The Alpha VS The Beta

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Chrissie_Swift

Since this isn't the first book by this author that I've read, I know the author is talented. In addition, the description is accurate. Plot is engaging and interesting. The title's simplicity is appealing. I've only read a few pages so far, but I'm eager to read more. Write on, please!

LV 12

Empzze

😮 Wow!! Amazing synopsis, I just started reading and I thought Diana was the good guy, anyway, the plot is so dope and unique with well written chapters, I'm so hooked, Great work author, I'm rooting for you🙌🙌🙌 I definitely need new stuffs in my system.

LV 11

PERWEEN

I'm really intrigued by the fact that this is based upon a fight between the leads and their chemistry. Beta fighting the alpha and all just so new and interesting idea. Looking forward to it and how the stuff unveils!

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zemira_fortunatus

Hai kak aku mampir di karyamu yg satu ini wihh keren bgt kak sungguh sangat menarik ceritanya bikin penasaran alurnya juga bagus banget mudah dipahami dan bikin ingin baca terus semangat kakak

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Hayuayaka

Diana and Arya dating five years and she still doubt. The fact about Diana like Ryan 😂 Oh no, it's bad for Arya. He has temperament. Poor you 😌

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Bebe_San7

I wish I came across this earlier. I love it and Evey chapter just makes me yearn for more. keep it up author. I believe I am not alone in this journey.

Alpha vs Beta?! The only time I've seen this happen is in Teen Wolf. I like the idea of conflict between characters, the personalities are strong and distinct and definitely worth following the story.

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ciko_ciko

I really like the storyline, the characterization of each character and also the setting. Each character has its own characteristics that can make an impression. I cannot wait for next chapter [img=update]

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Amasinner

really terrific and unique novel ,I'm definitely adding this to my lib , love this and I'm looking forward to more from the author 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

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Uwakiya

very good fantasy story. I can imagine what it's like in their world. top already 👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🔥🌸🌸💮💮💮🤗🤗🤗😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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HuangVioren

Wow, your work is great! I love your writing style and the way you convey your imagination to the readers. stay healthy, thor!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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CatHam

4.8 stars. Everything is 5 stars except world background because it's too early to judge it and it seems like a plain modern world. I was actually shocked by the first chapter but now I've gotten used to it as romance novels seem to have much more realistic characters in it. (sorry i couldn't find 'the concubine from 21st century- english' i checked in original works and searched in the search tab, but couldn't find it. Sorry)

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purple_bear22

I like this story, very interesting and makes me so curious with Arya and Ryan. This book is really good and recommended, keep writing Author.

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_Queen_A

Okay, all I can say is I'm loving this already. 👌❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💕💕💖💖💖❤️And you should try it too. 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💕💕💕💕💕💕❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Z3e_zeesty

this story is very recommended and very interesting for to read. I always support you thor. iam waiting the continued of this story[img=recommend]

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Tampan_Berani

The romantic nuance combined with fantasy makes this novel interesting to read. Anyway, I recommend this novel for you to read. Don't forget to leave a comment so that the author is enthusiastic about his work ✨🙏✌️🔥

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Gnaipafe

The premises of the story is great, as well as the plot and character development. There's more room for development in terms of writing and grammar. But it didn't hinder me from reading more. it is still very interesting and I'll say a great story entirely.

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Just_Scissors

There were generally more grammar errors that could hinder the pace of reading and understanding. Author could go back and do some editing, especially the gender pronouns (girl=she, her hers)( boy=he, him, his). The story is nice and the characters are well made. The storyline is unique and has a lot of potential about friends and family.