill of describing! I really feel like everything was happening around me. I can say you can because a famous writer if you continues like this. Anyways, the synopsis was interesting and it attracted my eyes. The plot was really well defined and it has a great story inside. Keep it up author! CHEERS FOR YOU
Amazing potential, but there are literally only 3 chapters right now so I can't say much. I can definitely see this being one of the top stories on the site though, so keep it up, author! P.S. Try daily updates if you can! (but keep the quality up of course)
😮 Wow!!! It is really good. The beginning was a blast, title and all, not to mention it continued to flow. I enjoyed the vocabulary, the plot. I can't wait to continue. Author-san keep it up
The story is still a work in progress, with an interesting world background and characters. From the chapters so far, I think the author tends to focus a bit more on building the world background than any other elements. In addition to that, when I read the 'history lesson prologue' it feels like I'm reading an informative page. Which to me is an excellent way for reader to go back in case they are confuse on something in the novel. As for characters, I think its the way how the main character is treat and how he response to the way he was treat that seem rather sad. Added his past to the mix, and it's like an emotional rollercoaster. In overall, nothing seem to be amiss at the moment, but one thing I would like to touch upon is the writing quality. It's good, but can be improve. I think grammar wise, the author doing pretty good. But in a few paragraphs that I read, I think some of the vocab used can be replace with another for a better sentence flow. Other than that I think the author is doing great, so keeping going! Fighting!
The synopsis made me curious to read the story and as soon as I read the first chapter, I knew this book is a good one. I like how you described the First chapter with the officers and the dead body. What entices me more is the way you wrote, describing the words in such a way that it captured my attention immediately! Overall, I am hooked :D
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This is cool and lit! The plot is really unique for me since I've never heard of this before. It's also easy to get sucked in because it's packed of a whole lot of mysteries. I really liked the world building, it might be few chapters in but I could already see the richness and vastness of the setting. Aside from few writing errors, I have no complain. I definitely could say this is a must read!
This is thriller book. It almost no flaws maybe because it was knew. I couldn't assess is properly with only 4 chapters. Maybe I'll come back here again after some update. I recommend anyone to read this book becoz its worth ur time!
I'm giving this a 5 star, despite having only a few chapters to read, because of the amazing potential. It starts packed with hectic action (gore, not for the young readers), and then it reveals the emotional side as well. I hope to soon find out more about characters as the paranormal mystery is being revealed. Here is one critique: I wish that background info was sprinkled within chapters, as I don't like to read lengthy Aux chapters that explain the world where the story happens. But I had fun without reading the Aux chapter, so it's not a big deal. 👍 Kudos to the author for this unique story. Keep up the good work!
A great paranormal mystery story from a burgeoning writer! While the writer is new to fiction, there's some great lines of dialogue and some well-built characters. This is definitely a story to look out for!
Ok so I read the first three chapters and it's an interesting idea with fascinating plot. Love the way you started the story. It seemed much unqiue from other stories.
Thrilling concept to inspire millions of audience over world. How you got this idea? Looking forward to get more and more chapters with great stability.
You have done a good job author! I really liked this novel. I liked the use of vocabulary, it's good. I also liked the characters a lot and the dialogues between them are really well written and funny. There are only 3 chapters currently and I really haven't anything to point out. In fact, I really liked reading it! Keep up the good work Author, I'll be looking forward to the upcoming chapters :)
The auxillary chapter shows me that you put a lot of thought into this world. The setting is grim, and the characters are rough. I think the strongest points of the story come from the dialogue. Each character is filled to the brim with personality. (I also enjoy the gore you put into the story.)
I liked the story. It is detailed and written beautifully. The characters are hilarious especially the Priest. Also, I liked how the plot is portrayed, the vocabulary used has a flow matching the act of crimes and investigations. Good job author.👍 Paragraphs are quite long but still okay.
It has a nice plot.Some parts are confusing. But still overall is great. Storyline,characters development was good. Keep going.😊
I read some chapters and I already liked it, the chapters are long, writing is good, and man the cover is awesome.... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the world background is awesome and the title itself deserves 5 stars lol anyways story development is a bit slow but its ok ok byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Just about to read and see if it's worth it😁,the synopsis alone got me interested🙄 hope it doesn't flop 🙃🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
tbh the name alone deserves 5 stars, aside from large paragraphs there is nothing wrong... any major grammatically error or obscurity. I expect a looooot hopefully author is up for this tall order.
I highly recommend this book mostly to those who likes suspense and mystery like me. The author didn't failed to show the concept of dark novel with trill and everything you ever want. The writing is fine, it is readable. I won't pinpoint small mistakes as I think it is not that crucial plus I also adore how determined the author to learn more about writing, that is relatable as I also do the same thing. Well that's the beauty of learning right? It is limitless.
Interesting story, despite having a few parts published for the meantime, you can already see its shimmering potential. Each chapter is loaded with thrill and the writing style is creative indeed. Most importantly, the world background and other supporting details are very unique and clever. I certainly love this and I do have faith in the author's plans for the further development of the story. Keep it up!
