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hey man, can you pls update more? this is probably one of the best reads I had ever had
Make it free 100%... pretty please 🙏🙏🙏 .............................................................................................................
Bro author, I just searching some novel and find some novel that is similar to you and is still new. You need to step up your game, The novel name is self-explainatory which is The Omnipotent System by Adams2004. And I check that the novel has more power stone than this novel. As a fan of this novel, I hope your novel does not being taken over by a new novel.
Amazing novel with an OP mysterious mc. The only two downsides of the novel: 1. Very slow updates 2. The mc appearances in the novel is somewhat rare. The updated version of the novel appears to be much more interesting and has more gravitas than the previous version. Looking forward for the rest of the novel, and what would someone as OP as patrick do has me excited to read the novel and afraid that it would get dropped.
Author, I want to thank you for doing this novel as it motivates me. Hopefully you continue until the end. And hopefully you don't do monotonous kind of writing. Example of it is "The First Store System", where it has +1000 Chapters but when you read it, you know it is monotonous as it repeats the same sentence. And from your novel itself, I like it myself. And if you do any novel that have long chapters, avoid this style because me, myself can clearly tell that you are sincere or not, and not taking advantage just to take money from readers. A heads-up, this novel is best.
I love this novel, writing is the best. Hopefully there is similar novel to this one, Can you guys recommend me novel that is similar to this one? I love it, if I'm rich, I want to give writer any fund to continue this novel.
bruhh the edited one is so so so so much more interesting than the original also it's so interesting its not boring knowing that the mc can have anything and everything in the whole multiverse and reality it's so interesting , bruhh the difference between the edited one and the original is like heaven and earth the original is so boring and iIhate the mc for hiding his power and it's not even interesting while the edited one is so good and also its not boring like the original it's much more interesting
Never read anything better, the best plot in my opinion that I have ever discovered(the new updated chapter version), the concept truly excites me, I just wish I could read on forever but I have to wait every few days for a new chapter, I will be patient though and I can’t wait to see how this all plays out, I could read on for eternity, well done LordFlash 👏
How far does the edited chapter goes? Does the flow of the story as a whole will be affected?
trutfully speaking I love the old version more, but I hope the new version improves
I love this novel, Hopefully the author is constant with the update. I immersed myself in this op storyline. Can you show me different POV of the wife's, and subordinates?
I'm want sun wukong to be in more chapters since im was a minor I'm love the rebellious trickster that monkey king is also powerful to I think it will be a great fit to have him with the group the Monkey for the first time show respect saying Fairwell
Hello is this novel on hiatus or what? It's a good piece I hope it continues.
Ha.... Dropped... I just discovered this.... Sad :( Ha..... Sad I hope to see a similar plot like this somewhere else where mc has everything and be op and make his own world
First of all, thank you author for not dropping this fantastic novel, and now that u have started to edit and rewrite some parts of the story, btw which does feel quite an improvement. Just hope that it will now have chapter stability, also Take your time but please not much that people forget about the novel. Good work author and will try to support you in any way I can. Thanks!
Beautiful novel, I’m not nessecarily a fan of harems but I don’t care in the case of this novel, I’ve been checking to see if any updates have a occurre for a while now and obviously the author has a life but please let us know if you will continue or drop the novel, thank you
it would be a 5.0 if he continued publishing more chapters to the story is he sick or something
My favorite web novel here and I love it more when author rewriting it but the only problem is the update is too slow huhu
Author can you do something about the edited chapters it was going nice the its like a massive time skip happened out of no were and nothing makes sense anymore please fix it
Please do more! I'd rather have new chapters rather than edited ones; the current ones are fine. I really want to read more of this novel since I can't find any other story like this.
This novel has become one of my top novels that I folow. The author has done an amazing job at writing an omnipotent MC the only thing that could be improved would be the update rate as we are currently only getting a few chapters a month
Imagine a story where mc has 500 IQ is orphan and no power and gets bullied. Then he gets a system and takes revenge on those bullies goes to find his girlfriend that got adopted to learn she has a fiancé that is from a very powerful family. He then gets stronger and rescues her while fighting in the dungeons to find out that a different race made these dungeons to conquer the earth. He then fights against this powerfull race and visits different worlds and turns into the strongest person in the universe THAT is exactly not what’s happening here because mc is basically the strongest person in all universes from the start so we don’t waste our time seeing him train and fight hundreds of filler chapters. Expect a story where mc can and will do what ever he wants without all the cliche bull I wrote at the beginning that would take 1000+ chapters.
hey man, can you pls update more? this is probably one of the best reads I had ever had
Make it free 100%... pretty please 🙏🙏🙏 .............................................................................................................
