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I recommend visiting ff if you like the story, author is writing a second great hp fanfic with a similar theme to this one with Harry as MC called dark discoveries
Well It's quite good..But the only fact that I hate is mc making girls exhibitionist,,..........,......................,......................
I rarely ever write reviews, even for the novels I enjoy. This fanfic however is a rare exception that I find to be a true diamond amongst trash. You have to appreciate the diamonds when you see them.
The story is very good but i just want if this novel is already completed or still ongoing also if there is raw link . . . . . . . . . . .
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it's amazing, fulfilling, the scenario is believable. nothing that at least for me break the immersion and make question how the F he/she do that or how the f that can happen. i love the story a lot this is one of the best novel that i ever read.
By far one of the the most well written fan fic about Harry Potter yet the s*x scene's are amazingly well done better than a lot of novels I read the details is amazing honestly it deserves this rating By far one of the the most well written fan fic about Harry Potter yet the s*x scene's are amazingly well done better than a lot of novels I read the details is amazing honestly it deserves this rating
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Good fanfik 😍🧐 ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I read this novel by the original and very good author, I recommend it. Just be careful has Netori.
Good novel and snu snu 😁 .................................................................. .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................
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This is quite good and unique. This is quite good and unique. This is quite good and unique. This is quite good and unique. This is quite good and unique.
Fanfiction.c*m Author is great. 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
It's 100% smut, but it's very well written smut. 🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋
one of the best fanfic ever read of Harry potter series ...................................................... great scenarios writing pattern awesome and the mentality of MC suberb realistic really convincing and what more can be said [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Are you going to continue the fanfic or will you only be able to do the chapters that exist? ......................................................
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A really great Harry potter fic with the beutifully well done s*x scenes, while I don't like other people looking at his prey I still like how he can use it to his advantage.
Its good, and the s*x scene are not boring. The only problem is the detail of the story. There are many things wrong about the lore(even if you say its au), but its not to the point thats its frustrating. So its eaily ignorable. Also im just here for the lemons!! Hehe Overall, i recommend it for those who are not picky about every details and just want to enjoy a casual ecchi read.
. .......,(&$6($7)$7$)6"'(;('+'+ fridk gadgkuldykilfmysifhmdhmshmdhmd.hshsydigkvkcjfd6($7(4($6$6(#5+#+5#%8&9-0&7##637 6ohkfjfoupgjrihjdutohjdutoho
Good novel and snu snu 😁 .................................................................. .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................
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Tiết lộ Spoiler I recommend visiting ff if you like the story, author is writing a second great hp fanfic with a similar theme to this one with Harry as MC called dark discoveries
Well It's quite good..But the only fact that I hate is mc making girls exhibitionist,,..........,......................,......................
I rarely ever write reviews, even for the novels I enjoy. This fanfic however is a rare exception that I find to be a true diamond amongst trash. You have to appreciate the diamonds when you see them.
The story is very good but i just want if this novel is already completed or still ongoing also if there is raw link . . . . . . . . . . .
?? *?? '!'!? '?? *? *? - *-*-') :-9):('((:(&-':(:(:):)('-₽/*/*/*!:!'!'('!:!'('('!'-'(:-'-'('/''!!'!:?//?/+/+?'-**//*/''!!'/!/!!:!'*!'!'!'!_):)_-*'?_(:('(:(:
it's amazing, fulfilling, the scenario is believable. nothing that at least for me break the immersion and make question how the F he/she do that or how the f that can happen. i love the story a lot this is one of the best novel that i ever read.
By far one of the the most well written fan fic about Harry Potter yet the s*x scene's are amazingly well done better than a lot of novels I read the details is amazing honestly it deserves this rating By far one of the the most well written fan fic about Harry Potter yet the s*x scene's are amazingly well done better than a lot of novels I read the details is amazing honestly it deserves this rating
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Tiết lộ Spoiler Good fanfik 😍🧐 ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I read this novel by the original and very good author, I recommend it. Just be careful has Netori.
Good novel and snu snu 😁 .................................................................. .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................
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Tiết lộ Spoiler This is quite good and unique. This is quite good and unique. This is quite good and unique. This is quite good and unique. This is quite good and unique.
Fanfiction.c*m Author is great. 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
It's 100% smut, but it's very well written smut. 🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋🍌🍑🍒💋
one of the best fanfic ever read of Harry potter series ...................................................... great scenarios writing pattern awesome and the mentality of MC suberb realistic really convincing and what more can be said [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Are you going to continue the fanfic or will you only be able to do the chapters that exist? ......................................................
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A really great Harry potter fic with the beutifully well done s*x scenes, while I don't like other people looking at his prey I still like how he can use it to his advantage.
Its good, and the s*x scene are not boring. The only problem is the detail of the story. There are many things wrong about the lore(even if you say its au), but its not to the point thats its frustrating. So its eaily ignorable. Also im just here for the lemons!! Hehe Overall, i recommend it for those who are not picky about every details and just want to enjoy a casual ecchi read.
. .......,(&$6($7)$7$)6"'(;('+'+ fridk gadgkuldykilfmysifhmdhmshmdhmd.hshsydigkvkcjfd6($7(4($6$6(#5+#+5#%8&9-0&7##637 6ohkfjfoupgjrihjdutohjdutoho
Good novel and snu snu 😁 .................................................................. .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................