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U mean "let the romance builds" as a harem right:v? U can make a not forced pokemon harem if u have the skills. Juz asking I juz don't want women to be heart broken becuz of some stupid plot rules. If the side characters accidentally fall in love with our mc don't be a d**k and force them to break up(u r the author so u r like a god in ur book so don't abuse that power and make innocents suffer from being unable unite with their love and assume their love is not true love cuz u manipulate them) :)
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Wonderful, amazing, and entertaining, I highly recommend reading this Novel. I'm looking forward to reading more and more of this and well... a little more.
A good story and has detailed character designs, as well as a pretty good world background. There are only a few flaws in the story development which is quite slow (in my opinion) apart from those flaws, everything is good.[img=recommend][img=update]
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Hey , wake up and read it! This is good story. Talent is showing himself to us! Author, i have small advice for you. Mc must have trump card! He need to escape art . And ... sanctuary . hidden !
İnteresting for now, hopefully stays that way.................................................. ........................................................
An interesting twist of a novel. Main character seems a bit paranoid, or maybe he’s not? Only time will tell. As for the backdrop and structure it is fairly typical of a cultivation novel. But the unique view point of the main character and light comedy make it a refreshing read. Looking forward to how it continues to be fleshed out.
A powerful start with great image created. The plot grows so well throughout the chapters while the picture becomes clearer through those words written. Overall a great read
OK very early Review as of chapter 103 (minor spoilers) Story type: Mc reincarnates as Arrogant master in cultivation world. This kind of story has many choices to choose from: a) Does the Mc auto-get all memories? b) Does he have a despicable past? C) Is he going to be a goodie-two-shoes or something else? d) How strong/smart/cunning/ruthless/karma-powered are the Mcs he has to fight in the novel? d) Do people find out who he is? Are the consequences? e) Does his previous knowledge have use/power ? I'd say so far the story is reasonable. Well written, well paced , and learning about the mc and his new background . In that sense as of chapter 103 no mistakes have been made plot wise by the author. So far so good, but author has a lot of options as to where the story is going, lets hope he doesnt screw it up. To finish it: Good, worthwhile "reincarnated as villain" story. READ IT!
A unique take on a now well-established genre. Author is also very hands on and active so I believe it will create for a better future down the road. I feel like this novel main lack is in the depth of the world, it explores the young master and the very few he interacts with. Almost 100 chapters in and I feel little attachment to the sect and we even have only a handful of named characters introduced. Right now you could find next chapter that 90% die, and as long as his fam live you would be 'oh okay.' Or the opposite where a conflict resolution happens and then you are feeling that someone else is about to be introduced since there really isn't anyone else you know of. Leaving for a journey would also give you lil to no homesickness, since only the broad strokes of a few residences and a concept of an 'outer/inner/core' of the sect has been given. Don't get me wrong since I enjoy this so far, but rather than finding myself getting sucked into the world building I see myself enjoying our young master's unique thought process on how he will be handling these MC's and heavens favorited.
First: I have to say that I'm glad author-san used reincarnation instead of body theft of those so called righteous transmigrators. As a cultivator myself who reincarnated in this mortal world, I'm happy that author-san know how blasphemous the act of body theft is. Second: This novel remember me of History Strongest Senior Brother, where the mc is the so called Young Master, the mid or final boss from the lower realms. It's good to see this approach because this make the mc strong from the start and we don't have to swallow the inumerable luck encounters that mc with poor background need to reach the same height that a Young Master. Third: I hope there are many "protagonists" to appear in the novel against our mc even in the Immortal Realm (if there one or similar in the future). Because what we want to see a Young Master doing is slaping arrogant protagonists! (how in the world the mortals of this world can like arrogants protagonists without a background and only because they are transmigrators/reinccarnators/got a great luck encounter is out of my compreension and maybe a hidden dao of the heavens). 4th: Her senior sister is a yandere? I hope not. 5th: Author-sam, o you tought about using a "female protagonist" as a enemy to the mc? Or if mc can befriend some more moderate "protagonist"? (Arrogant "protagonist" don't need mercy) 6th: Amazing novel, I'll try to vote the power stones in this novel every day o/
This novel is above average with new troupe that's it... and detailed review I will make after 30-40 chapter and I waiting for female main character and I hope there is really a main character or else he paranoid
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This is honestly my first review on this site, and I have to say that this novel deserves it, simply because of the fact that this was such an awesome and pleasant novel to read, my only regret is the that I Burnt through these chapters like a drug addict on his second roll of weed, and If I were to describe what this novel is it would be the equivalent of what KonoSuba is to the Isekai genre, and what this novel is to the rest of the Chinese trash transmigration novels. Keep up the good work Mr. author, as it would be a shame of such a gem like this were to be dropped or abandoned.
