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Tiết lộ SpoilerI love everything thing about this I was reading when it first came out and was waiting for more 😌. A new idea and great start and their is so much you come up with this idea I recommend everyone to give it a try cause you will have this in your library and waiting for more.
Writing quality is fine . Update stability sucks though character, story development I'd say so and so story kind of rushed, the Character Design is decent, World Background is good no complaints there.
Keep going update some .. nice fanfic bro👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
please don't drop it's a pretty unique story it would've be a shame if it just gets dropped so please don't if it isn't than when will it update
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I like how different it is. I’ve never seen anyone take this route when making a dbz fanfic. Please keep it up, I would love to see more. I always felt like there wasn’t enough dbz fanfics on this site, so it’s good to see you making one.
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just to support the author just to support the author just to support the author just to support the author just to support the author just to support the author
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I like it I like it I like it I like it a lot please don't drop this fanfic novel okay okay [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I Think this story is good so far. And I don’t want to see it dropped I think it is uniqe and fun.
this story looks promising and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.
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Tiết lộ SpoilerI love everything thing about this I was reading when it first came out and was waiting for more 😌. A new idea and great start and their is so much you come up with this idea I recommend everyone to give it a try cause you will have this in your library and waiting for more.
Writing quality is fine . Update stability sucks though character, story development I'd say so and so story kind of rushed, the Character Design is decent, World Background is good no complaints there.
Keep going update some .. nice fanfic bro👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
please don't drop it's a pretty unique story it would've be a shame if it just gets dropped so please don't if it isn't than when will it update
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I like how different it is. I’ve never seen anyone take this route when making a dbz fanfic. Please keep it up, I would love to see more. I always felt like there wasn’t enough dbz fanfics on this site, so it’s good to see you making one.
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just to support the author just to support the author just to support the author just to support the author just to support the author just to support the author
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I like it I like it I like it I like it a lot please don't drop this fanfic novel okay okay [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I Think this story is good so far. And I don’t want to see it dropped I think it is uniqe and fun.
this story looks promising and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.
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