Bro author, I just searching some novel and find some novel that is similar to you and is still new. You need to step up your game, The novel name is self-explainatory which is The Omnipotent System by Adams2004. And I check that the novel has more power stone than this novel. As a fan of this novel, I hope your novel does not being taken over by a new novel.
Amazing novel with an OP mysterious mc. The only two downsides of the novel: 1. Very slow updates 2. The mc appearances in the novel is somewhat rare. The updated version of the novel appears to be much more interesting and has more gravitas than the previous version. Looking forward for the rest of the novel, and what would someone as OP as patrick do has me excited to read the novel and afraid that it would get dropped.
Author, I want to thank you for doing this novel as it motivates me. Hopefully you continue until the end. And hopefully you don't do monotonous kind of writing. Example of it is "The First Store System", where it has +1000 Chapters but when you read it, you know it is monotonous as it repeats the same sentence. And from your novel itself, I like it myself. And if you do any novel that have long chapters, avoid this style because me, myself can clearly tell that you are sincere or not, and not taking advantage just to take money from readers. A heads-up, this novel is best.
I love this novel, writing is the best. Hopefully there is similar novel to this one, Can you guys recommend me novel that is similar to this one? I love it, if I'm rich, I want to give writer any fund to continue this novel.
bruhh the edited one is so so so so much more interesting than the original also it's so interesting its not boring knowing that the mc can have anything and everything in the whole multiverse and reality it's so interesting , bruhh the difference between the edited one and the original is like heaven and earth the original is so boring and iIhate the mc for hiding his power and it's not even interesting while the edited one is so good and also its not boring like the original it's much more interesting
Never read anything better, the best plot in my opinion that I have ever discovered(the new updated chapter version), the concept truly excites me, I just wish I could read on forever but I have to wait every few days for a new chapter, I will be patient though and I can’t wait to see how this all plays out, I could read on for eternity, well done LordFlash 👏
How far does the edited chapter goes? Does the flow of the story as a whole will be affected?
trutfully speaking I love the old version more, but I hope the new version improves
I love this novel, Hopefully the author is constant with the update. I immersed myself in this op storyline. Can you show me different POV of the wife's, and subordinates?
I'm want sun wukong to be in more chapters since im was a minor I'm love the rebellious trickster that monkey king is also powerful to I think it will be a great fit to have him with the group the Monkey for the first time show respect saying Fairwell
Hello is this novel on hiatus or what? It's a good piece I hope it continues.
Ha.... Dropped... I just discovered this.... Sad :( Ha..... Sad I hope to see a similar plot like this somewhere else where mc has everything and be op and make his own world
First of all, thank you author for not dropping this fantastic novel, and now that u have started to edit and rewrite some parts of the story, btw which does feel quite an improvement. Just hope that it will now have chapter stability, also Take your time but please not much that people forget about the novel. Good work author and will try to support you in any way I can. Thanks!
Beautiful novel, I’m not nessecarily a fan of harems but I don’t care in the case of this novel, I’ve been checking to see if any updates have a occurre for a while now and obviously the author has a life but please let us know if you will continue or drop the novel, thank you
it would be a 5.0 if he continued publishing more chapters to the story is he sick or something
My favorite web novel here and I love it more when author rewriting it but the only problem is the update is too slow huhu
Author can you do something about the edited chapters it was going nice the its like a massive time skip happened out of no were and nothing makes sense anymore please fix it
Please do more! I'd rather have new chapters rather than edited ones; the current ones are fine. I really want to read more of this novel since I can't find any other story like this.
This novel has become one of my top novels that I folow. The author has done an amazing job at writing an omnipotent MC the only thing that could be improved would be the update rate as we are currently only getting a few chapters a month
Imagine a story where mc has 500 IQ is orphan and no power and gets bullied. Then he gets a system and takes revenge on those bullies goes to find his girlfriend that got adopted to learn she has a fiancé that is from a very powerful family. He then gets stronger and rescues her while fighting in the dungeons to find out that a different race made these dungeons to conquer the earth. He then fights against this powerfull race and visits different worlds and turns into the strongest person in the universe THAT is exactly not what’s happening here because mc is basically the strongest person in all universes from the start so we don’t waste our time seeing him train and fight hundreds of filler chapters. Expect a story where mc can and will do what ever he wants without all the cliche bull I wrote at the beginning that would take 1000+ chapters.