I don't write a lot of review even more longish one but this story deserves it. so I will write a relatively detailed one. world building: the story has only 80s chapters but the author already has created a solid foundation for the world building without creating apparent holes nor limiting the routes for its further development. He was able already to give a solid general idea of the world without sterile info dumps. and being able to describe a world setting of a story through the simple development of the plot is impressive, even though the author sometimes cheated a bit through the use of the thoughtful nature of the MC (there are more than a few inner monologues) writing style: author has a grammar better than most other writers here. He has also improved his abilities as a narrator throughout the story. Sone initial imperfections (like the often hidden monologues and a bit of almost being excessive in MC' s complaints about children of the plain) were dealt with easily after an hidden (well not so hidden for people with "high IQ" cit. lol) plot point was partially developed, it made the general writing style fun and refreshing. Characters: Author has worked a lot on fleshing out the characters and I am not talking only about the MC, even the secondary characters (including supposed villains/enemies) are being slowly fleshed out. Same goes for the female characters both the potential lovers and the ones who will be simply close to MC. this last point is important because while there is an harem tag and I don't know how big the harme will be, I have no doubt that even harem haters could love this story because fro what I can read there won't be a collection of dolls for the MC...all the potential love interests/important female characters are being slowly developed and fleshed out and most of all they are talented so no risk of simple dolls/wall flowers following the MC. the MC itself is refreshing he is transmigrated/reincarnated as the top level of the young master of his words but surprise surprise he was never a trash and he is not an arrogant/dumb psycho without emotions or with his brain in his pants so for certain aspects it reminds while being even better than the MC of the senior brother novel. in short it is a worth novel to read no matter if you are looking to simply have fun or to find a serious reading ...the author is good and the story has an absurd overall potential and quality...I truly hope it will be a long story and Mr author can keep writing it until it's "natural ending" without dropping it or going in hiatus
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It is very unique and refreshing with a MC that remembers all the dense/clueless/soft/simple MCs of past stories and learns from them. Not just I read xyz so I know what I am doing, then does the dumbest things in every situation. The interaction with the Niece and Sister are my favorite as they are very realistic and the banter between Huang and Anjing is great
A hidden gem of a novel with a lot of potential. The thing which made me give low rating is the really slow pacing of the novel. 60 chapters in and it's still nothing interesting. The MC used his powers like a maximum of 5 times. There are no concrete FL's except for the senior disciple and his sister? The writing quality and the updates are good, the pacing of the story is bad. You can skip a lot of chapter like the tournament arc and all which make no sense for being there except for some character introductions. I'm not gonna read 10-20 chapters for 2 characters to get introduced...
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First of all, you’re doing great author. I find the book very interesting and fun to read. But if I had to point out something; The MC at the earlier chapters is kind of different from how he is in the later chapters. I personally think that his personality in the later chapters is better. But it is a small detail that you don’t have to think too much about. And the other thing is, I hope that harem doesn’t become something like catching pokemons. It is up to you to decide on the number but I would prefer something small but at the end of the day it is your book so, you don’t have to mind me too much. Just keep going the way you are.
I'm enjoying the novel quite differently from the rest of the farming novels...hope mc screw this Jin Fen because this guy is annoying......
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I read 15 chapters and I just want to know if there really is an mc ........................................................................
I really like the unique development of the story, it shows in how you are very dedicated to your novel and I hope you have good luck :D :D :D
It is very unique and refreshing with a MC that remembers all the dense/clueless/soft/simple MCs of past stories and learns from them. Not just I read xyz so I know what I am doing, then does the dumbest things in every situation. The interaction with the Niece and Sister are my favorite as they are very realistic and the banter between Huang and Anjing is great. The only thing for me is some times the explanation during a scene gets long as there are sometimes 3-4 different explanations for the same thing or explains then explains the explanation. But this is easy to skip over when seen. Over all liking it a lot just starting ch 43.
The writing style screams amateur (atleast till chapter 35 wher i currently am). Don't get me wrong its easy to read and i doubt anyone will find any problems with the grammar. The story doesnt fail to bring smiles to my lips frequently. The world building is massive and kinda confusing bcos of its enormity but I think it'll get more easier to understand as I go on. The story is slow. I know others have said this earlier but still. During one training arc he brokethrough twice in 5 days thats kinda rushed. Not to mention it has been like only a week or a week and a half since he arrived to this world. So maybe stretch the time a little. Overall a great story as far as i have read it. Definitely check it out. Also the MC doesn't have any OP all HACK system(yet) so fingers crossed.