Let me start by saying I do not like the blatantly occultic genre at all, so my reviews on these topic don't go in as much depth since I don't fancy this genre. The story is interesting. Perhaps there could be a bit more description of how the characters look, but description in general is solid. Well done overall. The writing quality seems solid. The updates seem consistent. The world background is great.
I really like the character's, they're well written and the interactions are interesting. Although there's a little too much gore for my taste. There's only a few chapters so far, but I can tell this story has potential. Keep up the good work
I'm giving it a 3.8 lol. I just read a few chapters. I like the effort put to to the Novel. The author seems to have a lot of passion the way this novel is structured.
a lot of parts from this are wittily written, the characters are complex and this has a good plot overall however the end isn't even alluded to slightly so that's GOOD. a 5/5 because i love plots like Lucifer, i mean Maguire and other characters here may be TAD BIT different but you should really go through lucifer's plot and you'll get better ideas too hehe, I am gonna finish reading more chapters as u upload more
This novel is giving great storytelling, an enticing storyline, mystery, character, and humor all at your disposal. Seldom do the beginning of stories have such an air to them but this author came in locked and loaded. I can tell that the novel’s plot is going to evolve to depths unexplored. A truly enjoyable ride so far.
The plot is very interesting and the characters are engaging to read. It has good potential once the author update with stable chapters. Keep it up.
Great idea with a great skill of describing! I really feel like everything was happening around me. I can say you can because a famous writer if you continues like this. Anyways, the synopsis was interesting and it attracted my eyes. The plot was really well defined and it has a great story inside. Keep it up author! CHEERS FOR YOU
Amazing potential, but there are literally only 3 chapters right now so I can't say much. I can definitely see this being one of the top stories on the site though, so keep it up, author! P.S. Try daily updates if you can! (but keep the quality up of course)
😮 Wow!!! It is really good. The beginning was a blast, title and all, not to mention it continued to flow. I enjoyed the vocabulary, the plot. I can't wait to continue. Author-san keep it up
The story is still a work in progress, with an interesting world background and characters. From the chapters so far, I think the author tends to focus a bit more on building the world background than any other elements. In addition to that, when I read the 'history lesson prologue' it feels like I'm reading an informative page. Which to me is an excellent way for reader to go back in case they are confuse on something in the novel. As for characters, I think its the way how the main character is treat and how he response to the way he was treat that seem rather sad. Added his past to the mix, and it's like an emotional rollercoaster. In overall, nothing seem to be amiss at the moment, but one thing I would like to touch upon is the writing quality. It's good, but can be improve. I think grammar wise, the author doing pretty good. But in a few paragraphs that I read, I think some of the vocab used can be replace with another for a better sentence flow. Other than that I think the author is doing great, so keeping going! Fighting!
The synopsis made me curious to read the story and as soon as I read the first chapter, I knew this book is a good one. I like how you described the First chapter with the officers and the dead body. What entices me more is the way you wrote, describing the words in such a way that it captured my attention immediately! Overall, I am hooked :D
Tiết lộ Spoiler This is cool and lit! The plot is really unique for me since I've never heard of this before. It's also easy to get sucked in because it's packed of a whole lot of mysteries. I really liked the world building, it might be few chapters in but I could already see the richness and vastness of the setting. Aside from few writing errors, I have no complain. I definitely could say this is a must read!
This is thriller book. It almost no flaws maybe because it was knew. I couldn't assess is properly with only 4 chapters. Maybe I'll come back here again after some update. I recommend anyone to read this book becoz its worth ur time!
I'm giving this a 5 star, despite having only a few chapters to read, because of the amazing potential. It starts packed with hectic action (gore, not for the young readers), and then it reveals the emotional side as well. I hope to soon find out more about characters as the paranormal mystery is being revealed. Here is one critique: I wish that background info was sprinkled within chapters, as I don't like to read lengthy Aux chapters that explain the world where the story happens. But I had fun without reading the Aux chapter, so it's not a big deal. 👍 Kudos to the author for this unique story. Keep up the good work!
A great paranormal mystery story from a burgeoning writer! While the writer is new to fiction, there's some great lines of dialogue and some well-built characters. This is definitely a story to look out for!
Ok so I read the first three chapters and it's an interesting idea with fascinating plot. Love the way you started the story. It seemed much unqiue from other stories.
Thrilling concept to inspire millions of audience over world. How you got this idea? Looking forward to get more and more chapters with great stability.
You have done a good job author! I really liked this novel. I liked the use of vocabulary, it's good. I also liked the characters a lot and the dialogues between them are really well written and funny. There are only 3 chapters currently and I really haven't anything to point out. In fact, I really liked reading it! Keep up the good work Author, I'll be looking forward to the upcoming chapters :)
The auxillary chapter shows me that you put a lot of thought into this world. The setting is grim, and the characters are rough. I think the strongest points of the story come from the dialogue. Each character is filled to the brim with personality. (I also enjoy the gore you put into the story.)
I liked the story. It is detailed and written beautifully. The characters are hilarious especially the Priest. Also, I liked how the plot is portrayed, the vocabulary used has a flow matching the act of crimes and investigations. Good job author.👍 Paragraphs are quite long but still okay.
It has a nice plot.Some parts are confusing. But still overall is great. Storyline,characters development was good. Keep going.😊