U mean "let the romance builds" as a harem right:v? U can make a not forced pokemon harem if u have the skills. Juz asking I juz don't want women to be heart broken becuz of some stupid plot rules. If the side characters accidentally fall in love with our mc don't be a d**k and force them to break up(u r the author so u r like a god in ur book so don't abuse that power and make innocents suffer from being unable unite with their love and assume their love is not true love cuz u manipulate them) :)
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Wonderful, amazing, and entertaining, I highly recommend reading this Novel. I'm looking forward to reading more and more of this and well... a little more.
A good story and has detailed character designs, as well as a pretty good world background. There are only a few flaws in the story development which is quite slow (in my opinion) apart from those flaws, everything is good.[img=recommend][img=update]
Nice novel............................................................................................................................................................................. .....................
Hey , wake up and read it! This is good story. Talent is showing himself to us! Author, i have small advice for you. Mc must have trump card! He need to escape art . And ... sanctuary . hidden !
İnteresting for now, hopefully stays that way.................................................. ........................................................
An interesting twist of a novel. Main character seems a bit paranoid, or maybe he’s not? Only time will tell. As for the backdrop and structure it is fairly typical of a cultivation novel. But the unique view point of the main character and light comedy make it a refreshing read. Looking forward to how it continues to be fleshed out.
A powerful start with great image created. The plot grows so well throughout the chapters while the picture becomes clearer through those words written. Overall a great read
OK very early Review as of chapter 103 (minor spoilers) Story type: Mc reincarnates as Arrogant master in cultivation world. This kind of story has many choices to choose from: a) Does the Mc auto-get all memories? b) Does he have a despicable past? C) Is he going to be a goodie-two-shoes or something else? d) How strong/smart/cunning/ruthless/karma-powered are the Mcs he has to fight in the novel? d) Do people find out who he is? Are the consequences? e) Does his previous knowledge have use/power ? I'd say so far the story is reasonable. Well written, well paced , and learning about the mc and his new background . In that sense as of chapter 103 no mistakes have been made plot wise by the author. So far so good, but author has a lot of options as to where the story is going, lets hope he doesnt screw it up. To finish it: Good, worthwhile "reincarnated as villain" story. READ IT!
A unique take on a now well-established genre. Author is also very hands on and active so I believe it will create for a better future down the road. I feel like this novel main lack is in the depth of the world, it explores the young master and the very few he interacts with. Almost 100 chapters in and I feel little attachment to the sect and we even have only a handful of named characters introduced. Right now you could find next chapter that 90% die, and as long as his fam live you would be 'oh okay.' Or the opposite where a conflict resolution happens and then you are feeling that someone else is about to be introduced since there really isn't anyone else you know of. Leaving for a journey would also give you lil to no homesickness, since only the broad strokes of a few residences and a concept of an 'outer/inner/core' of the sect has been given. Don't get me wrong since I enjoy this so far, but rather than finding myself getting sucked into the world building I see myself enjoying our young master's unique thought process on how he will be handling these MC's and heavens favorited.
First: I have to say that I'm glad author-san used reincarnation instead of body theft of those so called righteous transmigrators. As a cultivator myself who reincarnated in this mortal world, I'm happy that author-san know how blasphemous the act of body theft is. Second: This novel remember me of History Strongest Senior Brother, where the mc is the so called Young Master, the mid or final boss from the lower realms. It's good to see this approach because this make the mc strong from the start and we don't have to swallow the inumerable luck encounters that mc with poor background need to reach the same height that a Young Master. Third: I hope there are many "protagonists" to appear in the novel against our mc even in the Immortal Realm (if there one or similar in the future). Because what we want to see a Young Master doing is slaping arrogant protagonists! (how in the world the mortals of this world can like arrogants protagonists without a background and only because they are transmigrators/reinccarnators/got a great luck encounter is out of my compreension and maybe a hidden dao of the heavens). 4th: Her senior sister is a yandere? I hope not. 5th: Author-sam, o you tought about using a "female protagonist" as a enemy to the mc? Or if mc can befriend some more moderate "protagonist"? (Arrogant "protagonist" don't need mercy) 6th: Amazing novel, I'll try to vote the power stones in this novel every day o/
This novel is above average with new troupe that's it... and detailed review I will make after 30-40 chapter and I waiting for female main character and I hope there is really a main character or else he paranoid
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This is honestly my first review on this site, and I have to say that this novel deserves it, simply because of the fact that this was such an awesome and pleasant novel to read, my only regret is the that I Burnt through these chapters like a drug addict on his second roll of weed, and If I were to describe what this novel is it would be the equivalent of what KonoSuba is to the Isekai genre, and what this novel is to the rest of the Chinese trash transmigration novels. Keep up the good work Mr. author, as it would be a shame of such a gem like this were to be dropped or abandoned.
I don't write a lot of review even more longish one but this story deserves it. so I will write a relatively detailed one. world building: the story has only 80s chapters but the author already has created a solid foundation for the world building without creating apparent holes nor limiting the routes for its further development. He was able already to give a solid general idea of the world without sterile info dumps. and being able to describe a world setting of a story through the simple development of the plot is impressive, even though the author sometimes cheated a bit through the use of the thoughtful nature of the MC (there are more than a few inner monologues) writing style: author has a grammar better than most other writers here. He has also improved his abilities as a narrator throughout the story. Sone initial imperfections (like the often hidden monologues and a bit of almost being excessive in MC' s complaints about children of the plain) were dealt with easily after an hidden (well not so hidden for people with "high IQ" cit. lol) plot point was partially developed, it made the general writing style fun and refreshing. Characters: Author has worked a lot on fleshing out the characters and I am not talking only about the MC, even the secondary characters (including supposed villains/enemies) are being slowly fleshed out. Same goes for the female characters both the potential lovers and the ones who will be simply close to MC. this last point is important because while there is an harem tag and I don't know how big the harme will be, I have no doubt that even harem haters could love this story because fro what I can read there won't be a collection of dolls for the MC...all the potential love interests/important female characters are being slowly developed and fleshed out and most of all they are talented so no risk of simple dolls/wall flowers following the MC. the MC itself is refreshing he is transmigrated/reincarnated as the top level of the young master of his words but surprise surprise he was never a trash and he is not an arrogant/dumb psycho without emotions or with his brain in his pants so for certain aspects it reminds while being even better than the MC of the senior brother novel. in short it is a worth novel to read no matter if you are looking to simply have fun or to find a serious reading ...the author is good and the story has an absurd overall potential and quality...I truly hope it will be a long story and Mr author can keep writing it until it's "natural ending" without dropping it or going in hiatus
AWSOM!!!!!😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It is very unique and refreshing with a MC that remembers all the dense/clueless/soft/simple MCs of past stories and learns from them. Not just I read xyz so I know what I am doing, then does the dumbest things in every situation. The interaction with the Niece and Sister are my favorite as they are very realistic and the banter between Huang and Anjing is great
A hidden gem of a novel with a lot of potential. The thing which made me give low rating is the really slow pacing of the novel. 60 chapters in and it's still nothing interesting. The MC used his powers like a maximum of 5 times. There are no concrete FL's except for the senior disciple and his sister? The writing quality and the updates are good, the pacing of the story is bad. You can skip a lot of chapter like the tournament arc and all which make no sense for being there except for some character introductions. I'm not gonna read 10-20 chapters for 2 characters to get introduced...
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First of all, you’re doing great author. I find the book very interesting and fun to read. But if I had to point out something; The MC at the earlier chapters is kind of different from how he is in the later chapters. I personally think that his personality in the later chapters is better. But it is a small detail that you don’t have to think too much about. And the other thing is, I hope that harem doesn’t become something like catching pokemons. It is up to you to decide on the number but I would prefer something small but at the end of the day it is your book so, you don’t have to mind me too much. Just keep going the way you are.
I'm enjoying the novel quite differently from the rest of the farming novels...hope mc screw this Jin Fen because this guy is annoying......
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I read 15 chapters and I just want to know if there really is an mc ........................................................................
I really like the unique development of the story, it shows in how you are very dedicated to your novel and I hope you have good luck :D :D :D
It is very unique and refreshing with a MC that remembers all the dense/clueless/soft/simple MCs of past stories and learns from them. Not just I read xyz so I know what I am doing, then does the dumbest things in every situation. The interaction with the Niece and Sister are my favorite as they are very realistic and the banter between Huang and Anjing is great. The only thing for me is some times the explanation during a scene gets long as there are sometimes 3-4 different explanations for the same thing or explains then explains the explanation. But this is easy to skip over when seen. Over all liking it a lot just starting ch 43.
The writing style screams amateur (atleast till chapter 35 wher i currently am). Don't get me wrong its easy to read and i doubt anyone will find any problems with the grammar. The story doesnt fail to bring smiles to my lips frequently. The world building is massive and kinda confusing bcos of its enormity but I think it'll get more easier to understand as I go on. The story is slow. I know others have said this earlier but still. During one training arc he brokethrough twice in 5 days thats kinda rushed. Not to mention it has been like only a week or a week and a half since he arrived to this world. So maybe stretch the time a little. Overall a great story as far as i have read it. Definitely check it out. Also the MC doesn't have any OP all HACK system(yet) so fingers crossed.